1、專題復(fù)習(xí) 短文改錯,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例1 2014遼寧卷 Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking.,解析 此句是名詞的單、復(fù)數(shù)不一致錯誤。time由several修飾，故應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式times。,常見錯誤(1)“不一致性”錯誤 主要包括：主、謂語不一致；時態(tài)不一致；語態(tài)不一致；名詞的單、復(fù)數(shù)不一致；代詞指代不一致；搭配不一致等。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例2 2014新課標(biāo)全國卷 We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening to m

2、usic.,解析 此句是時態(tài)不一致錯誤。此句是or 連接的并列句，所以sat 應(yīng)與lie保持一致，故sat應(yīng)改為sit。,例3 2014四川卷 If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.,解析 此句是代詞指代不一致錯誤。根據(jù)語境可知老師是領(lǐng)“你們”進教室，故將us改為you。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,常見錯誤(2)“行文邏輯”錯誤 這種錯誤主要是運用行文邏輯，考查連接手段。謹(jǐn)記兩種句式：并列句(并列連詞)，復(fù)合句(從屬連詞)；六種關(guān)系：轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，選擇關(guān)系，層遞

3、關(guān)系，并列關(guān)系，因果關(guān)系，同位關(guān)系；一種變化：語義的曲折變化(如：肯定與否定，方位與時空的轉(zhuǎn)移等)。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例4 2014浙江卷 A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.,解析 此句是行文邏輯錯誤。根據(jù)句意可知，前后分句之間是順承關(guān)系，故將but改為and。,例5 2014新課標(biāo)全國卷 weallowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please. As a result, the plants are growing somewhere.,

4、解析 此句是行文邏輯錯誤。根據(jù)前后語境可知，這種植物“到處”都種植而非“某處”，故將somewhere改為everywhere。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,常見錯誤(3)“平行結(jié)構(gòu)”錯誤 平行結(jié)構(gòu)是指兩個或更多的詞、詞組或從句具有相似或相等的句法功能。在表達相互平行的概念時，要使用相同的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，即動詞與動詞相配，形容詞與形容詞相配，分詞與分詞相配，不定式與不定式相配，短語與短語相配。平行結(jié)構(gòu)經(jīng)常借助于并列連詞and，but，or或連詞詞組not onlybut also，notbut，eitheror，neithernor，as well as等來連接。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例6 2014四川卷

5、Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly.,解析 此句是不平行錯誤。根據(jù)句法可知， trying在時態(tài)上應(yīng)和panic和get保持一致，故應(yīng)用動詞原形try。calmly的形式應(yīng)與前面的quiet保持一致，故將calmly改為calm。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例7 On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and

6、buy plants and young trees.,解析 此句是狀語的不平行錯誤。根據(jù)句法可知，buy應(yīng)和to pay gardeners保持一致，故buy前應(yīng)加to。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,常見錯誤(4)“詞性、詞形”錯誤 主要包括名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)變化、代詞的詞形變化以及形容詞和副詞的詞形變化。弄清詞性與詞性之間的相互修飾關(guān)系。比如：形容詞修飾名詞，副詞修飾形容詞、動詞、分詞等。,例8 2014新課標(biāo)全國卷 The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.,解析 此句是詞性錯誤。taste 應(yīng)該在詞性上與small, juicy 保持一致，作

7、be動詞的表語，用形容詞，故將taste改為tasty。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例9 2014浙江卷 No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.,解析 此句是詞性錯誤。修飾過去分詞應(yīng)用副詞詞性，故將previous 改為previously。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,常見錯誤(5)“動詞的變化”錯誤 主要包括時態(tài)的詞形變化、被動語態(tài)的詞形變化、非謂語動詞的詞形變化以及第三人稱單數(shù)等。,例10 2014遼寧卷 It is difficult to understanding

8、why she barks every minute shes outside.,解析 此句是非謂語動詞錯誤。根據(jù)句式結(jié)構(gòu)可知，本句需要動詞不定式作主語，故understanding應(yīng)改為understand。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例11 2014陜西卷 One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue.,解析 此句是非謂語動詞錯誤。根據(jù)句式結(jié)構(gòu)可知，have應(yīng)是主句謂語的一個伴隨動作，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,常見錯誤(6)“特殊疑問詞”“連詞”和“引導(dǎo)詞”錯誤 特別是which和that引導(dǎo)定語從句、抽象

9、名詞后面常常跟that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句等。,例12 This is how I need to improve in the future.,解析 此句是引導(dǎo)詞錯誤。根據(jù)句意“這是我將來所需要提高的地方”可知，how應(yīng)改為what或where。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例13 That is which other teachers say.,解析 此句是引導(dǎo)詞錯誤。表示其他老師的說話內(nèi)容要用what，what引導(dǎo)表語從句并作say的賓語。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,常見錯誤(7) “多詞”錯誤 多詞錯誤一般有如下幾種類型：1)受母語思維的影響，出現(xiàn)漢語式結(jié)構(gòu)，造成沉言；2)不明詞義內(nèi)涵，造成詞義重疊；

10、3)介詞多余；4)助動詞、系動詞多余；5)多冠詞；6)定語從句中的成分重復(fù)；7)程度副詞和頻率副詞，如 much，more，often等的多余；8)多余小品詞to等。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例14 2014新課標(biāo)全國卷 There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.,解析 此句是冠詞多余錯誤。根據(jù)語境可知，flowers and trees 均為“泛指”，故去掉flowers前的定冠詞the,例15 2014新課標(biāo)全國卷 Although we allow tomato plants to

11、grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.,解析 此句是連詞多余錯誤。句中已有連詞although 所以but為多余詞匯，故可把but直接去掉或改為yet。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,常見錯誤(8)“缺詞”錯誤 常見的缺詞現(xiàn)象有：1)缺系動詞；2) 缺介詞；3) 缺冠詞、物主代詞等限定詞；4) 在定語從句中缺關(guān)系代詞或關(guān)系副詞；5) 缺連接詞； 6) 缺否定詞； 7) 缺不定式符號to等。,例16 2014陜西卷 He wanted teach

12、 me about animals, insects and trees.,解析 此句是小品詞to缺失錯誤。want是一個接不定式作賓語的動詞，故teach前應(yīng)加to。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,例17 2014浙江卷 Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows,解析 此句是介詞缺失錯誤。search for意為“尋找”，根據(jù)句意“每個人開始尋找”可知，search后要加for 。,返回目錄,應(yīng)試點睛,三、 尊重解題步驟 1.

13、 通讀全文，掌握大意 2. 整句理解，逐行分析 3. 復(fù)讀全文，檢查核對,專題二十九記敘文型 短文改錯,真 題 典 例,新 題 預(yù) 測,返回目錄,返回目錄,專題二十九記敘文型短文改錯,真 題 典 例,2014新課標(biāo)全國卷 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第

14、11處起)不計分。,返回目錄,專題二十九記敘文型短文改錯,真 題 典 例,Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果) in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere.

15、The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbours. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,返

16、回目錄,專題二十九記敘文型短文改錯,真 題 典 例,返回目錄,課堂專練,I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They ar

17、e quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food saf

18、ety.,返回目錄,課堂專練,專題三十議論文型短文改錯,真 題 典 例,新 題 預(yù) 測,返回目錄,返回目錄,專題三十議論文型短文改錯,真 題 典 例,Some students believe that whether they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they wanted to do if they have money. Some students think that they should b

19、e good health, and enjoy whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way, they dont have to work hardly and they can own everything. I dont quite agree on the above points. I dont think money means happy. We cannot buy much things with money, such as health

20、, happiness and knowledge. I value knowledge, it makes me happy, for I can do a lot of for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, me wealth of happiness is in my study.,返回目錄,專題三十議論文型短文改錯,真 題 典 例,返回目錄,課堂專練,Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me tw

21、o week ago. I have been thinking about a question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after finish your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easy for you find a good job. In fact, I knew a few big companies in our

22、 city hope to hire people like you. For another one reason, I think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents but they are getting old. But this is only my point of view. It is up to you to make a right choice.,返回目錄,課堂專練,專題三十一議論文型 短文改錯,真 題 典 例,新 題 預(yù) 測,返回目錄,返回目錄,真 題 典 例,My dream s

23、chool starts at 8：30 am and ends at 3：30 pm. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

24、My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.,專題三十一說明文型短文改錯,返回

25、目錄,真 題 典 例,專題三十一說明文型短文改錯,返回目錄,課堂專練,Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be the quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory pr

26、oduces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. Whats bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.,返回目錄,

27、課堂專練,專題三十二應(yīng)用文型 短文改錯,真 題 典 例,新 題 預(yù) 測,返回目錄,返回目錄,專題三十二應(yīng)用文型短文改錯,真 題 典 例,Dear Jeremy and Alice， Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo. Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts ba