1、熱點06 書面表達之熱點話題類（一）【熱點話題】 話題：祖國70周年；傳統(tǒng)文化；手機低頭族；網購；科技創(chuàng)新；中國夢【限時檢測】（建議用時：30分鐘）A（2019江蘇省淮安中考）話題：祖國70周年難度：建議用時：5分為迎接祖國母親第70個生日，學校開展了豐寓多彩的活動，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等；請圍繞該話題寫一篇短文，內容包括以下要點：1. 你看到或參加過一次活動（包括時間、地點、經過）；2. 你對該活動的感受以及對祖國的熱愛之情；3. 你今后如何為建設祖國貢獻力量。注意：1. 文中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名； 2. 詞數在80100, 已給出的文字不計入總詞數。To celebra

2、te the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖國），_【寫作思路】為迎接祖國母親第70個生日，學校開展了豐寓多彩的活動，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等；請圍繞該話題寫一篇短文?？忌紫纫J真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等?！緟⒖挤段摹縏o celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colo

3、rful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. There are all k

4、inds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and make contributions to my motherland in the future.【寫作亮點】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，文中用到一些好的句型：Its the greatest museum I

5、ve ever seen. We saw many weapons that used by the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life.這些給文章增色不少。B（北京市燕山區(qū)2019屆九年級4月畢業(yè)考試）話題：傳統(tǒng)文化難度：建議用時：5分中國傳統(tǒng)文化源遠流長，代代相傳。近期各校都在開展學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化活動。某網站正在開展以弘揚中國傳統(tǒng)文化為題征文，請你用英文寫一篇報道，介紹你校上周舉辦的講中國成語故事活動并談談你的收獲與感受。提示詞語： Chinese idioms, story, collect,

6、share, learn from, ancient提示問題： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activity? What do you think of it?_【參考范文】The activity of Telling Chinese idioms story was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected

7、lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of prep

8、aration. My reading ability has improved greatly. Whats more, I realized the richness of Chinese ancient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【名師點評】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內容充實。2.例文點評：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動；因為活動已經舉辦，所以時態(tài)采用一般過去時；對參加活動的過程描寫完整且條理

9、清晰。3.高分亮點：短語：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，Whats more，have a good time。句型：被動句型。C（四川省峨眉山市2018屆九年級第二次調研）話題：低頭族難度：建議用時：5分隨著手機的普及，越來越多的人癡迷于手機，紛紛加入低頭族。請你參考下圖反映的現象及內容提示，圍繞拒為低頭族（stop phubbing），用英語寫一篇80詞左右短文。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。 內容提示：1.我身邊也有很多低頭族，非常喜歡玩手機。2.他們不停用手機發(fā)信息、上網、玩游戲或拍照。3.影響學

10、習和生活。上課或工作時間玩手機極大浪費時間。4.引發(fā)健康問題，長時間玩手機引發(fā)眼、背、頸痛。 Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. _【寫作思路】考生首

11、先要認真閱讀寫作提示并認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。在檢查環(huán)節(jié)，考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。【參考范文】Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all

12、the time, taking no notice of the people around them. There is a lot of phubbing around me. They like playing with mobile phones very much. They cant stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.However, phubbing influences /affects

13、 not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, especially in class or at work, is a big waste of time. Whats more, it can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.In my opinion,

14、it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happy life.【寫作亮點】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。D（2019年廣東深圳龍嶺學校九年級上10月月考）話題：網購難度：建議用時：5分隨著網絡的發(fā)展，人們消費觀念的轉

15、變，購物方式也在悄悄的發(fā)生變化。網購已經成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入到網購群體當中。請你根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇有關網上購物的文章。優(yōu)點1、節(jié)約時間； 2、價格通常較便宜； 3、可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多。缺點1、只看到圖片，看不到商品本身；2、容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費。注意：1、文中內容必須包含表格中的所有內容，可適當進行發(fā)揮；2、文中不能出現真實姓名和班級名稱等相關信息，否則不予評分；3、詞數要求80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。提示詞匯：網購 shopping online（n.）；商品goods（n.）；導致cause（v.） 【參考范文】Shopping

16、OnlineWith the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. Yo

17、u can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods

18、different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online. With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【寫作亮點】1. 本文文章要求，對網

19、購的優(yōu)點和缺點都做了詳細描述，內容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式豐富。有Every coin has two sides. 表達事物具有兩面性。 On one handOn the other hand表達不同的的觀點。All in all用來總結。E (湖南省長沙市長郡中學初三2018年第二次限時檢測)話題：科技創(chuàng)新難度：建議用時：5分近年來，科技的進步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。2017年5月，來自一帶一路沿線的20國青年評選出了中國的新四大發(fā)明：高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網購。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國的一名初中生，她對我們的新四大發(fā)明很感 興趣。請你給她寫一封電子郵件，

20、具體內容如下：1.介紹共享單車和網購的基本情況并談談你的看法和評價 2. 邀請她下個月參加你校科技節(jié)，將展出學生制作的各類材質的小模型。注意：1. 詞數80詞左右，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文流暢。參考詞匯：共享單車: shared bikes Dear Lisa,Im glad to hear that youre so interested in our Four NewInventions_Yours,Li Hua【寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們根據提示來介紹中國的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內容，我們應將這些內容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文

21、中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當的詞匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現力?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Lisa,Im glad to hear that youre so interested in our Four New Inventions Let me

22、 tell you about them. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. We travel by high-speed railways. They are very quick. We use electronic payments when we use online shopping. When we want to go somewhere by bike, we use shared bicycles. We use our mobile

23、 phone to unlock the shared bicycle. It is convenient and cheap. There is no pollution and oil cost. We can also keep healthy when we ride it. There will be the Science Festival in our school. It will show all kinds of models that students make. I hope you will come to visit them.Yours,Li HuaF(黑龍江省紅光農場學校2018-2019學年九年級3月月考)話題：中國夢難度：建議用時：5分時下，全國上下都在努力實現中國夢，強國夢。作為新時代的學生，你有什么樣的想？結合自己的興趣愛好或者生活背景，以My dream為題，寫一篇80個詞左右的文，談談你的夢想以及如何實現你的夢想。My dream_【寫作思路】這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細但很簡單，要求以my dream為題談談你的夢想以及如何實現你