1、2015年學大教育藝考生課程作文第七十三講精彩結尾總結適用學科英語適用年級高三適用區(qū)域全國通用課時時長（分鐘）1課時/60分鐘知識點強調句用法；名詞性從句教學目標知識：1、掌握強調句用法及名詞性從句的用法。方法：牢記強調句的用法，并能靈活運用。能力：根據(jù)作文要求精確選擇合適的單詞及漢語邏輯進行表達。教學重點1、強調句及其變式，名詞性從句。教學難點1、從句陳述語序及擴展特點教學過程一、 課堂導入好的開頭讓人眼前一亮，而好的結尾則更能讓閱卷人確定自己的判斷，從這個意義上，我們可以斷定：一個好的結尾會讓文章有最大意義上的升華。收尾呼應的結果會讓文章變得意氣風發(fā)，而非簡單的狗尾續(xù)貂或畫蛇添足，這里有著

2、本質的差異。本節(jié)的強調句及讓步狀語從句的特點用法則會更容易讓結尾變得經典無比。二、復習預習教師引導學生分析目前寫作文中遇到的無奈結尾，通過分析的結果讓學生更理解結尾的意義和特點。注意：很多的結尾都是增加了一個看似有用實際沒用的東西thank you，這是實在無奈的補充單詞。如何讓結尾更佳經典，更能讓我們變得自信和認真去學習呢？本節(jié)的任務就是尋找這樣結尾的尋求之旅。三、知識講解知識點1：強調句的用法本節(jié)講解的強調句由what matters結構轉化而來，其他結構均由此結構衍化而來。1. It is not A that matters, but B, from which we can see

3、that 翻譯：不是A最重要，而是B，由此我們可以看到注意：A/B/Ving/to do/從句/名詞/代詞 A/B/Ved/句子/because結構 如：It is not how many books you have read that matters, but how much you have learned from the books, from which we can see that how much you have learned has nothing to do with the number of the books you have read.2. 【考查點】如從

4、句主語為從句，則必須陳述語序。如：It is not what you were that matters, but what you are, from which we can see that we only care about what you are, instead of what you were.3. 該句式還可衍化為：It is not only A that matters, but B, from which we can see that不僅僅是A最重要，而且B，由此我們可以看到如：It is not only that you should work hard th

5、at matters, but that you should make a right choice, from which we can see that working hard as well as making right choice is very important. 不僅僅是你需要努力工作最重要，而且你還需要做正確的抉擇，由此我們可以看到努力工作和做正確抉擇都很重要。4.同時本句中的matter也可以被替換成為其他動詞（同what matters most in A is B中的替換）如： It is not only that he has won the game tha

6、t impresses us a lot, but that he has helped so many people, from which we can see that we should praise him. 不僅僅是他已經贏得這場比賽使我們印象深刻，而且他已經幫了這么多人，由此我們可以看到我們應該表揚他。 It is not only how much you eat that is good for your health, but whether the food contains nutrition, from which we can see that nutrition

7、is very important. 不僅僅你吃的東西對你健康有好處，而且還有一個，是否食物包含營養(yǎng)，由此我們可以看到營養(yǎng)是非常重要的?！咀魑慕浀浣Y尾】用it is not A that matters,but B這句話寫成的這樣，可以作為大量作文的固定結尾：It is not how much we say that matters, but what we do,from which we can see that it is time that we took measures.不是我們說了多少話最重要，而是我們做了什么，由此我們可以看到是我們該采取措施時候了。無論是植樹、幫助老人、參與

8、活動、保護環(huán)境、尊敬師長、遵守交規(guī)等等，都可以作為結尾。知識點2：讓步狀語從句本節(jié)講解的讓步狀語從句為： adj/adv/V/N(前不用冠詞)+as+主+謂 翻譯：盡管怎么樣Excellent as he is, he works hard into late night.1.【易錯點】as的前面不可以出現(xiàn)冠詞。如：Child as he is, he could help us. VS,from which we can see that+陳述句，because of which we can see that+陳述句It is not A that matters, but B, It i

9、s not only A that matters, but B, adj/adv/V/N(前不用冠詞)+as+主+謂 知識點3：兩個句式結合的寫法例1：（此處強調讓學生看到字數(shù)的統(tǒng)計和寫作時間的把控）It is not A that matters, but B，from which we can see that+adj/adv/V/N(前不用冠詞)+as+主+謂It is not where you are from that matters, but whether you can help us with our job, from which we can see that far

10、 as you are from us, your help is of great importance to us.例2：It is not A that matters, but B，from which we can see that+adj/adv/V/N(前不用冠詞)+as+主+謂It is not only that we should take measures to protect our environment that matters, but that we should tell more people the importance of protecting the

11、 environment, from which we can see that small as it is, our effort will do much benefit to our environment.四、例題精析【例題1】翻譯：盡管很聰明，他還是努力學習。_【答案】Clever as he is, he works very hard. 【解析】本題考察的讓步狀語從句中的關于結構使用的問題，此處將clever提前，其他詞語繼續(xù)往后順延，加上主句，切記此處必須有主句?！纠}2】翻譯：It is not how many books you have read that matte

12、rs, but whether there is a book worth reading again, from which we can see that owning a good book is more important than the number of the books. _【答案】不是你讀了多少書最重要，而是是否有一本書值得再讀，由此我們可以看到擁有一本好書要比書的數(shù)量更重要?！窘馕觥勘绢}考查對于本節(jié)結構的掌握和了解，并注意從句中主語的翻譯和worth的用法翻譯?！纠}3】翻譯：不是你吃了多少最重要，而是你吃的東西是否對你的健康有好處，由此可見食物的營養(yǎng)(nutritio

13、n)最重要。 _【答案】It is not how much you eat that matters, but whether what you eat is good for your health, from which we can see the nutrition is very important.【解析】本題考查對本節(jié)句式的熟練掌握和單詞的選擇，其中的從句作主語的用法非常普遍，一定多加關注?！窘浀浣Y尾】Small as it is, A will make a great importance.A名詞、代詞、Ving等 注：本句子可以適用于關鍵說明點的所有結構之中，對于文章的衍

14、化提升有著非常重要的點題作用。五、課堂運用【基礎】1.翻譯：是你寫過多少文章最重要，而是是有一篇值得珍藏，由此可見文章的質量是非常重要的，而不是文章的數(shù)量；_【答案】It is not how many articles you have written that matters, but whether there is one that is worth collecting, from which we can see that the quality of the article is very important, instead of the quantity.【解析】考查句式的掌

15、握和詞匯的選用。2翻譯：不是生活中你遇到多少困難最重要，而是你是否一直在想辦法解決它們，由此而見態(tài)度是最重要的；_【答案】It is not how many difficulties you meet that matters, but whether you are finding ways to solve them, from which we can see that attitude is very important.【解析】考查對句式的理解和翻譯，同時考察學生對于詞匯的選用和掌握。3翻譯Heavily as it rains, I come. _【答案】即使下大雨，我還是會來。

16、【解析】as倒裝結構的翻譯為“盡管怎么樣”?！眷柟獭?. 翻譯Delicious as the tomato is, you can not eat it too much._【答案】盡管西紅柿很好吃，但你不能吃太多?！窘馕觥侩m然漢語中可以說“雖然但是”，但英語中卻不能出現(xiàn)這種搭配。5. 翻譯：不是你買什么樣牌子的手機最重要，而是這部手機是否能給你帶來便利，由此我們可以看到便利是最重要的。_【答案】It is not which kind of brand of cellphone you buy that matters, but whether this cellphone can bri

17、ng you convenience, from which we can see that being convenient is of great importance.【解析】注意本句后半句的“非常重要”可譯為“of+抽象名詞”結構。6.翻譯：不是你是否買禮物最重要，而是你是否真正誠懇，由此可見，雖然禮物很小，你的情誼確實最珍貴的。_【答案】It is not whether you buy gifts that matters, but whether you are sincere, from which we can see that small as your gift is,

18、your wish is of great value.【解析】兩個結構套在一起使用，注意其中的搭配原則?！景胃摺?.最近，有一批美國學生將要參觀你校自行車俱樂部，校方要求你給他們介紹一下自行車俱樂部的情況。請按以下要點寫一篇發(fā)言稿。 1是交友和鍛煉的場所； 2每周兩次訓練課； 3提供免費專業(yè)騎車設備； 4可參加市里比賽； 5感興趣的均可報名。 注意：1詞數(shù)：100左右；2可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫； 3開頭結尾已為你寫好(不計總數(shù))。 參考詞匯：自行車俱樂部 Cycling C1ub Good morning，dear friendsWelcome to our schoo1 _ 任務：請用

19、本節(jié)的某個結構寫出文中需要的關于讓步狀語從句使用的表達。_【答案】It is not how many clubs you have taken part in that matters, but whether you can enjoy free training as well as free equipment, from which we can see that small as our club is, it is your best choice to join in us. (45 words) 【解析】說出參加本俱樂部的優(yōu)勢為本文非常重要的一個步驟，故在寫作時候一定考慮到文

20、章的需要和目前具備句式的關系，尋找其契合點,同時注意將文章中需要體現(xiàn)的意思一定體現(xiàn)到位。8. 據(jù)高考不到六十天的時間了，很多高考生家長都為孩子請來高考保姆，學校掛高考倒計時牌，每天上午、下午第一節(jié)課前，由老師帶領全班學生喊口號對于家長和學校的這些做法人們褒貶不一。請根據(jù)以上說明、寫作要點和寫作要求，為?？坝⒄Z角”版面寫一篇短文。寫作要點：1贊成者觀點；2反對者觀點；3自己的觀點。 任務：請用本節(jié)的某個結構寫出文中需要的關于強調句使用的表達。_【答案】It is not how much parents do for their children that matters, but wheth

21、er the children can get a good state for the coming exam,from which we can see that where there is a place where students really get a good state of mind for the coming exam, there is success. So I believe small as it is, creating a comfortable life for children is of great importance.【解析】根據(jù)文章意思選擇合適

22、句式，文章中體現(xiàn)的就是父母幫助孩子的利與弊，故在選擇句型的時候必須考慮文章的主題意思。9. 根據(jù)下圖寫出你的看法。_【答案】From the picture we can see that it is not how hard you work that matters, but whether you can get a right direction, from which we can see that small as it is, finding a right way for your work is of great importance, instead of working hard only.【解析】在結尾需要表達重點意思的時候，兩句的套用將起到非常重要的作用。課程小結本節(jié)課主要圍繞關于強調句結構和讓步狀語從句結構進行的說明和闡述，對于文章的結尾方式進行了較為固化形式的處理，給寫作中帶來更大的便利，一定注意詞匯的選擇和邏輯的梳理，讓文章處在一種良性的循環(huán)之中，給作文起到畫龍點睛的作用。課后作業(yè)【基礎】1.翻譯：Late as he is, he is forgiven. _【答案】盡管來晚了，他還是能被原諒。【解析】本題考查學生對于結構的掌握和應用，用學生對于詞匯的感知及對于漢語的了解進行翻譯，容易調