1、,Writing for English Majors,1,TEM-4,聽力部分（30%）：含15%全文聽寫+5%對(duì)話+5%短文+5%新聞 詞匯語法部分（25%）：含10%完型+15%詞匯語法題 閱讀部分（20%）：四篇精讀 寫作部分（25%）：含10%便條寫作+15%作文,2,寫作,1）要求根據(jù)所出的題目和列出的寫作提綱或圖表、數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)表等寫一篇200詞左右的短文。能做到內(nèi)容切題、完整、條理清楚，文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語法正確，語言通順恰當(dāng)?？荚嚂r(shí)間為35分鐘。 2）便條寫作： 根據(jù)要求提示寫大約50-60詞的通知、便條、請(qǐng)?zhí)?。要求格式正確，語言得體?？荚嚂r(shí)間10分鐘。,3,寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),思想內(nèi)容

2、（50%）：觀點(diǎn)是否正確，例證是否恰當(dāng)。 組織結(jié)構(gòu)（10%）：細(xì)節(jié)安排是否有條理，段落之間的聯(lián)系是否自然。 語法（20%）：句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否有錯(cuò)誤，拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、大小寫等有無錯(cuò)誤。引用原文不超過10%。 用詞（15%）：用詞（包括習(xí)慣用語）是否準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)。 得體（5%）：語言是否得體，語氣是否恰當(dāng)、有說服力,4,Arrangement of this course,Lectures she knows she can attend to punctuation and grammar later.,13,Activity 1,5. At several points in the essay, Di

3、ane revises on the spot to make images more : She changes “ is sticky” to “seems coated with rubber cement,” “market” to “ Seven-Eleven”, and “ cups of soda” to “cups of crushed ice and soda.” 6. Near the end of her essay, Diane cant think of added details to insert so she simply puts the letters “

4、“ at that point to remind herself to “be specific” in the next draft. She then goes on to finish her first draft.,14,Activity 1,7. Her is as brief as her introduction. Diane knows she can round off her essay more fully during revision.,15,Revising,Three stages to the revising process: Revising conte

5、nt Revising sentences Editing,16,Revising Content,To revise the content of your essay, ask these questions: 1. Is my paper unified? - Thesis that is clearly stated or implied in the introductory paragraph of my essay? - All supporting paragraphs truly support and back up my thesis? 2. Is my paper su

6、pported? Are there three separate supporting points for the thesis? Do I have specific evidence for each of the three supporting points? Is there plenty of specific evidence for each supporting point?,17,Revising,3. Is my paper organized? Do I have an interesting introduction, a solid conclusion, an

7、d an accurate title? Do I have a clear method of organizing my paper Do I use transitions and other connecting words?,18,Revising Sentences,To revise sentences in your essay, ask yourself” Do I use parallelism to balance my words and ideas? Do I have a consistent point of view? Do I use specific wor

8、ds? Do I use active verbs? Do I use effectively by avoiding slang, clichs, pretentious language, and wordiness? Do I vary my sentences?,19,20,21,22,23,24,look,glance,peep,scan,watch,stare,glare,25,交通工具 transportation tools 懂得許多知識(shí) know a lot of knowledge 吃了一大口 eat a big mouth,transport,have a good co

9、mmand of,devour,詞匯選擇標(biāo)新立異,1)這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。 A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street. 2)在周末我們做很多作業(yè)。 A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do. B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do. 3)洗澡間和廚房都很好。 A: The bathroom and the kitchen

10、are good. B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.,27,word,concrete,accurate,How to achieve those goals?,Suggestion,Read more books, take some notes Look up dictionaries Oxford Advanced Learners dictionary Longman English dictionary Oxford Collocations English Idioms dictionary,28,Reading

11、 For Writing,Reading List Three Passions Bertrand Russell Thank You Alex Haley Shame Dick Gregory I became Her Target Roger Wilkins Smash Thy Neighbor John McMurtry In My Day Russell Baker,29,Reading For Writing,A Legendary Moment Haven Kimmel The Professor Is a Dropout Beth Johnson The Monster Deems Taylor Why Are Students Turned Off? Casey Banas Propaganda Techniques in Todays Advertising Ann McClintock,30,Reading for Writing,Bombs Bursting in Air Beth Johnson Heres to Your Health Joan Dunayer How to Make It in College