1、DAY6綜寫 20min 時間安排1-1.5min 補(bǔ)充筆記17 min 寫作（2+5+5+5）1-1.5min 檢查校對P1_SAMPLEIn the lecture, the professor casts doubt on the reading passages idea that thecommon starling in North America is a particularly harmful invasive species.ORThe reading passage listed three possible reasons to explain why people r

2、egard thecommon starling as an invasive species. However, the speaker fought against thosearguments (by proposing solutions to all the problems) mentioned in the readingpassage.First, even though the reading passage suggests that starlings eat agricultureproducts, which causes damage to the agricult

3、ure economy, the professor argues inthe lecture that starlings also eat insects that feed on the agriculture products. Thatis to say, starlings do benefit the farmer by saving money that they ought to spend onbuying pesticide. Besides, such behaviors can also protect the environment frombeing pollut

4、ed and human health from being harmed by the chemicals in thepesticide.Second, starling flocks are believed to be a danger to aircrafts. However, the speakerbelieved/claimed that the risk can be controlled and the instinct to flock togethercould be of advantage as well. We can use large cages with a

5、 few starlings feedinginside to attract other starlings since they have the instinct of flocking together.When they fly into the cages, they would be trapped. Thousands of starlings nearairports could be captured and moved away.Third, the author mentioned that starlings would occupy or steal the art

6、ificial nestboxes built for local endangered species. However, the speaker pointed out thatthose boxes usually have smaller entrances that starlings do not fit since they arebigger than many native bird species. If the entrance of artificial boxes is built smallerthan four centimeters, starlings wou

7、ld not be able to use them anymore.P2_SAMPLEListening scriptNow listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about.(male professor) Unfortunately, we still dont know where the kingdom of Ophir waslocated. The arguments supporting the theory that it was located in South Asia are not very co

8、nvincing.First, the fact that Ophir merchants traded South Asian goods like rare woods and ivory doesnt necessarily mean that Ophir was in South Asia. In the ancient world goods produced in various places were first brought to trading centers. Ophir may have been a trading center. That would mean th

9、at rare woods and ivory were first brought from South Asia to the trading center of Ophir, which may have been located somewhere else. The South Asian goods were traded in Ophir and then merchants brought them from Ophir to the Mediterranean.Goodstrade centr=O：1stO-MediSecond, yes, it took more than

10、 a year for goods from Ophir to reach the Mediterranean, but this is not evidence that Ophir was located far away. Remember, navigation and sailing techniques were very primitive 3,000 years ago. Ships had to stay close to the shore to avoid becoming lost and also made frequent stops. This method of

11、 travel was slow. So even a ship sailing from a less distant place like the Arabian Peninsula could take a year or more.Navi+sail techprimi Close-shore+stop+slowThird, yes, a few words used in ancient Mediterranean text are similar to South Asian words, but if the similarity between languages is jus

12、t limited to just a few words, its usually not considered good evidence that there has been any contact or relationship between the languages. Heres an example. English speakers and speakers of one native Australian language use the exact same word for dog. But we know for a fact that there hadnt be

13、en any early contact between England and Australia that could explain their similarity. And so we know that the similarity is simply a coincidence.And the same is probably true about the similarities mentioned in the reading.only 幾 wordxEg En=AusdogBut xearly contctSummarize the points made in the l

14、ecture, being sure to how they challenge thespecific points made in the reading passage.Sample noteThe reading and listening passages discussed the possible location of an ancientkingdom named Ophir. While the listening passage believed that its location remainsunknown, the reading passage proposed

15、three reasons to prove the belief that Ophirwas located in South Asia.First, though the author advocated that Ophir was in South Asia because merchantstraded many goods that were originated in South Asia, the speaker indicated that itdidnt necessarily mean that Ophir was located in South Asia. Ophir

16、 could have beena trading center. Goods may be brought from South Asia to Ophir first and then betraded and taken by merchants to Mediterranean.What is more, the author claimed that it took a year and a half to Mediterranean,which approximately equals the time spent from South Asia to Mediterranean,

17、indicating Ophir was in South Asia. However, the speaker argued that since thenavigation and sailing techniques were quite primitive at that time, ships would haveto stay near seashores and make many stops. Thus, even sailing from ArabianPeninsula could take that long.Finally, the author pointed out

18、 similar words were used for goods from Ophir in bothMediterranean text and South Asian language, which supports the hypothesis thatOphir was in South Asia. However, the speaker held that if similarity is limited to afew words, it could be a coincidence rather than a proof of connection. Australiana

19、nd British people have the same words for dog, yet they did not have early contactat all.基本讓步邏輯：if(閱讀是對的)then（新信息）however（新信息 2/新信息）so（閱讀是錯的）Integrated Writing 3Reading passageExtraction of important and rare ms is becoming more difficult throughtraditional methods of mining, and people are worried

20、about the environmentalimpact of traditional mining. Mining companies are therefore looking foralternatives. One possibility is deep-sea mining, in which ms from volcanic ventson the ocean floor are gathered. These vents are like natural mine shafts extendingbeneath Earths crust. In fact, explorator

21、y vent mining will soon begin on the oceanfloor off the coast of PaNew Guinea. There are several reasons for thinking thatvent mining holds promise.The reading passage claims that vent mining is a promising method/strategyHowever, the speaker raises counterarguments against the reading passage bycla

22、iming that vent mining is a bad idea.First, the volcanic vents used in deep-sea mining represent rich and plentiful sources of m deposits. Many ms that are becoming increasingly scarce in mines onEarths surface, including gold, silver, and zinc, can be mined from the vents on theocean floor. In this

23、 way, we can eliminate concerns that there will be a shortage ofthese ms when traditional mines run out of them.available：new tech: sepaX exist+ tech: traspsurfacFirst, the author puts forward that deep-sea mdeposits are abundant, makingthe vent mining a feasible alternative. The speaker, on the con

24、trary, reasons thatthose ms are not available to us because the technology to separate the msfrom surrounding sediments and the technology to transport ms to ocean surfacedo not exist yet. Therefore, the reason mentioned in the reading passage does nothold water. (we do not possess the technology to

25、 Nor do we have the tech totransp.)Second, undersea mining will not disturb the vents, which are home to many uniqueorganisms that live very close to the vent openings and nowhere else on Earth. Them-rich material coming out of a volcanic vent spreads a considerable distancefrom the vent as much as

26、two kilometers. The mining of the ms can thereforetake place two kilometers away from the vents and their unique ecosystems.X prot/R2 X spread all 方 drift backharm orgaSecond, though the author advocates that deep-sea mining takes place far away fromthe vents, posing no threat to organisms living ne

27、arby, the speakers againstthat. He/She(根據(jù)實際情況使用) indicates that materials spread in all directions.When the mining disturbs vents, harmful chemicals created in the process will driftback to vents, which will harm the organisms living near the vents.Third, vent mining can be efficiently managed and r

28、egulated with the help ofinternational laws and agencies. The International Seabed Authority and the UnitedNations Convention of the Law of the Sea have been in place for years. Thanks tothese agencies, there are laws about how the ocean floor can be used and what mustbe done to protect the ocean. T

29、hese laws will ensure that the mines are properly runand do not harm the ocean.If int 水But coastal 口X apply x coveredThird, the author points out that the mines would be run properly underinternational laws. However, the speaker emphasizes that most companies arefocusing on coastal areas which belon

30、g to a particular country. Therefore,international laws do not apply to them. In this case, we cannot make sure that allthe vent-mining companies are well-managed and not do harm to the ocean.Listening scriptNow listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about.(female professor) The argu

31、ments in favor of vent mining dont tell the whole story.Once you have all the facts, youll see that vent mining is a bad idea.First, the fact that undersea volcanic vents produce ms doesnt mean that thesems are really available to us. Getting them would require(need) the developmentof new technology

32、 that would allow ms to be separated from the surroundingocean floor sediments. The technology to do this, on a large scale, doesnt exist yet.And there would also have to be new technology for transporting the mto theoceans surface. So it doesnt matter that the ms are there, because there is not yet

33、 a practical way to collect and transport them.Second, about protecting organisms that live around the vents. Mining two kilometers from the vents will not protect these organisms. Thats because materialscan spread on the ocean floor in all directions. As you read in the passage, the mscan spread tw

34、o kilometers away from the vent, but the harmful chemicals used in mining can also drift back two kilometers to the vent when the ocean floor isdisturbed by mining. That will harm any organisms living near the vents.Third, international laws are great if vent mines are in international waters. But m

35、ostmining companies are focusing on coastal areas and thats true of the New Guineavent mining mentioned in the reading. Because coastal waters belong to a particular country, international laws do not apply to them. So, in reality, many vents are notcovered by regulations. As a result, we have no wa

36、y to make sure that the miningcompanies are well-managed and dont make a mess of the oceans like theyve doneon land.綜合寫作小結(jié)閱讀練習(xí)重點：1. 首段提煉主題+問題；234 段提煉總分/因果/轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系2. 首段倒著看；234 段先看 TS目的：1.寫作文的時候提速，筆記造句2.聽的時候篩選重點練習(xí)重點：1.總結(jié)段用詞如果聽到原詞就替換掉模板，沒聽到就用模板2.234 段 注意反駁邏輯，通常就是讓步+反駁/新信息。筆記重點要還原邏輯+刪減閱讀重復(fù)信息/閱讀(精聽精讀修改筆記+提煉

37、/總結(jié)邏輯)綜合寫作復(fù)習(xí)計劃TPO 30+ 綜合寫作練習(xí)兩周內(nèi) 每天一篇一內(nèi) 兩天一篇兩+ 三天一篇Integrated Writing 4Reading passageThe worlds first empire arose around 2340 B.C.E. when Sargon, a warrior from thecity of Akkad, conquered all of the independent city-states of Mesopotamia (todaysIraq). However, Sargons Akkadian Empire lasted only a

38、 short time. Scholars haveproposed three explanations for why the Akkadian Empire did not last very long.First, rebellions of the conquered city-states were a serious threat to the uof theempire. The conquered city-states were forced to provide Sargons central imperialgovernment with expensive servi

39、ces and tributes (for example, a quantity of goldevery year). Many of the city-states wanted to be free of these obligations andrebelled against the imperial government. Frequent rebellions could have weakenedthe imperial government and could have eventually led to a breakup of the empire.Second, th

40、e empire may have experienced serious problems with food supply. For along time, the northern region of the empire, where agricultural conditions wereexcellent, was used a source of food for the rest of the empire. However, at a certainpoint, the north suffered from an extended period of too little

41、rainfall. The worsenedfarming conditions may have seriously affected the food supply chain and broughtdown the whole empire.Third, the Akkadian Empire traded with countries and kingdoms outsideMesopotamia for many important materials, such as ms, wood, or preciousstones. However, the Akkadian Empire

42、 often tried to use its strength to dominate thetrade relationships and impose its own conditions on trade. This naturally met with: it is reported, for example, that thirty-two foreign kings united toasea battle against the Akkadians. Suchmay have caused enough damageto the Akkadians trade economy

43、to cause the empires downfall.Listening scriptNow listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about.(female professor) None of the reasons you read about provides a convincingexplanation for the collapse of the Akkadian Empire.First, about the rebellion of the city-states against the cent

44、ral imperial government,well, the only chance that the city-state rebels had to have successfully resisted thecentral governments powerful army was if they fought from inside the city that haddefensive walls around it. But that was not possible. When Sargon originallyconquered the city-states, he or

45、dered their defensive walls to be destroyed. So, sincethe cities no longer had their protective walls, the city-state rebels did not standmuch of a chance against the imperial governments army. The rebellions would havebeen easily and quickly defeated.Second, its true that the bad weather conditions

46、 you read about would have been aproblem for food supplies. But the Akkadians had the agricultural technology to helpthem survive these kinds of conditions, They had irrigation techniques that allowedthem to bring water over long distances. And they knew how to store grain over longperiods of time.

47、They could have kept up a functioning food supply chain even duringa relatively long period of reduced rainfall.Third, its true that the unfair trading practices of the Akkadians caused some of theirpartners to rise up against them. But the Akkadians were constantly searching forcontacts with new tr

48、ading partners. For example, they sent trading ships as far as theIndian sub-continent in the east and they found trading partners as far west as theMediterranean Sea. So even if theof some of their trading partnersdisrupted some of the trade and resulted in a lost access to resources the Empirerelied on, the new trade connections gave the Akkadians new access