65各地中考真題再現(xiàn)012021年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)高分作文攻略（全國(guó)通用版）（一）習(xí)近平總書(shū)記在全國(guó)教育大會(huì)上提出了“立德樹(shù)人”的人才培養(yǎng)根本任務(wù)，作為初中畢業(yè)生，你有什么人生規(guī)劃？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。提示：1.作為中國(guó)人而自豪：過(guò)去，我國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)文化影響了世界：今天，祖國(guó)在全國(guó)人民的努力下越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大，許多科技世界領(lǐng)先；…2.為實(shí)現(xiàn)“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”而奮斗：學(xué)會(huì)做一個(gè)懂感恩、守規(guī)矩、善良誠(chéng)信的人；不畏難，努力學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、提高能力，將來(lái)成為一名…要求：語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；演講中不得提及生個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息，如人名、校名或地名等；詞數(shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。Hello,everyone!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou!【寫(xiě)作思路】本文屬于材料作文，談?wù)撟鎳?guó)的偉大強(qiáng)盛以及為實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)我們應(yīng)該做的努力。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！緟⒖挤段摹縃ello,everyone!AsaChinese,Iamsoproudofit.Inthepast,ourgreattraditionalculturemadeadifferencetotheworld,suchassailing,communicatingandsoon.Nowadays,ourcountryisbecomingstrongerandstrongerbyworkinghardofallChinese.Alotofscienceandtechnologyleadtheworld,suchashighspeed,Chang’e4andHongKong-Zhuhai-MacauBridgeandsoon.Asateenager,weshoulddoasfollowstoachieveourChinesedream.Firstofall,wearesupposedtothankallthepeoplewhodevotethemselvestomakingourcountrywonderful.What’smore,weneedfollowtherules.Inschoolweshouldobeytheschoolrules.Onlybydoingthesedimplethingscanwebecomeapersonthatthecountryneeds.Inaddition,we’dbetternotlieandbeahonestmaninorderthatallpeoplecantrustus.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtryourbesttoworkhardandwhenfacedifficulties,wenevergiveup.Iamgoingtobeascientists.IfIamascientist,Iwilldomoreresearchesandletothercountriesadmireus.That'sall.Thankyou!這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如beproudof,makeadifferenceto,suchas,andsoon,比較級(jí)and比較級(jí),devoteoneselftodoing,inorderthat,tryone’sbest以及firstofall,what’smore,inaddition和lastbutnotleast等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。（二）假如下面是你們班教室里的照片墻，墻上記錄了中考前學(xué)習(xí)和生活的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴流，以及考前老師的溫馨提示。忘不了備戰(zhàn)中考時(shí)充實(shí)而快樂(lè)的時(shí)光，請(qǐng)你以“PreparationforHighSchoolEntranceExam”（備戰(zhàn)中考）為題，寫(xiě)一篇80-100詞的短文。1.請(qǐng)闡述圖中信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；3.字跡工整，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)正確。學(xué)習(xí)區(qū)Listentotheteacher生活區(qū)Eathealthyfood提示區(qū)AvoidmakingmistakesTakenotesExerciseLearntorelaxFinishdoing…HaveenoughsleepBeontime………PreparationforHighSchoolEntranceExam________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫(xiě)作思路】這篇作文要求我們以PreparationforHighSchoolEntranceExam為題，介紹備戰(zhàn)中考的時(shí)光。題目中用照片墻的形式呈現(xiàn)了備戰(zhàn)的具體內(nèi)容，并給出了一些關(guān)鍵詞，學(xué)生們應(yīng)依據(jù)這些圖片和關(guān)鍵詞，展開(kāi)合理的想象，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括三個(gè)方面：分學(xué)習(xí)、生活和提示三個(gè)方面解析介紹，注意分清層次和結(jié)構(gòu)，合理安排各個(gè)方面的信息，注意上下文的銜接、過(guò)渡應(yīng)自然。短文應(yīng)以第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子。可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，清晰、準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)自己的意思。而為了提升作文檔次，應(yīng)在文中穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！緟⒖挤段摹縋reparationforHighSchoolEntranceExamHighSchoolEntranceExamisarriving.Istillrememberthedayswhenourteachersandstudentsworkedtogethertoprepareforit.Inordertogetagoodgrade,wealllistenedtotheteacherscarefullyinclassandtooknotesatthesametime.Afterclass,wefinishedourhomeworkontime.Ifwehadsomedifficultproblems,ourteacherswouldexplaintousindetails.Alltheteachersencouragedusnottogiveupandkeeponstudying.Besides,tostudywell,healthcomesfirst.Ourteacherstoldustoeathealthyfood,suchaseggs,meat,vegetablesandsoon.Wealsodidexerciseeverydayandhadenoughsleep.Theteacherstoldusnottofeelstressfulandlearntorelax.Wemustbecarefulintheexamandavoidmakingmistakes.What’smore,wemustbeontime.Weallfelttiredandnervous,butwhatafullandhappytime!這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己和老師們一起備戰(zhàn)中考的一段充實(shí)、快樂(lè)的時(shí)光。題目以照片墻的形式展示了備戰(zhàn)的過(guò)程和內(nèi)容，非常新穎獨(dú)特，分析照片墻可知，文章應(yīng)從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行介紹：學(xué)習(xí)、生活以及老師對(duì)學(xué)生的提示。這篇短文也正是按照這個(gè)思路進(jìn)行展開(kāi)敘述的。短文層次很清晰，敘述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，符合表達(dá)的需要，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，注意了動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。語(yǔ)句通順，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句子以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章的節(jié)奏。短文中使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如Istillrememberthedayswhenourteachersandstudentsworkedtogethertoprepareforit.、Ifwehadsomedifficultproblems,ourteacherswouldexplaintousindetails.、Besides,tostudywell,healthcomesfirst.Ourteacherstoldustoeathealthyfood,suchaseggs,meat,vegetablesandsoon.、Wemustbecarefulintheexamandavoidmakingmistakes.等等。（三）假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你以初三畢業(yè)生的身份給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。要求如下：1.重點(diǎn)分享你在處理學(xué)習(xí)困難方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)以及你下一步學(xué)習(xí)或生活的打算；2.郵件不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫(xiě)作思路】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！緟⒖挤段摹縄'mgoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.Lookingbackonthreeyearsofjuniorhighschoollife,therearemanygainsanddifficulties.IhavemanydifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Attheverybeginning,listeningseemedalittledifficultforme.SoIhavebeendoingalotoflisteningpractice,suchaslisteningtotapes,watchingEnglishTVprograms.AndIfounditreallyhelpedalot.Infact,therearesomemorehelpfulwaystolearnEnglishwell.Forexample,IenjoysingingEnglishsongsandIwanttojoinanEnglishcluborfindapenpalfromEnglish-speakingcountries.Ibelievethatnothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.Iamabouttostarthighschoollife,Iwillcontinuetoworkhard,Ihopeyoubravelyfacejuniorhighschoollife,haveahappyjuniorhighschoollife.這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ),如:SoIhavebeendoingalotoflisteningpractice,suchaslisteningtotapes,watchingEnglishTVprograms.，這些文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（四）假如你是英語(yǔ)校報(bào)的編輯李平，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以信息，給新入學(xué)的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封信，歡迎他們來(lái)到新學(xué)校，并對(duì)他們?cè)趯W(xué)校如何做合格的中學(xué)生提出建議。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.歡迎他們來(lái)到新學(xué)校。2.介紹學(xué)校：(1)課程有趣；(2)有多名外教；(3)活動(dòng)豐富。3.請(qǐng)對(duì)他們?cè)趯W(xué)校如何做合格的(qualified)中學(xué)生提出具體建議。寫(xiě)作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。Dearnewfriends,It’smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【寫(xiě)作思路】這是一篇書(shū)信作文，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于學(xué)校生活的。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象提出自己的建議。不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【參考范文】Dearnewfriends,It'smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.Welcometoournewschool.Ourschooliscleanandbeautiful.Theclassroomsarebigandbright.Allthesubjectsareveryinteresting.IamgoodatEnglish.Therearemanyforeignteachersinourschool.Inoursparetime,wecancommunicatewiththemandimproveouroralEnglishskills.Ourafterclassactivitiesarealsorichandcolorful.Therearedifferentclubsinourschool.Youcantakepartinallkindsofactivitiesyoulike.Nowyouaregoingtobemiddleschoolstudents.Howtobeaqualifiedmiddleschoolstudent?Atfirst,youshouldfollowtheschoolrules.It'salsoimportanttohavegoodstudyhabits.Youmustlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Ithinkyoushouldlearntosharethingswithyourclassmatesandhelpeachother.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing（五）回顧初中三年。有許多事令人難忘。校英語(yǔ)報(bào)如HaveYourSay欄目正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你選擇其中一個(gè)話題,并結(jié)合具體事例,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)你對(duì)某個(gè)人的謝意或歉意，參加此次征文活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)如下：say"thanks"to___________say"sorry"to_________1.benotgoodat...2.encouragemeto…3.makegreatprogress4….1.arguewith…2.nottalktoeachother3.regretdoing…4…..注意：(1)短文必須包括你所選擇話題的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)：80-100，書(shū)信格式已給出；(4)首句供參考Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I’dliketosay...Dear___________,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【寫(xiě)作思路】這個(gè)作文要求我們從題目中給出的兩個(gè)話題中選擇一個(gè)，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)你對(duì)某個(gè)人的謝意或歉意，參加學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的一個(gè)征文活動(dòng)。題目中利用表格的形式展示了兩個(gè)話題的主要結(jié)構(gòu)，具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱和第二人稱為主來(lái)敘述。文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先確定一個(gè)話題和人物；然后具體說(shuō)明你感謝他或者向他道歉的原因，這是文章的主體部分，敘述應(yīng)詳細(xì)，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感謝或歉意，并表達(dá)祝愿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整、充實(shí)，注意分清段落和層次；其次需注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯。句式結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，提升文章檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句直接使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！緟⒖挤段摹糠段?DearAlice,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosaythankstoyouforhelpingmewithmyEnglish.WhenIwasinGrade7,IwasnotgoodatEnglish.Ijusthidbehindmytextbookandneversaidanythinginclass.OnceIdidverybadlyinanEnglishtest,andIlostheart.However,youhadapatienttalkwithmeandencouragedmetobemoreactiveinclass.Sincethen,Ihaveworkedharderandmadegreatprogress.Ifeelluckytobeyourstudent.Thankyouagain.Wishyougoalluck.Yours,LiHua范文2DearAlan,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosaysorrytoyouforarguingwithyou.WhenwewereinGrade8,welostthechancetogetthefirstprizeinthefootballmatch.Ineverstoppedcomplainingtoyouthatitwasyouwhomissedthegoal.Butyoushoutedbackthatyouwerenottheonlyreason.Youwalkedoffangrily.Fromthenon,wedidn'ttalktoeachother.Ihavebeenregrettingdoingso.Soonwewillgraduatefromourschool.Let'sforgetaboutthepastandbecomegoodfriendsagain.Yours,LiHua這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向自己的同學(xué)表達(dá)了感謝或歉意。第一篇作文是向Alice表達(dá)了感謝，并詳細(xì)介紹了Alice幫助自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的過(guò)程；第二篇作文向Alan表達(dá)了歉意，介紹了由于足球比賽失利，互相埋怨，產(chǎn)生矛盾的過(guò)程，并表達(dá)了自己的悔意。文章內(nèi)容都非常豐富，敘述也很完整、詳細(xì)。兩篇作文都使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，如hid,said,won,lost等等。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言得體、地道，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如第一篇里WhenIwasinGrade7,IwasnotgoodatEnglish.、OnceIdidverybadlyinanEnglishtest,andIlostheart.、Sincethen,Ihaveworkedharderandmadegreatprogress.。再如第二篇中WhenwewereinGrade8,welostthechancetogetthefirstprizeinthefootballmatch.Ineverstoppedcomplainingtoyouthatitwasyouwhomissedthegoal.、Let'sforgetaboutthepastandbecomegoodfriendsagain.等等。（六）時(shí)光荏苒，初中三年轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比較，你會(huì)有很多變化。請(qǐng)以“Ihavechangedalot!”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，具體描述你最重要的變化及其如何發(fā)生的。要求：l.短文不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分；2.不少于60詞。提示：l.Whatdidyouusetobelike?2.Whatisthemostimportantchange?3.Andhowdidithappen?Tellastoryaboutit.Ihavechangedalot!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________