1、Do you want to get a in writing?high mark 1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定檔次檔次分值第五檔2125第四檔1620第三檔1115第二檔610第一檔15一.高考書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則2.給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明3. Ending 小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題/個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)利用不同的句型來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思能增加文章的文采。二使用豐富的句型結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)增加亮點(diǎn)一、使用三大的從句：e.g. But a boy,Li Ping, whose father died a month ago, was

2、 late for the class. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature. 1.定語(yǔ)從句（找出句中的定語(yǔ)從句)Practice:1.他的微笑就像陽(yáng)光溫暖了那些悲傷的人們His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness.2.參加這些課程的學(xué)生至少要有三年英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)The students who are going to take these courses have at least t

3、hree years of English learning experiences.2、 名詞性從句找出句中的名詞性從句)e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.Practice:To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice: 他們所做的帶給了

4、其他人快樂(lè)并且豐富了他們自己的生活What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.人們建議我們要盡可能地多笑It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.e.g. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. So long as we work

5、 harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. 3、 狀語(yǔ)從句（找出句中的狀語(yǔ)從句)Practice: 我們應(yīng)該感謝我們的朋友，因?yàn)槲覀冇龅嚼щy時(shí)，他們總是幫助我們We should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties,they always give us a hand.當(dāng)志愿者離開(kāi)的時(shí)候，那些老人們感謝了他們的善舉。When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people

6、thanked them for their kindness.我們希望如果你方便的話，能夠接受我們的邀請(qǐng)We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.如果你能給我這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)我將不勝感激你Id appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity1.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過(guò)去分詞)2.They sang and laughed as they went

7、back to school.(使用V-ing形式) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.二.用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作主語(yǔ).賓語(yǔ).賓補(bǔ).定語(yǔ).狀語(yǔ)3).她答應(yīng)上學(xué)不再遲到了。 4) 正在建的那座房子將下個(gè)月完工。5)請(qǐng)給我一支鋼筆寫字6) 每一件事情做完后，我們坐在院子里與老人們聊天 Everything done, we sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.She promise

8、d not to be late for school.The house being build will be finished next month.Please give me a pen to write with.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. As far as I know, everyone is happy

9、 about this new arrangement of things.Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. 三、使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連詞成句連句成文（找出好的連詞） Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ (就在這時(shí)）he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ (以便)I could travel around in the west .3. It was not long _ (就) the police came .whenin ord

10、er thatbefore課堂練習(xí)請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又刑钌锨‘?dāng)?shù)倪B接詞。4. Do you agree with me? _ , （如果這樣）do write to me soon.5. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, （更重要的是)we can pay a visit to some places of interest.6. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends. _, （結(jié)果）I saved $80.If soWhats more /BesidesAs a result 聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織

11、某考察團(tuán)正在我國(guó)某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況： 1)大?。航?00戶人家，約500口人。 2)變化：過(guò)去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來(lái)的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過(guò)改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。 注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Practice 書(shū)面表達(dá)：Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100

12、families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in

13、 the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has

14、 changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a

15、 much better life than before . 書(shū)面表達(dá)：比較兩篇作文并給計(jì)分Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small .most children cant go to school Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age

16、children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here.

17、 Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 17-18分23-24分1.表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 （三)高考大綱中常用的連接詞另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; there

18、fore; as a result但是，然而，相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 3. 表示因果關(guān)系如果，只要: if ; on condition ( that ); as long as除非: unless 否則: or else 當(dāng) 的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后來(lái)， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來(lái): lately; recently 從 :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on4. 表示條件關(guān)系5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 首先， 最主要的: firstly; above all 其次: secondly; next 然后: then; 最后: finally; in the end 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as 換句話說(shuō): in other words; that is to say6. 表示特定