第第頁P(yáng)art1Comparethetwopassagesandfillintheassessmentformbelow.★Passage1DearStephen,I'msorrytohearthatyoufeelworriedaboutyourseniorhighschoollife.NowI'mgoingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Infact,therearemanythingsforyoutolearninseniorhigh.Youshouldlearntostudywell.Studyisimportantforeveryoneandeveryonestudieshard.Youshouldlearntobeagoodperson,becauseeveryoneneedsgoodfriends.Andyoushouldlearntotakepartinsomeinterestingsportsandout-dooractivities,too.Atlast,Ihopemysuggestionscanhelpyouinsomeway.AndIhopeyouwillhaveawonderfulseniorhigh!Yours,John★Passage2DearStephen,I'msorrytoknowthatyouareworried.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonwhattolearninseniorhigh.Herearemyopinions.Firstly,youshouldlearntostudywell.Studyinseniorhighismorechallenging,soyou'dbetterfindeffectivelearningmethodstolearnefficiently.Besides,learningtobeanicepersonsialsoofgreatimportance.It'snecessaryforyoutobesincereandfriendly,becauseonlyinthiswaycanyoumakemorefriends.What'smore,don'tforgettotakepartinsomesportsandout-dooractivities,whicharereallyhelpfulinbuildingupyourbodyandenrichingyourschoollife.Allinall,takeiteasy!EverythingwillbeOK!Wishyouhaveawonderfulseniorhigh!Yours,LisaAssessmentofthepassagesAspectsQuestionsPassagePassageAspectsQuestions12StructureContentDoesthepassagehavethebeginning,bodyandendingparts?StructureContentDoesthepassagehavetopicsentences?Doesthepassagegivereasonablesuggestionsonseniorhighschoollife?Arethereenoughsupportingdetails(eg.explainingreasons;givingexamples)foreachkeypoint?Arethesupportingdetailscloselyrelatedtothetopicsentences?Arethereanygrammarorspellingmistakes?7.1sthepassagecohesive(銜接的)andcoherent(連貫的)withlogicalrelationshipsandproperTtransitions(銜接詞、短語)betweensentencesandLanguageparagraphs?8.Doesthewriterexpressthesamemeaningusingvariedvocabularyandsentencepatterns(語言表達(dá)多樣化)?★★★Think:Whatproblemsdoespassagehave?Part2ToimproveyourwritingSupportingdetails★Comparethefollowingpairsofsentencesandsummarizehowtoadddetails.--Heisaniceperson,soeveryonewantstomakefriendswithhim.--Heisafriendlyandwarm-heartedperson,soeveryonewantstomakefriendswithhim.--Listeningtomusicisaperfectwaytoreducestress.--Listeningtomusicisaperfectwaytoreducestress.Forexample,lightmusicmakesyourelaxed,androckmusichelpstoliftyourspirits.--Whenyoufeelworried,talktoyourparents.--Whenyoufeelworried,talktoyourparents,becausetheymaygiveyousomeeffetivesuggestions.--TheSpringFestivalisveryimportantinChina.--TheSpringFestivalisveryimportantinChina.Whenitcomes,almosteveryChinesereturnshometogettogetherwithhisorherfamily.★Summary--toaddsupportingdetails,wecan:★Haveatry!Ihatethebadweathertoday.Myfatherisawarm-heartedman.SquaredancingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Cohesionandcoherence(銜接與連貫)★Comparethefollowingpairsofsentences/paragraphsandsummarizehowtomakethepassagemorecohesiveandcoherent.--Ithinkthismodelplaneiswonderful.Iwon'tbuyitbecauseofitshighprice.--Ithinkthismodelplaneiswonderful.However,Iwon'tbuyitbecauseofitshighprice.--Youshouldlearntobeagoodperson,becauseagoodpersonalwayshelpsothers.--Youshouldlearntobeagoodperson,becauseithelpsyoutomakemorefriends.--Chengduhasvariousdeliciousfood.Eatingdeliciousfoodcanmakeyouhappy.Ahappymoodisveryimportantforyourhealth.--Chengduhasvariousdeliciousfood,suchashotpotandMapotofu.Whenyoucomehere,don'tmissthem!Ipromisetheywon'tdisappointyou!★Summary--tomakethepassagemorecohesiveandcoherent,weshould:★Haveatry!Onlinecourseshavesomeadvantages.Theyareconvenient,becauseyoucanlearnsomethingnew.Theyhavedisadvantages.Manythingshavedisadvantages,soweshouldtakethemseriously.Variedlanguage(語言表達(dá)的多樣性)★Comparethefollowingpairsofparagraphsandsummarizehowtovarythelanguage.--MrLiismymathteacher.MrLihelpsmealotwithmymath.IadmireMrLiverymuch.--MrLiismymathteacher.Hehelpsmealotwithmymath.Iadmirehimverymuch.--Inmyfamily,hobbiesvaryfrompersontoperson.Myfatherlikesreading,whilemymotherlikescooking.Asforme,IlikewatchingTVandlisteningtomusic.--Inmyfamily,hobbiesvaryfrompersontoperson.Myfatherlikesreading,whilemymotherenjoyscooking.Asforme,IamfondofwatchingTVandlisteningtomusic.--TolearnEnglishwell,itisimportanttoreadmoreEnglishbooks.Besides,itisalsohelpfultopracticespeakingandlisteningeveryday.--TolearnEnglishwell,itisimportanttoreadmoreEnglishbooks.Besides,practicingspeakingandlisteningeverydayishelpful,too.★Summary--tovarythelanguageinapassage,wecan:★Haveatry!Doingsportsisausefulwaytoreducestress.Doingsportshelpsyouforgetthetroubleandmakesyourefreshed.Talkingwithyourfriendsisalsoausefulwaytoreducestress.Part3Task--Improvethewriting假設(shè)你是李華，你校來訪的美國學(xué)生代表團(tuán)想了解中國太極拳(TaiChi)。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇發(fā)言稿。太極拳的歷史與地位2.學(xué)習(xí)太極拳的好處3.學(xué)習(xí)建議注意：詞數(shù)100左右Readthepassage,findoutthepossibleproblemsanddecidewhatkindofproblems

theyare.Markthenumbersbesidethemasfollows.lackssupportingdetailsisnotcohesiveorcoherentthelanguageisrepetitiveanddullImprovethepassageShareingroupsandcollectyourideas.Presentyourworkinclass.Part4Homework.….1.Writeapassage.Goodmorning,everyone!mLiHua.Welcometoourschool!I'mhappyto活動的目的和內(nèi)容;你的心得體會。1?活動的目2.你的心得1.Writeapassage.Goodmorning,everyone!mLiHua.Welcometoourschool!I'mhappyto活動的目的和內(nèi)容;你的心得體會。1?活動的目2.你的心得趣，于是寫郵件向你了解基本情況。請你給她寫一封回信，簡要介紹這次ineseTaiChitoyou.注意：100詞左右。TajChinasalonghistory.TaiChimaydatebacktoasearlyasTangFindapartnerandpeeredit（同伴互改）thepassageyou'vewritten.Dynasty.TaiChiisveryimportantinChina.BesidesTaiChi,C