1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上高考滿分作文一. 用詞準(zhǔn)確;表達(dá)地道1.【北京卷】【試題回放】第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)美國中學(xué)生Jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。注意：1.信的開頭已寫2.詞數(shù)不少于60。Dear Jeff,Im Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.While you a

2、re here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese

3、 food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay

4、here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes, 名師點(diǎn)評這篇文章的特點(diǎn)還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。 2.【安徽卷】【試題回放】假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：l 表示贊成。l 提出你喜歡

5、的欄目。 l 簡要說明理由。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2.參考：欄目columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives u

6、s a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.

7、Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I cant list more. I really cant wait to read that magazine! Yours faithfully【名師點(diǎn)評】這是一篇滿分作文。由于這

8、篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, cant wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。二. 非謂語動(dòng)詞為作

9、文添彩3.【北京卷】【試題回放】情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60 提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant t

10、rees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to

11、 record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點(diǎn)評】本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。三. 復(fù)合句為寫作增色4.【全國卷】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生

12、的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信1、自我介紹;2、祝賀蘇琳生日;3、感謝工作人員;4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gav

13、e birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I

14、 have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly,【名師點(diǎn)評】這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。5.【全國卷II】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹

15、。主要內(nèi)容包括：1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米; 2.房間及價(jià)格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴; 3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡); 4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放; 5.歡迎預(yù)定。注意1. 100詞左右，開頭已寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides sin

16、gle person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming

17、 pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點(diǎn)評】本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。6.【重

18、慶卷】據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹; 得知的情況,表示鼓勵(lì),打算為她做什么; 祝她早日康復(fù)注意：1. 信的格式已為你寫好2. 信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。3. 詞數(shù)100左右。Dear Amy,Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung

19、cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. S

20、o I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon. 名師點(diǎn)評本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如Im sorry to hear that., It is reported that.等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。 四. 結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,句式準(zhǔn)確7.【江蘇

21、卷】【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。(教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：每天鍛煉一小時(shí),健康工作五十年,幸福生活一輩子). 請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注意?、 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、 詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3、 參考詞匯：陽光體育活動(dòng)a national student sports program; 教育部the Ministry

22、 of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province par

23、ticipated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.

24、 Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點(diǎn)評】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。8. 假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob 將于九月到你

25、所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25 平方米，月租500 元。注意：1詞數(shù)：100 左右：2參考詞匯：房租rent(n.).Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a flat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Ji

26、anxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the

27、 rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!滿分理由: 本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以which，引導(dǎo)的非限定性

28、定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。9. 假如你是李華,你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽說中國的中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一封回信，談一談減負(fù)給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。Dear *，How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China. OK, I will explain it to you. A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of

29、 the reduced learning load. In the past we used to be very busy even at weekends since we had lots of home work to do. We didnt go to bed until 11:30. Now everything is improved. We can do all kinds of things that we like. In the daytime, we can read books and visit museums, take computer lessons. I

30、n the evenings we can watch news on TV and we sleep earlier than we used to. Best wishes!10. 最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請你根據(jù)下表所提供信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信客觀地介紹討論情況。開頭已寫好，詞數(shù)100，參考詞匯：門票-entrancefee 60的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 40的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1不應(yīng)該收門票2公園是公眾休閑的地方3如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象1應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不要太高2支付園林工人工資3購新花木Deareditor, Imwritingtotel

31、lyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Thoseagainstchargingentrancefeeforparkstakeup60%.Theyareofonemindthatparksarea placeforthepublicsenjoyment.Ifticketsaredemandedonthevisitorsofapark,agatehastobesetupandsohavethewallsonthefoursides.Ifso,citywillnotlookasb

32、eautifulasitwould.Otherwise,thoseinfavorofchargingentrancefeeforparkstakeup40%.Theyallthinkthatticketpriceshouldbecontrolledproperly,andthatentrancefeecanbeusedtopaythegardenersandbuynewsortsofflowersandtrees. Thetruthliesinthehandsofthemajority.Doesmyargumentstandtoreason,deareditor? 11.假設(shè)你是李華，你在報(bào)上

33、看到北京電視臺(tái)今年七月將舉辦外國人“學(xué)中文，唱中文歌”才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學(xué)學(xué)中文，你覺得他應(yīng)去試一試。請按以下要點(diǎn)給他寫信告知此事，并表示可以提供幫助。比賽時(shí)間：7月18，報(bào)名時(shí)間：截止到6月30日。報(bào)名地點(diǎn)：北京電視臺(tái)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，3.參考詞匯：才藝大賽talent showDear Peter,I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners Talent Show will be held in Beijing T

34、elevision Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If

35、there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.12.【試題回放】假設(shè)你是李華，最近國內(nèi)一家英文報(bào)紙正在討論北京動(dòng)物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報(bào)寫一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。贊成遷出：1.游客多，交通堵塞2.郊區(qū)環(huán)境好反對遷出：1.建于1906年，中外聞名2.搬遷易造成動(dòng)物死亡注意：1. 100字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，3.參考詞匯： 郊區(qū)suburbDear Editor ,Recently ,in our class there has been a he

36、ated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the su

37、burbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .Whats more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has

38、 to be made by people in Beijing.13.假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個(gè)人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個(gè)人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù). 注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，提示詞：申請apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者volunteerDear Sir / Madam:I was quite excited when I heard the Asian

39、Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sport

40、s during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.名師點(diǎn)評這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)以“我”為中心，詳細(xì)說明了自己對志愿者工作的結(jié)合，以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng)，這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運(yùn)用也不錯(cuò)。14全國卷II假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友Bob的要求， 寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。注意：1、字?jǐn)?shù)100左右2、可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫3、開頭語已為你寫好Dear Bob,

41、Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. its open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.There are many books available i

42、n our library , dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it,

43、welcome to our school, and Ill show you around.15. 2009高考英語滿分作文【全國卷I海南、寧夏】【試題回放】假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：1.外出購物2.替房東還書3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消2)此事已告知Susan 3) 盡快回電注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Mrs. Wilson,Im going out shopping, a

44、nd wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry abou

45、t that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.16. 2010高考英語滿分作文假如你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽（speech contest），希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。英語演講比賽主題：人與自然時(shí)間：

46、6月15日下午2：005：00地點(diǎn)：501教室參賽選手：10名學(xué)生聯(lián)系人：李華（電話）歡迎大家光臨Dear Mrs. Smith,Im Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2；00 pm and las

47、t for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes 圖表作文寫作指導(dǎo)圖表作文是近年來高考?？嫉念}型之一。圖表

48、作文的體裁多為議論文、應(yīng)用文和說明文，內(nèi)容多涉及前后變化對比、正反觀點(diǎn)對比或產(chǎn)品介紹等。要求考生通過數(shù)據(jù)、文字內(nèi)容分析，系統(tǒng)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出圖表含義，并得出令人信服的結(jié)論。一、圖表作文的命題形式1表格式將統(tǒng)計(jì)的數(shù)據(jù)或被說明的對象直接用表格形式體現(xiàn)出來，即統(tǒng)計(jì)表。這類題型一般以說明文和議論文居多，往往是介紹、說明某種情況或辯論某種觀點(diǎn)、看法，但有時(shí)也可能是記敘文。2圖像式可分為以曲線形式表示數(shù)據(jù)變化的線形圖、以條形形式表示數(shù)據(jù)大小或數(shù)量之間差異的條形圖，以圓內(nèi)扇形面積的大小表示總體中部分結(jié)構(gòu)變化的圓形圖等。這類題型一般以說明文居多，是一些關(guān)于生產(chǎn)、銷售、發(fā)展進(jìn)程等各種項(xiàng)目統(tǒng)計(jì)的示意圖。二、圖表作文的

49、應(yīng)試策略1審讀圖表前的文字說明，弄清圖表的性質(zhì)，做到“四確定”。首先，確定文章的體裁；其次，確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)；再次，確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)；最后，確定文章的人稱。2審讀圖表后的要求，尋找做題規(guī)律，要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：(1)詞數(shù)：100左右。(2)開頭或結(jié)尾已給出，這就要求考生首先不能另行開頭或結(jié)尾；其次，要細(xì)讀所給語句的人稱、時(shí)態(tài)和語言的表達(dá)風(fēng)格，力求前后一致。(3)內(nèi)容完整，即要點(diǎn)齊全，寫作時(shí)要注意詳略得當(dāng)和準(zhǔn)確全面。(4)行文連貫。行文必須做到形連和意連。形連要力求自我特色詞匯的使用，以增加得分“亮點(diǎn)”。意連要求能涵蓋高考書面表達(dá)中各種文體常用的一些特色詞匯，如however；besides；ins

50、tead；in the meanwhile；for instance；on the contrary；worse still；in conclusion；all of a sudden；as a matter of fact等，這樣才能寫出好文章。(5)注意句式的變化，力求在語言表達(dá)正確的基礎(chǔ)上追求句式變換，確保語言表達(dá)的高級性。常見寫作技巧主要包括：簡單句與復(fù)合句的交替使用；主動(dòng)語態(tài)為主，適度穿插被動(dòng)語態(tài)；大膽使用平行結(jié)構(gòu)；適當(dāng)調(diào)整句中定語、狀語的位置，使句子表達(dá)多樣化；三大從句與三種非謂語動(dòng)詞靈活使用；特殊句式(如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、疑問句、省略句)點(diǎn)綴其間等。假設(shè)你是李華，正在英國牛津參加短

51、期的語言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃星期天去倫敦旅游?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)上的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。請給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫好；2可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3參考詞匯：牛津Oxford；費(fèi)用fee。案例分析這是一篇典型的圖表式作文，要求寫一封電子郵件，詢問旅行社有關(guān)一則廣告的情況。細(xì)讀圖表和文字提示可知本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱為第一人稱。本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：開頭語；學(xué)生票價(jià)；費(fèi)用是否包含景點(diǎn)門票、午餐；牛津的時(shí)間；是否有購物時(shí)間等，并稍加評論。Dear Sir/Madam，Im writin

52、g for more information about the day tour to London.As a student at Oxford University，Id like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge，does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring along my

53、own food？How long will the tour last？Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day，Id like to know the time to return. Besides，is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.請根據(jù)圖表所示，就某城市空氣污染的狀況寫一篇英文報(bào)道，并提出一兩條改進(jìn)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2參考詞匯：車輛vehicl

54、e?！緟⒖即鸢浮縒ith the development of industry，air pollution is getting more and more serious. In this city，many people suffer from different kinds of illness because of air pollution.Air pollution is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. There are more and more

55、 cars and buses on the road，which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories. Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm to othershealth as well as to that of the smokers. Besides，about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.We should take some measures to fight

56、against pollution. New fuel can be used to take the place of gas. We can plant more trees，grass and flowers. All in all，if everybody realizes the importance of environment and does something to stop pollution，the problem will be solved.議論文寫作指導(dǎo) 1議論文是以議論為主要表達(dá)方式的一種文體，它通過擺事實(shí)、講道理的方式來辨明是非曲直，從而表達(dá)出作者的觀點(diǎn)。它常由論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證三部分構(gòu)成。2它要求語言必須簡練、準(zhǔn)確，要盡可能避免使用口語，多用書面語，可適當(dāng)使用名言警句；以議論為主，輔之以敘述、說明和描寫等手法。3寫作時(shí)要圍繞中心論點(diǎn)展開議論，即論據(jù)和論證要圍繞論點(diǎn)展開。根據(jù)題目要求，有時(shí)需要從正反兩方面來論述，可增強(qiáng)論證的力度。最后，可得出結(jié)論，照應(yīng)開頭，形成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。4寫作時(shí)常以三段式的形式展開議論。 優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)呆在家中花費(fèi)少、舒適方便不能親身了解外界外出旅游增長知識(shí)、開闊眼界花費(fèi)多、旅途不便暑假即將來臨，你班同學(xué)就假期計(jì)劃進(jìn)行討論，提出了不同看法，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。注意?.詞數(shù)：80120(不含已寫好部