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2、ges Dam ,China The Three Gorges Dam, which is the biggest construction project in China since the building of the great wall and the Grand Canal, has been built to control flooding and provide hydro-electric power for the central region of China. The damis nearly 200 meters high and 1.5 kilometers w

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9、t is a 102-storey building. It is a 102-storeyed building.he Lets practiceTaipei 101,2004,101 storeys,509 meters Lets practiceTaipei 101 , which was built in the year of 2004, has 101 storeys and is 509 meters high. The Empire State Building ,New York Ten million bricks6500 windowsYou can see 5 stat

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11、朋友Tom回信，講講你學校的新變化，內(nèi)容包括：新建的教學樓，24米高，6層教師，學生，環(huán)境特色活動可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。詞數(shù)100左右。010203WritingWriting structure ?010203Writing structure ?Try to lengthen your sentence by using attributive clause and put more details into your composition. The No.2 Senior High School ,DaLian 假設你是李華，你給你的美國朋友Tom回信，講講你學校的新變化，內(nèi)容包括：新建的教學樓，24米高，6層教師，學生，環(huán)境特色活動可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。詞數(shù)100左右。, which andnewly-builtmeters highstoreysfriendly, hardworking, experiencedbe surrounded byvarious activitiesplaying instruments, pottery, handwriting, English film Showtime Summary 微課 My introduction Homework P