1、,話題寫作（十） 健康生活,第一篇教材考點梳理,【話題點睛】 針對的話題主要是體育鍛煉和健康飲食。 體育鍛煉主要涉及:開展體育鍛煉的方式;鼓勵多進行體育運動,強身健體等。 健康飲食主要涉及:遠離垃圾食品,健康飲食的好處及具體做法等。,“民以食為天”,飲食的安全和健康受到越來越多的關(guān)注和重視。請你以“Say No to Junk Food”為題,根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇英語短文。 寫作要點 (1)垃圾食品盡管美味,但對健康無益,而且其過多的包裝會產(chǎn)生更多的垃圾; (2)遠離垃圾食品,還應選擇正確的生活方式,如:三餐要有規(guī)律,少吃零食、快餐;多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物,以提供身體必需營養(yǎng);多參加戶外活動

2、寫作要求 (1)詞數(shù):80左右,開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù); (2)內(nèi)容必須包括上述所有要點,可適當發(fā)揮。,參考詞匯 過多包裝over packaging; 有規(guī)律地regularly;營養(yǎng)nutrition Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. In a word, a healthy diet with less junk

3、food can help make us stronger and stronger.,【思路點撥】 1.要點提煉:主題是號召大家健康飲食,少吃垃圾食品。寫作內(nèi)容可以從以下幾方面展開: (1)垃圾食品雖美味,但既不健康,又不環(huán)保; (2)倡導健康的生活方式,如按時吃三餐,多吃水果、蔬菜,多做戶外運動等; (3)總結(jié)概括健康的生活方式給我們帶來的好處。 2.確定時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時 3.確定人稱:第一人稱/第二人稱,【寫作架構(gòu)】,【基礎(chǔ)寫作】 .寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補全下列各句。) 1.為了保持健康的生活方式,我們應該遠離垃圾食品。 (stay away from) To keep a heal

4、thy lifestyle, we should. 2.垃圾食品的確對我們的身體有害。 (do harm to) Junk food surely our body. 3.健康的飲食能有助于使我們越來越強壯。 (比較級+and+比較級) A healthy diet can help make us . 4.從此次經(jīng)歷中我意識到我必須停止吃垃圾食品。(stop doing sth.) From the experience I know I junk food.,stay away from junk food,does harm to,stronger and stronger,must s

5、top eating,.句子升格(按括號中的要求改寫句子。) 1.Have more fruit and vegetables.They can provide the nutrition we need. (改為定語從句) _ _ 2.There is no doubt. Junk food surely does harm to our body. (合并為一句) _,Have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need.,There is no doubt that junk food surely

6、does harm to our body.,【連句成文】 Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the

7、 over packaging leads to much more rubbish. To get away from junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, eat regularlythree meals a day on time.,Try as few snacks and little fast food as possible. Second, have more fruit and vegetables which c

8、an provide the nutrition we need. Whats more, do more outdoor activities. As long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food. In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.,【參考諺語】 1.All work and no play makes Jack

9、 a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍, 聰明孩子也變傻。 2.The first wealth is health. 健康是人生第一財富。 3.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一蘋果,醫(yī)生遠離我。,【相關(guān)短語】 say no to junk food 拒絕垃圾食品; get away from junk food 遠離垃圾食品; keep a healthy lifestyle 保持健康的生活方式; make us stronger and stronger 使我們越來越強壯; take an active part in P.E. 積極上體育

10、課; develop good habits 養(yǎng)成良好的習慣; stay up too late 熬夜到很晚,【亮點句型】 導入主題句 1.Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. 2.Today I am glad to tell you something about how to keep a healthy lifestyle. 3.Health is important but not all the students have realized its importance.

11、 4.Its known to us that a healthy lifestyle leads to a healthy life, so its important for us to keep a healthy lifestyle.,文章發(fā)展、過渡句 1.First of all, its a good idea to have a balanced diet. 2.Doing sports can make us healthy and strong. 3.Whats more, we need enough sleep to keep healthy. 4.Last but no

12、t least, being happy is another way to keep healthy.,文章結(jié)尾句 1.I think all these suggestions above will be helpful to us. 2.If you follow the useful advice, I think you will keep healthy. 3.I hope everyone can eat healthily, do sports and have a better life. 4.All in all, a healthy lifestyle can help

13、you relax more in both study and daily life.,A 會工作、會學習、會運動、會娛樂就是會生活。良好的運動習慣是生活的重要組成部分。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示,以“Sports Make Me Strong and Confident”為題,寫一篇短文。 寫作要點 (1)每天早晨6:30起床,做半個小時的早操;晚飯后散步1小時; (2)步行上學; (3)主動上體育課,積極參加課外活動; (4)身體健壯,精力充沛;運動會常得第一。,寫作要求 (1)80100詞。開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數(shù); (2)內(nèi)容合理,要點齊全,語句正確、連貫,書寫規(guī)范,可適當發(fā)揮; (3

14、)不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名。 Sports Make Me Strong and Confident Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. So should I, and so I do._ _ _,One possible version: Sports Make Me Strong and Confident Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports.

15、 So should I, and so I do. In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In school, I take an active part in P.E. Sometimes we play football and volleyball. Sometimes we play basketball, table

16、 tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also take part in after-class activities. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour with my parents.,I like doing sports, because it makes me healthy, strong and energetic. I often get the first

17、prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habits all my life.,B2019樂山 為了讓學生吃到更加營養(yǎng)、安全的食品,政府出臺了陪餐制,要求從4 月 1 日起,學校領(lǐng)導陪同學生用餐。請你根據(jù)以下要點,給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文,談談自己的看法。 提示 (1)學生吃得健康、安全; (2)及時發(fā)現(xiàn)就餐問題; (3)食堂提供食品多樣; (4)父母更加放心。,注意 (1)詞數(shù):80左右;開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù); (2)可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; (3)參考詞匯:規(guī)定regulation (n.);食堂 cafe

18、teria (n.);營養(yǎng)的 nutritious (adj.) A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school leaders to eat with students in their cafeterias._ _ _,One possible version: A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the