高考作文滿分練—求助信◆題型解讀：在求助信中應(yīng)開門見山，直截了當(dāng)?shù)匕涯阌龅降碾y題或者困惑告訴對(duì)方，并向?qū)Ψ角笾?。?yīng)注意：（1）向別人征求意見，態(tài)度一定要誠懇，語氣委婉；（2）把握時(shí)態(tài)：應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表明目前自己存在的困難，用一般將來時(shí)描述自己得到幫助后的進(jìn)步?！糇⒁猓鹤魑牡闹黧w時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般將來時(shí)偶爾穿插。◆滿分模板：◆Dear__________(寫信對(duì)象),Mynameis__________;I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein___________(交代自己面臨的困難).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat___________（提出令自己苦惱的問題）.What’smore,Idon’tknow___________（進(jìn)一步說明自己的困境）I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto_________sothat____________（再次請(qǐng)求對(duì)方的幫助）.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua◆優(yōu)秀作文欣賞：題目1：（2016全國卷1）假如你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)和個(gè)人簡歷（resume）。給外教MsJenkins寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫Sample:DearMsJenkins,I'mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.Inordertogainsomesocialexperienceandimprovemyworkability.I'mgoingtotakeapart-timejobduringthesummervacation.Sointerestedinthepositioninaforeign-capturedcompanyamIthatI’vealreadywrittenanapplicationletterandmyresumeallinEnglish.However,I’mafraidthattheremightbesomegrammarmistakesorinappropriateformatinthematerialsthatIprepared.Wouldyoubesokindastocorrectthemistakesandimprovetheformatoftheapplicationandresumeforme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpme.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua題目2.假如你是李華，你家鄉(xiāng)的梨花節(jié)(EwhaFestival)負(fù)有盛名，你寫了一篇英文宣傳稿，想請(qǐng)外籍教師Bob幫忙潤色。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示用英語給Bob寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.求助事由；2.求助內(nèi)容；3.表達(dá)感激注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。Sample:Deerbob,I’mwritingtoyouinthehopethatyouwillbesokindastodomeafavor.WhenitcomestotheEwhaFestival.There'snodenyingthatitenjoysagreatreputationinmyhometown.I,foralongtime,havebeendesiringtowriteanappealingarticletomakeitbetterknown.However,onlywhenIputtheideaintopracticedidIfindmyEnglishfarfromsatisfying.AsfarasIknow,youhavesuchagoodcommandofwrittenEnglishasimpressesmealot.Therefore,I’mwonderingwhetheryoucouldtakethetroubletohavemydraftpolishedatyourconvenience.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua

英語作文-求助信HowtoWriteaLetterofRequestTask1：下面是2011課標(biāo)卷高考作文，請(qǐng)閱讀范文，并找出求助信件的框架結(jié)構(gòu)（通常為三部分）：假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心（LearningCenter）的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書面預(yù)約，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信：1.本人簡歷2.求助內(nèi)容3.約定時(shí)間4.你的聯(lián)系方式（Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678)注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.I’mwritingtoaskforhelp.IcameherelastmonthandIfindmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-makingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.Pleaseletmeknowwhichdayisokwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua@1236.com;12345678.Thanksforyourkindnessinadvance.Lookforwardtoyourreply.yours,LihuaCommonstructureofarequestletter:1.Opening:Introduceyourself&_______________politely.2.Body:Describeyour_________&_____________again.Makesomespecificrequirementsifnecessary.3.End:Give___________tothepersonwhowillhelpyou.Usefulexpressionsforwritingarequestletter:A.Usefulexpressionsforanopening：寫信尋求幫助。(用至少兩種方式表達(dá))(a).________________________________________________________________________________.(b).________________________________________________________________________________.Moreexpressions:B.Usefulexpressionsfordescribingyourproblems:高三學(xué)生，地理學(xué)習(xí)有困難。(用至少兩種方式表達(dá))(a)_______________________________________________________________________________.(b)_______________________________________________________________________________.Moreexpressions:努力過，但人際交往仍然有問題。(用至少兩種方式表達(dá))(a)______________________________________,interpersonalrelationshipisstillaheadacheforme.(b)______________________________________,interpersonalrelationshipisstillanobstacleformetoovercome.C.Usefulexpressionsforfeelings,request&appreciation：(1)Havingfailedforsomanytimes,I________________________________________.（描述情緒）(2)請(qǐng)求幫助，表示謝意。（用至少兩種方式表達(dá)）（a）________________________________________________________________________________.（b）_________________________________________________________________________________.Moreexpressions:Task2結(jié)合所學(xué)句型、根據(jù)提示、適當(dāng)拓展，撰寫下面的求助信：（2011山東卷）假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個(gè)月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽(speechcontest)，你在資料搜集、語言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫一封電子郵件：a．詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；b．談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請(qǐng)Tom幫忙；c．告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。注意：a．詞數(shù)：100左右；b．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearTom,It’samonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.①(問候)__________________________________?IamgoingtoBeijingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJulythissummer.②（我要認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.However,③（搜集資料困難）_____________________________________________________________.Meanwhile,④（語言運(yùn)用困難）_________________________________________________________________________.⑤（求助并感謝）_____________________________________________________________.IalsohopethatthegreateffortIammakingwillpayoff.IhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.YoursSincerely,LiHuaTask3下面是一位同學(xué)的習(xí)作，根據(jù)所學(xué)內(nèi)容，找出文章中4個(gè)需要改進(jìn)的句子：假如你叫李華，在光明中學(xué)讀書，在高中學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到一些問題，想得到老師的幫助，并想給班級(jí)的英語老師提一些建議，以幫助自己學(xué)好英語。下面表格中只給了簡單的提示，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況給英語老師寫一封求助信，內(nèi)容如下：Dearteacher,MynameisLiHua.Iwannayoutohelpme.IhavemetmanydifficultiesinlearningEnglish.First,Ifindourtextsfullofnewwordsthatareverydifficultformetoremember.Besides,thetextsaretoolongformetorecite.What’smore,grammarisalsoverydifficulttolearn.Facedwithsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Youshouldintroduceussomegoodwaystolearnnewwordssothatwecanrememberthemmoreeasily.Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyoutoteachthetextmoreslowlysothattheaveragestudentslikemecaneasilyfollowyou.Also,Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomerulesandgoodwaysoflearninggrammar.I’msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudyifyoucananswermyquestionandfollowmyadvice.Yours,LiHua

高考英語作文-求助咨詢信假如你是某學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席張華，計(jì)劃為高三畢業(yè)典禮拍攝一段微視頻（micro-video），請(qǐng)給你學(xué)校國際交換生Peter寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.說明拍攝微視頻的想法和目的；2.邀請(qǐng)他參加拍攝；3.詢問他的建議等制作/拍攝短片：make/record/shootamicro-videoI’mZhangHua，thechairmanofStudents’Unioninourschool.Withthegraduationapproaching,Iamplanningtoshootamiro-videoforgraduationceremony.Now,I'mwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavorbyhelpingmeaccomplishit.Aimingtokeeptheunforgettablememoryofthegraduatesandmemorizetheirpreciousschoollife,thevideoisintendedtocaptureaseriesofwonderfulmomentsandinterviewstudentsandteacherstoexpresstheirgoodwishesforthefuture.Havingknownthatyouareexperiencedinphotography,Isincerelyhopeyoucouldsparesometimetohelpus.Meanwhile,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldkindlygiveussomepracticalsuggestions.Itwouldbemygreathonorandpleasureifyoucouldacceptmyinvitationandjoinus.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.題目要求：假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，父母答應(yīng)你今年高三畢業(yè)后去英國作10天觀光旅游。請(qǐng)你給英國網(wǎng)友TOM寫封電子郵件，咨詢以下事情：1、不隨旅游團(tuán)的食宿、交通等問題。2、必看景點(diǎn)與時(shí)間安排。3、邀請(qǐng)他到中國觀光。格式如下：DearTom,How'severythinggoing?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

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