Module3MyFirstRideonaTrain第1頁(yè)Writing第2頁(yè)寫作五步驟1.審清主題看題目中包括到了哪些關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)，這些點(diǎn)要全部包含其中2.搜集素材素材搜集一定要在已經(jīng)將關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)包含其中基礎(chǔ)上，在頭腦中進(jìn)行相關(guān)內(nèi)容串聯(lián)。3.編寫句子：句子編寫過(guò)程中要主要句子成份一定要完整；詳細(xì)語(yǔ)法使用一定要正確（主謂一致，主格，賓格，固定短語(yǔ)等）；省略掉累贅無(wú)須要句子。

4.提醒技巧回想自己曾經(jīng)記憶過(guò)好句型，將簡(jiǎn)單句適當(dāng)轉(zhuǎn)換為高級(jí)句子。5.WriteaParagraph\Paragraphs連句成文Firstly,First,Firstofall,Secondly,Then,Afterthis/that,Finally,Last,Lastly,and,however,therefore.第3頁(yè)Brainstorming:試著描述一次你旅行，寫出相關(guān)可能包括到關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：第4頁(yè)ITEMSDETAILStimeplacespersonstransportWhattodoWeather;climateHowwefeel第5頁(yè)ITEMSDETAILStimeLastsummerholidayOntheNationalDayAttheageoftwelveLastSundayplaceThe___MountainTheSummerPalace（頤和園）ThemuseumtheForestPark（森林公園）personsWithmycousinsWithmyparentsWithmyauntsWithmyfriendstransportBytrainBybusBysubwayBybikeWhattodoClimbmountain,Seeforeigners,Talk,LearnfromeachotherGoboating,Haveapicnic,BecaughtwithaheavyrainTired,expensive,Toomanyvisitors,

enjoythemselves,wanttovisitoncemoreWeather;ClimateSnowy;Winter.ColdCloudy;SummerhotSunny;Autumn/fallcoolRainy;SpringwarmHowwefeelexcitedEnjoyedourselvesunforgettableMemorable（難忘，值得紀(jì)念）第6頁(yè)August14th,itwascloudy.MycollegesandIhadavisittotheGreatOceanRoad（大洋路）inAustralia.（時(shí)間，天氣，人物，目地）第7頁(yè)

WestartedfromMelbourne.Wedrovealongthefreewaythroughthedesertandforests.(旅程以及交通工具）第8頁(yè)Wesawsomekangaroosandkoalasalongtheroad.（見聞）第9頁(yè)第10頁(yè)Finally,fourhourslater,wearrivedattheGreatOceanRoad.

（注意寫作中連詞利用）第11頁(yè)Atthismomentitbegantoraincatsanddogs.猛烈大雨（旅途中天氣改變）第12頁(yè)Intherain,thewaves,rocksandwindslookedsplendid(壯觀).(旅途中景色）第13頁(yè)Itookalotofpicturesthere.(我活動(dòng)）

第14頁(yè)Afterawhile,therainstoppedandtherainbowappeared.（天氣改變）Inthesun,theseawasdeepblueandtherocksweregolden.第15頁(yè)It’sverybeautiful.Thisisamemorabletrip.(結(jié)束語(yǔ)：多為對(duì)上文寫作內(nèi)容總結(jié)，可表示自己感受等）

第16頁(yè)August14,itwasacloudywinterinAustralia.MycollegesandIhadavisittotheGreatOceanRoad.WestartedfromMelbourne.Wedrovealongthefreewaythroughthedesertandforests.Wesawsomekangaroosandkoalasbytheroad.Finally,fourhourslater,wearrivedattheGreatOceanRoad.Atthismomentitbegantoraincatsanddogs.Intheheavyrain,thewaves,windsandrockslookedsplendid(壯觀).Itookalotofpicturesthere.Afterawhile,therainstoppedandtherainbowappeared.Inthesun,theseawasdeepblueandtherocksweregolden.It’sveryattractive.Ienjoyedmyselfverymuch第17頁(yè)１．在作文中用到第一人稱用來(lái)描述真實(shí)或者想想類發(fā)生在自己身上事件Instructions第18頁(yè)2.可能用到時(shí)態(tài)（參考時(shí)態(tài)）普通過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)：e.g.MycollegesandIhadavisittotheGreatOceanRoadinAustralia.過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)e.g.Itwasrainingforabouthalfanhour.過(guò)去完成時(shí)e.g.Thetrainhadalreadyleftbythetimewegottothestation.

第19頁(yè)作業(yè)：依據(jù)你自己寫出關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)，結(jié)合練習(xí)冊(cè)60頁(yè)