1、讀后續(xù)寫：怎么寫？怎么教？劃線詞（形式）12開放性（內(nèi)容）浙江讀后續(xù)寫 vs 山東讀后續(xù)寫情節(jié)+語言1.情節(jié): 先框架后細節(jié)，指向主題2.語言: Keep the flow/Show, dont tell.3.規(guī)范: 卷面+字數(shù)學生怎么寫？先框架后細節(jié)故事梗概：Gilleece是一家酒吧的老板。來他店里就餐的女士的裝有婚戒的錢包被偷了，經(jīng)過警方調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)是一個叫Prather的小男孩偷走了。Gilleece了解后，得知Prather家境苦難，食不果腹，無奈只能偷錢買吃的，并且最后把裝著戒指的錢包扔進了河里。他決定幫助小男孩找回戒指，于是雇了人潛入河中找尋。情節(jié)Gilleece paid two

2、divers to search where Prather had thrown the wallet. .Then suddenly one of the divers came up to the surface of the water. .Keep the flowUse pronoun to refer to the charater/thing/object previously mentioned. (form)Use linking words. (logic)語言Show. Dont tell!He was anxious/worried/concerned.After h

3、ours of waiting, there was still no sign of the two divers coming out of the water. Tears began to well up in his eyes and he couldnt help shaking life a leaf, a surge of fear to be charged flashing across his mind.Anxiously pacing back and forth on the dock, Gilleece couldnt help keeping his finger

4、s crossed, praying for the tiny ring to be found in the vast and deep water.修飾修辭語言 Gilleece paid two divers to search where Prather had thrown the wallet. The divers jumped into the water and everyone sorted to wait silently. Afraid of being accused and sent to prison, Prather trembled a lot as he s

5、tared at the water. Gilleeve noticed his uneasiness and told Prather that it was OK. Prather was so anxious that he was about to cry. However, an hour passed since the search began but the divers still couldnt find the lost wallet. Gelleece sighed and decided to treminate the search. Then suddenly o

6、ne of the divers came up to the surface of the water. . Gilleece paid two divers to search where Prather had thrown the wallet. Watching them jump into the strong current, Gilleece, not knowing what to do or what to say, had no choice but to wait with anxiety. Behind him stood Prather. Afraid of bei

7、ng accused of stealing and sent to prison, he was trembling like a leaf as he stared at the water. Gilleece noticed his uneasiness and comforted him that everything would be fine. However, hours passed since the search began and the divers still couldnt find the lost wallet. At the same time, the po

8、lice were ready to take the boy to prison. To make things worse, the sun was sinking in the west. Gilleece sighed and reluctantly decided to terminate the search.1.情節(jié): 先框架后細節(jié)2.語言: Keep the flow/Show, dont tell.3.規(guī)范: 卷面+字數(shù)學生怎么寫？1.情節(jié): 先框架后細節(jié)2.語言: Keep the flow/Show, dont tell.3.規(guī)范: 卷面+字數(shù)學生怎么寫？1.授人以漁2.

9、修改評價3.躬行實踐教師怎么教？Understand WHY故事梗概：三給小朋友，TJ、Julie和Kim在路邊玩耍，突然壞人出現(xiàn)，綁架并帶走了Kim。TJ沉著冷靜勇敢機智，當機立斷自己追綁匪，并讓Julie去告知Kim的父母，喊人來幫忙?！癆 bad guy just picked Kim up and took her away!” yelled Julie.At that very moment, Kims parents arrived. Understand WHY “A bad guy just picked Kim up and took her away!” yelled Ju

10、lie. Kims parents were dumbstruck by this shocking news but they, very soon, came to themselves and dashed out of the house following Julie. At the same time TJ was running as fast as he could until he finally caught up with the man in the dead end of the alley, who was trying to push the frightened

11、 poor little Kim into his mini van. It was no easy task since Kim was struggling and fighting so hard with all her strength, crying out loud for help yet there was no one around except TJ. Without a second of hesitation, TJ threw himself at the tall strong guy, grabbed one of his arms and bit him ha

12、rd. The man felt the pain and let go of Kim, but he was so irritated that he turned to TJ. At that very moment, Kims parents arrived. “Stop! The police are on their way!” shouted the father. Seeing that he was cornered and outnumbered, the guy paused and then started to step back inch by inch, looki

13、ng around in an attempt to find his way out. Taking this chance, TJ quickly took the hand of Kim, who was still in great shock and fear with tears down her cheeks, and ran towards her parents. The moment they were hugged by Kims parents, the police arrived and quickly they arrested the guy. “I was just trying to do what I could to help my friend.” TJ s