1、“冤屈的”四檔作文(得分11分)Dear Sir/Madam， Ive learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school. Im writing to apply to join it, thinking that Im well qualified for the job. I have developed fluency in spoken English. I have no

2、 difficulty communicating with them. I have accumulated related experience by working parttime in a travel agency, accompanying some foreign tourists. I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English. Looking forward to your reply at your convenience.Yo

3、urs，Li Hua升格后的五檔作文(得分14分)Dear Sir/Madam， Ive learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school. Im writing to apply to join it, thinking that Im well qualified for the job. For one thing, I have developed fluency in s

4、poken English. As a result, I have no difficulty communicating with them. For another, I have accumulated related experience by working parttime in a travel agency, accompanying some foreign tourists. More importantly, I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English. Looking forward to your reply at your convenience.Yours，Li Hua名師點(diǎn)評(píng)左欄的文章運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等；in need of, be well qualified for, develop fluency in, accumulated, broaden my perspective, as well as等的應(yīng)用也恰到好處；文章采用了三段式，分段合理，總體來(lái)說(shuō)是一篇不錯(cuò)的作文。但美中不足的是缺少了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，感覺(jué)好像只是一些句子的簡(jiǎn)單堆