湛江二中 英語 高軼楠,由上表可以看出： (一) 閱讀材料：較閱讀理解的文章更容易，大約是200個詞,大多為記敘文,也有應用文和說明文。 (二) 寫作話題：話題貼近考生的學習與生活，考生有話可寫。,(三)省平均分：全省高考平均分還在12分以內(nèi),還不到滿分25分的一半,上升空間還很大。望考生在寫作上下功夫,并把寫作作為與其他考生拉開距離的有效突破口。,概括段的解題參考步驟： 1.根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容（2）預測材料內(nèi)容 如：2011年高考的寫作要點（2）是：以約120詞講述一次你想家的經(jīng)歷，因此，我們可以推測本文的閱讀材料可能是記敘文，可能是關(guān)于作者或者別人的想家經(jīng)歷。 因此預測概括段可能是此人何時何地因何因而想家？以及其影響？他是如何應對? 然后帶著這些疑問去閱讀材料，迅速捕捉要點。,當然, 不一定每篇記敘文都包含這六個要素,但“某人做了某事,結(jié)果如何”是應當包括的。因此,要寫好概要,須找到以下兩個問題的答案： (1) 誰做了什么？(who did what) (2) 結(jié)果如何？(what was the result) 如果是夾敘夾議的文章，作者對故事的內(nèi)容發(fā)表了議論，或指出了故事給人們的啟示的，我們概括時要加上這一內(nèi)容。,閱讀下面短文, 然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。內(nèi)容略,寫作內(nèi)容 1. 以約30個詞概括這篇演講稿的主要內(nèi)容； 2. 然后以約120個詞寫一篇讀后感, 說明“誠信的重要性”。,解題過程 第一步, 根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容2,快速獲取大意。寫作內(nèi)容2說明“誠信的重要性”，掃讀原文可以發(fā)現(xiàn)該文章是夾敘夾議的記敘文, 那么我們可以形成概要框架: 作者講述了一個故事來說明誠信的重要性。這樣, 就有了方向和思路了。,第二步：閱讀材料, 回答以下三個問題。 (1) 誰做了什么？The writer tells a story of an overseas Chinese student. The student had been caught without a ticket in the subway three times. (2) 結(jié)果如何？He was not even allowed the chance for an interview. (3) 說明了什么？Honesty is the best policy.,第三步：用自己的話將其串聯(lián)起來。 參考范文如下： 范文1：Today I read an instructive speech, in which the speaker argues honesty is the best policy by telling the story of an overseas Chinese student who couldnt find a job because of dishonesty.,范文2：The writer tells a story about a Chinese student with an excellent academic achievement couldnt find a job in Germany because of his dishonesty to skip the subway tickets, which shows honesty is the best policy.,練習1：閱讀下面的短文，然后以約30個詞概括這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容。短文略,The author happened to pick up an umbrella on a bus and tried to find its owner. She was pleased to find the owner and also got a job offered by the owner of the umbrella.,練習2：閱讀下面的短文, 然后以約30個詞概括這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容。短文略,(范文1) In the passage the writer uses the story of the award-winning farmer who shares his best corn seed with his neighbours to teach us that we all can benefit when we co-operate and share with each other.,(范文2) The writer teaches us that we all benefit more when we co-operate and share with each other by telling the story of the award-winning farmer who shares his corn seeds with his neighbours.,我們根據(jù)說明文的不同類型, 分別給出三種參考模板： 1. 描寫某事物的性質(zhì)功用。即“對象+性質(zhì)功用+利好”： (In the passage) the writer introduces. (對象)to us, especially its.(性質(zhì)或功用), from which we know.(對象帶來的利好).,寫作方法,2. 針對某個問題提出解決方法或措施。即“問題+解決方法”： The passage tells us.(問題), including.(方法1), .(方法2)and.(方法3).,3. 介紹某現(xiàn)象及其原因和結(jié)果。即“現(xiàn)象+原因+結(jié)果”： (The author/writer said/talks about).(現(xiàn)象)of., because /but.(原因/本質(zhì)1), and. (原因/本質(zhì)2).,在高考讀寫任務中,多為說明某種社會現(xiàn)象的說明文。,閱讀下面短文, 然后以約30個詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容。,Eye care is an important factor in all of our lives. Without eyes, we seem to be able to do nothing. But, what can we do to take care of eyes? Firstly, we should eat healthy foods. Secondly, dont sit before a computer screen or TV for too long time and take regular rest at intervals so as to relax the eye muscles. Thirdly, having enough sleep is the best rest for eyes.,Besides those notices, you should be aware of some threats to eyes in daily lives. Excessive exposure to bright sunlight is harmful to eyes, therefore, when going out, especially in summer time, put on a pair of qualified sunglasses. Stay away from smoking. Some ingredients in cigarettes are carcinogenesis(致癌的).,Last but not least, take regular medical examines to check out the potential eye disease and prevent its deterioration(退化). Eyes are the most important sense organs and one should use proper eye care products to avoid further irritations (刺激)and ensure longevity at ease.,解題過程 本文在指出眼睛重要后, 緊接著提出問題“為保護眼睛, 我們可以做些什么呢”, 然后分三點說明應該做些什么。因此, 我們可以套用“問題+解決方法”模式： Our eyes are important for us, so the author tells us how to take care of our eyes, including eating healthy food, giving them enough time to rest, knowing some threats, and taking frequent eye examinations.,練習1：閱讀下面短文，然后以約30個詞概括該文的主要內(nèi)容。短文略,(“對象+性質(zhì)功能+利好”模式) The writer introduces the idea of a balloon robot， especially how it helps to guide people to their destination without being connected to the Internet.,練習2：閱讀下面短文, 然后以約30個詞概括該文的主要內(nèi)容。短文略,(“問題+解決方法”模式) The passage tells us how to be a good friend, including listening more to friends talking, offering help when necessary, staying with them and making plans together.,練習3：閱讀下面短文, 然后以約30個詞概括該文的主要內(nèi)容。短文略,(“現(xiàn)象+原因”模式) The author talks about the popularity of advertisements，because they can bring convenience to people but the negative effects should not be ignored.,議論文通常包括論點、論據(jù)和結(jié)論, 因此寫議論文的概要主要是找出主題句(the topic sentences)、支撐句(supporting sentences)和結(jié)論句(conclusion sentences)。 其中最主要的是找準主題句。 概要模板：論點+論據(jù)(+結(jié)論),寫作方法：,(2011珠海一模)閱讀下面短文, 然后以約30個詞概括該文的主要內(nèi)容。,Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.,In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier.,Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.,解題過程 第一步，根據(jù)文體, 找出要點。略讀短文,本文是典型的議論文, 第一段為論點, 第二、三自然段為論據(jù), 最后一段為結(jié)論, 首尾呼應。論點、論據(jù)和結(jié)論分別為：,第二步, 用自己的話將其表達出來。 參考范文為： (范文1) The passa