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2026屆新高考英語熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)“讀后續(xù)寫”備考以2025年新高考一卷讀后續(xù)寫為例初識(shí)讀后續(xù)寫-----是什么讀后續(xù)寫:提供一段350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料,要求考生根據(jù)所提供的____________和___________________進(jìn)行續(xù)寫;詞數(shù)要求:___________________,將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。材料內(nèi)容兩端開頭語150詞左右讀后續(xù)寫的三大主題人與社會(huì)(溫情或化險(xiǎn)為夷的故事,表達(dá)人間有真情、大愛)人與自我(主角的自我發(fā)展、變化或成長(zhǎng))人與自然(人與自然或動(dòng)物和諧相處)讀后續(xù)寫如何應(yīng)對(duì)——基本步驟讀—審題1.原文2.讀兩段提示語目的themainidea

the5basicelements

who,when,where,what,how續(xù)—構(gòu)思情節(jié)語言生動(dòng),高級(jí)theplotandfeelingthetensethemaincharacterthestyletosolvetheproblems寫—整潔書寫合理的情節(jié)vocabularysentencestructurelinkingwordsstep1:讀要點(diǎn)

step1要點(diǎn)一:定基礎(chǔ)基礎(chǔ)人稱時(shí)態(tài)step1要點(diǎn)2:抓雙線雙線:故事線感情線4W1Hwhowherewhenwhathow要點(diǎn)三:4W1Hstep2注意五框五框:文本最后一段最后一句話(提示下文的發(fā)展)

續(xù)寫部分第一段第一句話(銜接首段提示句)

續(xù)寫部分第一段最后一句話(銜接下一段的首句)

續(xù)寫部分第二段第一句話(銜接第二段提示句)

續(xù)寫部分第二段最后一句話(揭示主題/結(jié)尾)step3:使用四種方法①用提問引導(dǎo)情節(jié)②用動(dòng)作體現(xiàn)情緒③用環(huán)境促進(jìn)故事發(fā)展④用人物互動(dòng)銜接情節(jié)step4:運(yùn)用3大續(xù)寫原則補(bǔ)全續(xù)寫每段的中間內(nèi)容1.Action-Response原則:一個(gè)角色的所言、所行、所感和所想會(huì)引起其他角色的一系列反應(yīng)。每段對(duì)話1-2句,不一定兩個(gè)人都要說話,無聲的動(dòng)作也是一種response。2.Confict-Solution原則:一般而言第二段會(huì)有問題的solution。(第一段出現(xiàn)的問題,根據(jù)第二段的提示句決定第一段是否有解決方案,若沒有,則需要在第二段提出解決方案。)3.Negative-Positive原則:寫作中一定要有情感的變化,無論前面是怎樣的情感,最終都應(yīng)該是積極的寫作指南——三大原則1.原文一致原則內(nèi)容要前后銜接,上下連貫語言表達(dá)風(fēng)格一致。2.曲折性原則凡是故事都應(yīng)有跌宕起伏其中人物會(huì)遇到困難或問題,但最終能解決。3.正能量原則故事內(nèi)容一定要正能量,弘揚(yáng)社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀。如迷路了但最終一定回到了家;失敗了或遇到困難了,但最終一定成功了;吵架了但最后一定是言歸于好,和睦相處;犯錯(cuò)了,最后一定會(huì)改過自新,重新做人;賊逃了,最后一定是繩之以法等等。Step5增加加分項(xiàng)如何讓句子具體而生動(dòng)?1.將動(dòng)作描寫細(xì)致化并使用動(dòng)作鏈sbdidA,didBanddidCsbdidA,doingBanddoingC先/因HavingdoneA,sbdidBandC(后/果)2.用表示情緒的形容詞做狀語例:Depressedandhelpless,hecriedout.(原因、伴隨)3.使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)例:Sheraisedherheadandstaredatmesorrowfully,herfacepale.4.無靈主語例:HerfacelitupwhenItoldhertheexcitingnews5.使用定從,名詞性從句,虛擬語氣等寫出主人公的五個(gè)“所”所見所說所思所做所感以2025年新高考一卷讀后續(xù)寫為例找時(shí)間Whendid/doesthestoryhappen?決定續(xù)寫需要用的時(shí)態(tài):一般過去時(shí)2025(I卷)MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise–ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.Tense:simplepasttense(一般過去時(shí))確定人稱Whomadethestoryhappen?決定續(xù)寫的人稱:第一人稱

第二人稱

第三人稱2025(I卷)MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise–ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.人稱:第一人稱,第三人稱找地點(diǎn)Wheredid/doesthestoryhappen?2025(I卷)MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise–ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.Place:inmynewhome利用4W了解情節(jié)&主題whathappened?Elements(whathappened?)whenintheearlysummerwhereinmyhouseandinmybrother’shousewhoI,mywife,mybrotherandTobywhatTheauthoraskedhisbrothertokeepthedogoutsideatagathering,laterrealizingheshouldapologize故事脈絡(luò)Howwouldithappen?用提問引導(dǎo)情節(jié)—預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫思路與銜接融合Paral.Irealizeditwasmewhowasfault.Ql:Whatspecificactionsofminehurtmybrother?Q2:Afterrealizingmymistake,whatkindofstrugglesandconflictsdidIhaveinside?Q3:WhatspecificactionsdoIplantotketoapologizetomybrother?Para2.Withthebiscuitsmywifehadnade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Q4:Whenmybrotheropensthedoorandseesme,whatkindofexpressionandreactionwillhehave?Q5:HowwillIstarttoexpressmyapologytomybrother?Q6:SeeingthatIcometoapologizewiththebiscuits,willmybrotherforgiveme?Iheldafamilyget-togetheratournewhomewithmywife.MybrotherwascomingwithhisdogToby,andtherewouldbechildrenattheparty.Opening介紹:Thedogwasrunningaroundinthebackyardwhilethechildrenplayed.Thenitstartedtorainheavily.Everyonerushedinside,butIrefusedtoletTobyin,worriedhemightbotherthechildren.MybrothergotangryandleftwithToby.Fortwomonths,mybrotherdidn'tcontactme.Ifeltbadbutcouldn'tfindawaytobreaktheice.Thenmywiferemindedmeofmybrother'ssituation:hehadlosthiswifeandwasill,andTobywashisonlycompany.Idecidedtoapologize.Climax高潮Resolution解決:Build-up發(fā)展:故事脈絡(luò)Ending結(jié)尾:Mybrotherforgaveme.Wesattogether,enjoyingthebiscuits,andourrelationshipwasmended.思維導(dǎo)圖確定續(xù)寫內(nèi)容家庭聚會(huì)風(fēng)波信息識(shí)別和整理邏輯推理和創(chuàng)新關(guān)鍵信息1:哥哥帶狗(Toby)參加家庭聚會(huì),因Toby體型大可能傷到孩子,我要求哥哥讓狗待在戶外。關(guān)鍵信息2:晚飯后下雨,眾人進(jìn)屋,我不讓Toby進(jìn)屋,哥哥不滿,最終決定離開。關(guān)鍵信息3:幾天后我邀請(qǐng)哥哥再次聚會(huì),他回復(fù)“不可能”,顯然對(duì)上次的分別方式不滿。關(guān)鍵信息4:幾個(gè)月過去,妻子建議我聯(lián)系哥哥,我因面子抗拒,但良心受譴責(zé),因?yàn)楦绺缯媾R健康問題,且妻子去世后Toby是他的精神支柱。推理判斷1:哥哥開門后的反應(yīng)大概率會(huì)從冷漠開始,畢竟之前矛盾較深,但看到我主動(dòng)道歉且?guī)еY物,可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)態(tài)度緩和的微妙轉(zhuǎn)變,如語氣放緩,眼神動(dòng)搖等推理判斷2:道歉過程中,若我能真誠地表達(dá)對(duì)Toby在哥哥生活中重要性的理解,并為自己的疏忽道歉,哥哥很可能會(huì)原諒我。之后關(guān)系修復(fù)可通過共同回憶過往,關(guān)心哥哥健康,接納Toby等方式逐步實(shí)現(xiàn),甚至Toby可能成為我們關(guān)系升溫的紐帶參考范文賞析Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Ishouldn'thavebeensoinconsiderateofmybrother'sfeelings.

Tobywasn'tjustadog;hewasmybrother'semotionalsupportduringthosetoughtimes.Ifeltextreme

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