1、專題16寫作無憂技巧在手T作文優(yōu)化技巧耳3善用定語，副詞和連詞進行話當地擴詞和擴句日中考作文專題訓練-V詳情見講§常見名言警句gp 詳情見講義一。知識梳理I一、作文優(yōu)化技巧及過渡方法：改進文章內容：Mother does all that she can for us.1. She takes good care of my daily life.(1 ) She cooks meals for me.(2 ) She takes me to hospital.2. Besides, she supports me in my study.(1 ) She invites me to

2、 libraries.(2 ) She helps me with my Maths.3. What's more, she always encourages me.(1 ) She tells me not to give up.(2 ) She suggests I have another try.第一次改進句子結構1. She takes good care of my daily life.隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的家庭擁有了私家車。40. If you don't., you'll.（如果你不你就會）It you don't keep wo

3、rking hard, you'll lose the chance.如果你不堅持努力工作，你就會失去這次機會。三、常見名言警句：01. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧.02. Time is money.時間就是金錢03. Easier said than done.說來容易做來難04. Where there is a w ilk there is a way.有志者事竟成.05. Look before you leap.三思而后行.06. Know ledge is power.知識就是力量07. God helps those who help (he

4、mselves.自助者天助.08. Nothing is impossible to a w illing heart.心之所愿，無事不成09. It's never too old to learn.活到老，學到老10. No pains, no gains.不勞無獲11. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難朋友才是真朋友。12. To make the impossible possible.將不可能變?yōu)榭赡?3. Failure is the mother of success.失敗乃成功之母14. All roads lead to R

5、ome.條條大道通羅馬15. First things first.先做重要之事16. Great minds think alike.英雄所見略同17. Rome was not built in a day.成功并非一朝一夕的事18. All that glitters is not gold.閃光的未必都是金子19. East or west, home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家草窩20. Time and tide wait for no man.時間不等人21. Don't judge a man by his looks.不可以貌取人22. Where th

6、ere is life, there is hope.有生命必有希望23. All tilings are difficult before they are easy.萬事開頭難24. Better late than never.遲做總比不做好25. Every little helps.點滴都有用；積少成多26. The shortest answer is doing.最簡短的回答就是行動27. No news is good news.沒消息，就是好消息28. Well begun, half done.好的開始是成功的一半29. All for one, one for all.人

7、人為我，我為人人30. One false step will make a great difference.失之亳厘，謬以千里31. Facts speak louder than words.事實勝于雄辯32. As the tree, so the fruit.種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆33. To live is to learn; to learn is to better live.活著為了學習，學習為了更好的活著34. Like and like make good friends.趣味相投35. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只

8、學習不玩耍聰明的孩子也變傻.沙優(yōu)選提升題，1. （2022-上海浦東新一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根據以卜情境寫一篇不 少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）在我們的日常學習生活中，我們會遇到各種各樣的問題。當你遇到問題的時候，你會尋求誰的幫助？ 你一般會用怎樣的方式解決遇到的問題？請結合學習生活中遇到的真實問題，以 W way of solving a problem"寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文（注意：1.文章中不得出現姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。）2. （2

9、022上海長寧一模）Write at least 60 words about the topic /zl,ve learned something helpful formy future life"（請以“我學到了對未來生活有用的東西為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占 格。）學校生活的目的不僅僅是為了升學，更重要的是學習對未來生活中有用的一種能力本領、一種精神品 質、或者是獲取一個經驗教訓。請你以一個具體的事例談談你學校生活中這方面的一點收獲。3. （2022-上海普陀一模）Write at least 60 words according to the pictur

10、es about "A 14th birthday ceremony"'（根據所給的圖片，寫一篇關于"十四歲生日儀式"的短文，題目可另擬，字數不少于60個詞，標點符號不占格）thethe be血gtenen 臨西皿 bnMy*束快代真4. （2022上海一模）（根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）今年教育部頒布的“雙減”政策（Double Reduction policy）要求學校減輕學生作業(yè)負擔（reduce students* homework burden）,這就意味著放學后你會獲得更多自由調配的時間，請談談你將如何合理

11、安 排自己的學習和生活。注意：1.短文中不得出現任何真實人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。2. 照搬閱讀語篇內容不得分。參考答案1. 例文My way of solving a problemIn our daily life, we may meet different kinds of problems. When I meet a problem, I always ask my father for help.When I was young, I argued with my mother. My father told me to keep calm first. Never

12、 say some words to others when you are angry. Then think of a way to solve this problem. My father gave me a meaningful lesson. So if I meet some problems now, I always remember the words that my father told me.【詳解】1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。以“我解決問題的方式"為題寫一篇短文。2. 寫作指導：本文采用一般過去時和一般現在時。結合自己的經歷，來介紹自己解決問題的方

13、法是什么， 寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。2. 例文：lzve learned something helpful for my future lifeRecently, I've learned something helpful for my future life. I've had a change in my life. It makes me realized that how important it is for me to be confident.I was poor at math and my math score was so disap

14、pointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher Mr. Li told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Everytime I met with some math problems, I told myself "You should be confident and you can do it." And out of my expectation, I got an "A" in my math e

15、xam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for math.There is nothing that I can't do if I am confident enough.【詳解】1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應根據題目要求講述自己在學校生活中的收獲及自己的感 悟。2. 寫作指導：本文時態(tài)以一般過去時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，講述自己在學校生活中的收獲及自己的 感悟，要敘述完整，條理清晰。3. 例文：An unforgettable experienceLast Sunday we ha

16、d our 14th birthday ceremony in the school hall. The hall was decorated with balloons and streamers. Students with uniforms attended the ceremony at 10:00 a.m. First, the headmaster gave a speech. He praised the great progress we made, and gave best wishes to us. Next, the parent representative appr

17、eciated the communication with the teenagers and talked about the happy family time with us. To our surprise, we received letters from our parents, which were filled with love and expectation. Finally, cakes with white house and colorful chocolate were presented to us. We enjoyed the cakesand had a

18、great time. What an unforgettable experience!【洋解】1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應根據題目要求及圖片顯示的信息講述14歲生日慶典的時 間、地點、慶典的具體步驟及自己的感受。2. 寫作指導：本文時態(tài)以一般過去時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，講述慶典的具體內容，要敘述完整，條 理清晰。4. 例文：This year, China introduced Double Reduction policy which hopes to reduce students' homework.Due to the policy we have

19、more free time after school and we should arrange our study and life reasonably. Although there are many kinds of after-class activities, I will finish my homework first. After that, I will play basketball with my friends. I also like drawing pictures so I will spend half an hour practising drawing

20、every day. What's more, I will help my parents with housework.It's necessary for us to make a plan for our study and life and I think everyone should make it reasonable.【詳解】1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，圍繞“雙減政策，寫一篇合理安排自己學習和生活的文章。2. 寫作指導：本文采用一般將來時為主，人稱采用第一人稱。第一段描述“雙減”政策內容；第二段具體描述自己 將如何安排學習生活；第三段進行總結。寫作時，

21、注意詞匯短語使用準確，語言符合語法結構；層次分明，條理 清晰。(1 ) She cooks delicious meals for me with love .(2 ) She takes me to hospital when I get sick.2. Besides, she supports me in my study.(1 ) She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together.(2 ) No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Maths.3. W

22、hat's more, she always encourages me.(1 ) She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties.(2 ) If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try.第二次改進句子結構1. My mother is a responsible nanny/ mother.(1 ) She cooks delicious meals for me with love.(2 ) When I get sick, she takes

23、me to hospital as soon as possible.2. Besides, my mother is a close friend.(I ) She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together.(2 ) No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Math.3. What is more, my mother is a wise teacher.(1 ) She tells me not to give up when I have diffic

24、ulties.(2 ) If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try.【總結提煉】作文優(yōu)化技巧：善用定語，副詞和連詞，進行適當地擴詞和擴句。過渡方法：1. 那就是(說).；亦即That is to say,. = That is, . = Namely,.例：我們生活需有規(guī)律。也就是說，早睡早起戒除煙酒。We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in th

25、e daily activities.2. (A)基于這個理由 For this reason .(B)為了這個目的 For this purpose, .例：基于這個理由，我己決定把行醫(yī)作為未來的職業(yè)。For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career.3. 我們有理由相信We have reasons to believe (that).例：我們有理由相信體罰應該嚴格禁止。We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment shou

26、ld be strictly prohibited.4. 事實上As a matter of fact, . = In fact, .例：事實上健康才是最重要。As a matter of fact, it is health that counts.5. (A)例如 For example, .(B)拿做例子 Take . for example.例：例如我們盲目地提高生活水準，卻降低生活品質。For example, we elevate the living standards blindly, but lower the quality of life.6. 此外我們不應忽視Besid

27、es (In addition), we should not neglect .例：此外，我們不應忽視每個人都想要一個溫馨祥和的社會。In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.7. 相反地.on the contrary,. = by contrast,.例：相反地少數學生似乎還在鬼混。On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around.8. 另一方面On the other h

28、and,.例：政府應嚴格執(zhí)法，另一方面大眾也應該培養(yǎng)減少污染的好習慣。The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution.9. 然而很可惜的是However, it is a pity that.例：然而很可惜的是他總是臨時抱佛腳。However, it is a pity (hat he should always cram al the eleventh hour.10. 換言之.

29、in other words, . = to put it differently例：換言之我會盡最大的努力達成我的目標。In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to) my goal.11 .別人可能認為這是事實，但我不是。我認為It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that.例：別人可能認為這是事實，但我不是。我認為如果你有很大的決心和毅力，成功最后一定屬于你。It may be true as assumed by ot

30、hers, but I don't. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end.12. 從此之后我己發(fā)現.Ever since (hen, I have found that.例：從此之后我己發(fā)現，在日常生活中，微笑是避免沖突最好的方式。Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts i

31、n our daily lives.13. 這樣說來，假如當然毫無疑問地In this light, if., there can surely be no doubt (that).例：這樣說來，假如我們能善用時間，當然毫無疑問地我們會成功。In this light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere.14. 更嚴重的是.What is more serious is (that).例：更嚴重的是我們不珍惜野生動物。What is more ser

32、ious is that we do not cherish the wildlife.15. 鑒于社會的實際需要In view of the practical need of society,.例：鑒于社會的實際需要，愈來愈多人對學英語有興趣。In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.16. 如果能實踐這三點.If one can really put the three points into action (practic

33、e), .例：如果能實踐這三點。If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life.17. 做這些簡單之事，我們一定可以By doing these simple things, we surely can .例：做這些簡單之事，我們一定可以快樂出門平安回家。By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and com

34、e back home safe every day.18. 如此我相信.In this way, I believe (that).例：如此，我相信大家能夠像我一樣享受乘坐公車的樂趣。In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me.19 .實踐這些By putting them (theabove) into practice,.例：實踐這些，在智育方面我一直能不斷進步。By putting thcin(thc above) into practice, I have b

35、een able to make constant progress in intellectual education.20. (A)唯有符合此三項要求，我們才能 Only by living 叩 to the three requirements, can we .(B)唯有通力合作，我們才能 Only with combined efforts, can we .例：唯有通力合作，我們才能期望臺灣不久有新的面貌。Only with combined efforts, can we expectTaiwanto take a new face in due course.21. 最后，但并

36、非最不重要Last but not least, .例：最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助長青少年犯罪的原因。Last but not least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.22. 這證據顯示的重要性在怎么強調都不為過。This evidence shows that the importance of.cannot be overemphasized. 例：這證據顯示交通安全的重要性在怎么強調都不為過。This evidence shows that th

37、e importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.23. 由于這些理由，我For these reasons, I.例：由于這些理由，我認為在臺灣接受大學教育是明智的。For these reasons, I think that receiving college education inTaiwan is wise.24. 總而言之In conclusion,.=To sum up,.例：總而言之,好國民應該遵守交通規(guī)則。In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic

38、regulations.25. 因此我們可以下個結論，那就是We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that).例：因此，我們能下個結論，那就是世上自由最珍貴。We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothuig is so precious as freedom in the world.26. 如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問地If wc can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt (that).例：如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問地，

39、我們就能精通英語。If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English.27. 因此，這就是.的原因Thus, this is the reason why .例：因此，這就是我重感冒的原因。Thus, this is the reason why I caught a bad cold.28. 所以，我們應該了解Therefore, we should realize (that).例：所以，我們應該了解學英文不能沒有字典。Therefore, we should realize t

40、hat in learning English we cannot do without a dictionary.29. 因此，由上列的討論我們可以明了We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion (that).例：因此，由上列的討論我們可以明了毅力可以克服任何困難。We, therefore, can make clear from (he above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty.30. (A).從觀點來看.From the point o

41、f view, .二、高級句型：1. the + est + 名詞 +（that）+ 主詞 + have ever + seen （known/heard/had/read, etc） the most + 形 容詞 + 名詞 +（that）+ 主詞 + have ever + seen（known/heard/had/rcad, etc）海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.張老師是我曾經遇到最仁慈的教師。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have

42、 ever had.2. Nothing is +er than to + VNothing is + more + 形容詞 + （han to + V例句：沒有比接受教育更重:要的事。Nothing is more important than to receive education.Nothing is more importani than to potect our environment.3. cannot emphasize the importance of too much.（再怎么強調.的重要性也不為過。）例句：我們再怎么強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。We cannot e

43、mphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我們再怎么強調教育的重要性也不為過。We cannot emphasize the importance of education.4. There is no denying that + S + V .（不可否認的）例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不町否認的，我們的生活品質己經每況愈卜，There is no denying that Lin Z

44、liiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.不可否認，林志玲是我所見過的最有魅力的女演員。5. It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 （全世界都知道）例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees arc indispensable to us.全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。6. There is no doubt that + 句子 （亳無疑問的）例句：There is no doubt that our educational syst

45、em leaves something to be desired.亳無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。7. An advantage of is that + 句子（的優(yōu)點是）例句： An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create （produce） any pollution.使用太陽能的優(yōu)點是它不會制造任何污染。An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.鍛煉身體的優(yōu)點是它可以讓我們保持健康。8. The re

46、ason nhy + 句子is that + 句子（的原因是）例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應我們新鮮的空氣。9. So +形容詞+ be +主詞+ that +句子（如此以致于）例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.時間是如此珍貴，它經不起我們浪費。 So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her.西施是如此美

47、麗，以致于我們都喜歡她。10. Adj + as + Subject（主詞）+ be, S + V （雖然）例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.by no means = in no way = on no account 一點也不雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質絕對令人不滿意。11. The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S + V,（he + more + Adj + S + V （愈愈）

48、例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈進步。12. By+Ving, can （借著能夠）例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。13. enable + Objcct（受詞）4- to + V （使能夠）例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。Travelling enable our life （o be enriched,旅行能卡富人們的

49、生活。14. On no account can we + V （我們絕對不能）例句：On no account can we ignore （he value of know ledge.我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。On no account can we ignore the importance of education.我們絕對不能忽略教育的重要性。15. It is time + S +過去式（該是的時候了）f列句：1（ is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

50、 該是有關當局采取適當的措施來解決交通問題的時候了。16. Those who（的人）例句：Those who break the law should be punished.違法的人應該受處罰。17. There is no one but （沒有人不）例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.沒有人不渴望上大學。There is no one but longs to be a millionaire.沒有人不渴望成為百萬富翁。18. be + forced/coinpelled/obliged + to + V （不得不）例句:Sinc

51、e the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 由于考試迫在眉睫，我不得不放棄做運動。19. It is conceivable that + 句子（可想而知的）It is obvious that + 句子（明顯的）It is apparent that + 句子（顯然的）例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知識在我們的一生中扮演一個重要的角色。20. That i

52、s the reason why （那就是的原因）例句：Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it.夏天很炎熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。 Winter is cold. That is the reason why I don't like it.冬天很冷。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。21. For the past +時間，S +現在完成式.（過去年來，一直）例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 過去兩年來，

53、我一直忙著準備考試。22. Since + S +過去式，S+現在完成式。例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自從他上高中，他一直很用功。23. It pays to+V （是值得的。）例句：It pays （o help others.幫助別人是值得的。24. be based on （以為基礎）例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社會的進步是以和諧為基礎的。25. Spare no effort to + V （不遺余力的）We sh

54、ould spare no effort to beautify our environment,我們應該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。26. bring home to + 人 + 事（讓明白事）例句：We should bring home to people （he value of working hard.我們應該讓人們明白努力的價值。27. be closely related to （與息息相關）例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做運動與健康息息相關°28. Get into the habit of + Vin

55、g=make it a rule to + V （養(yǎng)成的習慣）We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing.我們應該養(yǎng)成預習和復習的習慣。29. Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, （因為）例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.因為他的鼓勵，我終于實現我的夢想。 Thanks to Miss Qin's help, I passed the examination.多虧秦老師的幫助，我通過了考試。30. What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + N + V!（多么!）例句：遵守諾言是多么重要的事！What an important thing it is to keep our promise! = How important a thing is to keep our promise!誠實是多么重要的事！What an imp