1、,話題寫作（七） 快樂(lè)成長(zhǎng),第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理,【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題主要包括成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程、成長(zhǎng)煩惱及成長(zhǎng)感悟等。 涉及的要點(diǎn): 1.成長(zhǎng)體驗(yàn)及感悟; 2.成長(zhǎng)煩惱與困惑; 3.關(guān)于更好地成長(zhǎng)的方法與建議。,你的初中生活即將結(jié)束。此時(shí)此刻,正是回顧過(guò)去,展望未來(lái)之際。請(qǐng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活的感受和對(duì)高中生活的向往。短文須包括如下要點(diǎn): (1)師生關(guān)系; (2)學(xué)業(yè)成就; (3)生活樂(lè)趣; (4)感受初中; (5)向往高中。,注意 (1)語(yǔ)言通順,要點(diǎn)齊全,意思連貫,條理清楚; (2)詞數(shù):100左右。,【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1.要點(diǎn)提煉:主題是回顧初中生活,展望高中生活。文章有兩個(gè)要點(diǎn): (

2、1)回顧初中生活; (2)展望高中生活。 2.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。 3.確定人稱:第一人稱。,【寫作架構(gòu)】,【基礎(chǔ)寫作】 .寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補(bǔ)全下列各句。) 1.我甚至一度進(jìn)入我們班的前三名。(get into; the top) I even in our class once. 2.我已經(jīng)在常規(guī)課程上取得了巨大進(jìn)步。(make progress) Ive in regular academic classes. 3.我也喜歡做其他的事情,包括參加各種俱樂(lè)部。(including) I also enjoy myself in doing other things, .,

3、got into the top three,made huge progress,including joining various clubs,.句子升格(按括號(hào)中的要求改寫句子。) 1.Theyve accompanied me for more than 1,000 days. Its quite unbelievable.(用形式主語(yǔ)it改寫句子) 2.They helped me make huge progress in regular academic classes, especially English and maths.(用with ones help 改寫句子),It

4、s quite unbelievable that theyve accompanied me for more than 1,000 days.,With their great help, Ive made huge progress in regular academic classes, especially English and maths.,3.My senior high school will be more meaningful.(用I believe改寫句子),I believe that my senior high school will be more meanin

5、gful.,【連句成文】 Ill graduate from my junior school. At the moment of looking back at the three years and looking forward to the senior high school life, many words have come to my mind. The first to pop into my mind are my teachers. Its quite unbelievable that theyve accompanied me for more than 1,000

6、days. Frankly speaking, we are more than teachers to students, but friends, I suppose. With their great help, Ive made huge progress in regular academic classes, especially English and maths. Whats more, I even got into the top three in our class once. Besides study, I also enjoy myself in doing oth

7、er things, including,joining various clubs, doing sports with my nice classmates and the staff. However, those golden days full of laughter and tears are gone. In a word, my junior school life is an unforgettable experience. And I believe my senior high school life will be more meaningful.,【參考諺語(yǔ)】 1.

8、Time flies.時(shí)光易逝。 2.All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。 3.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上無(wú)難事,只要肯登攀。 4.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。,【亮點(diǎn)句型】 導(dǎo)入主題句 1.As we know,there are many ways to realize our dreams. 2.Every coin has two sides.There is not only sadness but also happiness in

9、 our life. But what should we do to have a happy life? 3.There is no doubt that everyone has to face difficulties in his life. We should treat them in a proper way. 4.People always say that life cant go on well all the time because we will meet all kinds of difficulties.,文章發(fā)展、過(guò)渡句 1.First of all, we

10、need to realize that difficulty is a part of life and we should get used to it. 2.Next, we should be positive to find out ways to deal with the difficulties we meet. 3.On the other hand, we should find the happiness around us by heart. 4.Whats more, we should believe in ourselves.,文章結(jié)尾句 1.No matter

11、what we suffer, we should still believe that the harvest after the effort is beyond our expectation. 2.No matter what you do, the most important thing is to enjoy the process instead of the result. 3.The pleasure we get makes us proud. 4.In my opinion, when we face the difficult time, we should cons

12、ider it as a test for us and when we get through it, we will gain valuable experience.,A Write at least 60 words on the topic “Theres Always Hope”. (以“常懷希望”為題,寫一篇不少于60詞的短文)。 面臨困惑的時(shí)候,經(jīng)歷變化的時(shí)候,感覺(jué)挫敗的時(shí)候,遭遇逆境的時(shí)候來(lái)自內(nèi)心的堅(jiān)持、他人的幫助、社會(huì)的關(guān)愛(ài)和科技的發(fā)展等,總能讓人常懷希望。請(qǐng)選取一個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕睦斫?可結(jié)合自身或他人的經(jīng)歷)。,(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息。) The

13、 following is for reference only.(以下表達(dá)僅供參考) J get out of difficultyJ givea hand J never lose hope,One possible version: Theres Always Hope Hope is always there, in our hearts. Just keep it in mind and well achieve all our dreams one day. When I was in Grade 7, I always did very badly in maths. And I

14、 even got seven points in a maths test. That made me feel very sad. I wanted to give it up at that time, but my parents and my teacher tried to encourage me. They said to me, “Never lose hope! We believe youll become the top student later if you do your best to study maths.” I followed their advice,

15、 and I put my heart into maths all the time. Finally, I succeeded! Nowadays Im confident in all my subjects.,For me, the key to success is simple but powerfultheres always hope.,B2019北京改編 自律,即自我約束,是自我提升的一種途徑,有助于我們成長(zhǎng),促使我們不斷前行。 某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“自律”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪?qiáng)自律意識(shí),你做過(guò)什么,以及這樣做給你帶來(lái)的好處。 要

16、求(1)詞數(shù):不少于50詞(文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)); (2)所給提示詞僅供選用; (3)請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。,提示詞語(yǔ)self-disciplined(自律的),plan,goal,habit,improve 提示問(wèn)題What did you do to be self-disciplined? What benefits have you got from doing so? Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.,One possible version: Self-discipline plays an imp

17、ortant role in our life. It makes me a better student at school and a better child at home. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance hous

18、ework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the tasks, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. In society, I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.,I have benefited a lot from being self-disciplined. First of all, I have had many good habits, whi