1/3我的老師MYTEACHER英語(yǔ)演講稿我的老師MY“TEACHER“演講稿本文曾獲得北京電視臺(tái)、國(guó)家教育部舉辦的MYTEACHER英語(yǔ)演講比賽優(yōu)勝獎(jiǎng)。在以“我的老師”為主題的演講會(huì)上，這篇演講出人意料地將計(jì)算機(jī)稱(chēng)作自己的老師，以吸引聽(tīng)眾的注意。然后又用事實(shí)與推理證明計(jì)算機(jī)確實(shí)是一個(gè)“老師”，從而贏得了聽(tīng)眾的共鳴。某些語(yǔ)言上的不足之處點(diǎn)評(píng)修改如下1在EVERY后，TERRITORY用復(fù)數(shù)，顯然是錯(cuò)誤的。另外，表示“各個(gè)領(lǐng)域”，用FIELD為好。2原文時(shí)態(tài)用錯(cuò)了。3CONCEPT是可數(shù)名詞。MAKE后的賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)如果是不定式的話(huà)，要省略TO。另外，一般不用被動(dòng)不定式，而只用過(guò)去分詞。DEEPLY也有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)之嫌。4HELPSBTODO，不用DOING。LADIESANDGENTLEMEN,IHAVEHADALOTOFTEACHERSINMYSCHOOLWHOHAVEGIVENMEMUCHHELPINMYSTUDYFORTHEIRHELPIWILLNEVERFORGETTHEMBUTTODAYIAMGOINGTOTALKABOUTASPECIALTEACHEROFMINETHISTEACHERISNOTAHUMANBEINGANDITSNAMEIS“COMPUTER”2/3ITHASBEENTEACHINGMEALOTOFKNOWLEDGEANDIAPPRECIATEITVERYMUCHHOWCANIINTERACTWITHACOMPUTERTHEREAREMANYWAYS,INCLUDINGKEYBOARD,MOUSEPOINTER,ANDTOUCHSCREENIOFTENUSEAKEYBOARDWHENIPRESSRIGHTKEYS,ICANSEEANDHEARWHATEVERIWANTINFORMATIONWORLDISATMYFINGERTIPIWISHTHATTRUESPEECHINPUTOUTPUTSYSTEMWOULDBEINVENTEDONEDAYASTEACHERS,COMPUTERSHAVEALOTOFVIRTUESTHEYAREPOSITIVE,THEYHAVEGOODMEMORIESANDNEVERLOSEANYINFORMATIONSTOREDINTHEMTHEYHAVEMUCHKNOWLEDGEINEVERYFIELDTHEYCANLETOUTALLKINDSOFSOUNDS,ANDCANALSOIMPROVETHEEFFICIENCYOFOURSTUDYFOREXAMPLE,IFIWANTTO,ICANSKIPSOMECHAPTERSSOTHATICANSTUDYATMYOWNPACEALTHOUGHCOMPUTERSWILLNEVERTAKETHEPLACEOFHUMANTEACHERS,THEYAREWELCOMEDBYMOREANDMORELEARNERSCOMPUTERSWILLCONTINUETOEVOLVE發(fā)展WITHTHEAIDOFMODERNTECHNOLOGIESCOMPUTERSARESOPOWERFUL,HELPFULANDIMPORTANTTHATEVERYBODY3/3N