一、2016年專(zhuān)業(yè)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作題目大要（一）測(cè)試要求：寫(xiě)一篇200個(gè)單詞左右的作文，考試時(shí)間45分鐘，計(jì)20分。（二）2016年專(zhuān)四作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1.summary（6分）2.comments（12分）A.思想與表達(dá)（ideasandarguments）7分（滿分7分，此中6-7分優(yōu)秀，4-5分優(yōu)秀，3分一般，1-2分較差。）（1）思想內(nèi)容（content）內(nèi)容貼題；內(nèi)容充分；見(jiàn)解明確；論據(jù)支持論點(diǎn)；有獨(dú)到見(jiàn)解。（2）表完收效（effectiveness）表達(dá)清楚；有說(shuō)服力。（3）篇章組織結(jié)構(gòu)（rhetoricalorganization）每段有主題句；句間連結(jié)自然；段間過(guò)渡自然；第一部分明確提出見(jiàn)解；最后一部分自然得出結(jié)論；段落擺列合理。B.語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力（languageuse）5分（滿分5分，此中5分優(yōu)秀，3-4分優(yōu)秀，2分一般，1分較差。）（1）正確性（correctness）語(yǔ)法正確；句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確；固定搭配正確；用詞正確。（2）豐富性（richness）詞匯豐富；句子形式多樣。（3）得體性（appropriateness）語(yǔ)氣適合；語(yǔ)言地道。3.寫(xiě)作規(guī)范mechanics（2分）（滿分2分，此中2分優(yōu)秀，1.5分優(yōu)秀，1分一般，0.5分較差）單詞拼寫(xiě)正確；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確；大小寫(xiě)正確；書(shū)寫(xiě)雅觀；卷面齊整。優(yōu)選范文1Whenitcomestowhetherparentsshouldtaketheirchildrentospendholidaysduringterm-time,viewsontheissuevaryfrompersontoperson（.引入話題）Parentsclaimthatbydoingso,theycansavealotofmoneybornofbusyschoolholidays.Educationalofficialsstronglyopposethistendencyonthegroundthatitencouragestruancy,whichinturndamagesachild’（s兩education種見(jiàn)解）.Asaresult,UK’seducationauthoritiesarenowbanningparentsfromtakingtheirchildrenforholidaysduringterm-timetosavemoney（.概括資料）Frommyperspective,themeritsofbanningterm-timeholidaysoutweighitsdemerits（.陳述見(jiàn)解）Tobeginwith,takingtoughmeasuresonthiskindoftruancyisconducivetothenormalteachingprocess,oneofthekeyelementstoguaranteekidacademicperformance（.原因一）Asweknow,currently,teachershavethediscretiontoapproveacertaintimeofabsencefromschoolforeachchild.Bydefinitelyabolishingtherightofheadteachersto“authorizeabsence”fromtheclassroom,thoseteacherscanrarelybepesteredbyparentswhowanttotakechildrentogoonaholidayjusttosavemoney,whichseverelydisruptsteachingprocess（.詳細(xì)論證一）What’smore,withoutstrictpenaltiesimposedontheparentswholeadtotheirkid’splayingtruant,thoseparentscangraduallyviewaskingforholidayleaveasaright.（原因二）Oncethisculturalexpectationisformed,theleveloftruancywilldramaticallyincrease（.假設(shè)論證二）Accordingly,thegrowingtrendofterm-timeholidaysshouldbebannedwithnodelay.（重申論點(diǎn)）Inthisway,teacherscanimpartknowledgewithoutdisturbanceandparentswillbedeterredfromsavingmoneyattheexpenseofsacrificingtheirkid’seducation.范文2NewresearchhasshownthatalmostfouroutoftenparentsintheUKhavetakentheirchildrenoutofschooltogoonholidays.（描述背景）Costisthemainreasongivenbyparentsforsacrificingtheirchildren’seducation.Parentsaretobebanned,優(yōu)選however,byUK’sEducationAuthority,fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschooltogoduringtermtime.（總結(jié)資料。圍繞兩點(diǎn)：cost,ban）Shouldlocalauthoritiesstaggerschoolholidaystoenablefamilieswithchildrentotakeadvantageoftravelbargains?Orisitwrongforparentstojeopardizetheirchildren’seducationforthesakeofacheaperholiday?AsfarasIamconcerned,educationismoreimportant.（提出見(jiàn)解）Firstly,children’seducationmustcomefirst.Acheapholidayduringtheschoolseasonshouldn’tbethehildreasontotakeacoutofschool.Someparentsarenotwillingtosacrificeorscheduletheirlivesintermsoftheirchildren’sneeds.Thiskindofattitudewillinfluencetheirchildrendeeply.Itnowondersomanykidsarenotinterestedinschoolanddoneirstudy’ttakethseriously.（論據(jù)一）Secondly,schoolisn’tdaycarecenter.It’saneducationalinstitutionthatneedseverystudenttofollowitsrules.Takingachildonholidaywhenschoolisinsessionwilldisturbtheorderoftheschool.（論據(jù)二）Besides,itisdisruptiveforthechild,becausehewillhavetocatchupwhenhereturns（.論據(jù)三）Allinall,takingchildrenoutofschoolforacheaperholidayisirresponsiblebehavior（.總結(jié)前文）Thoseparentswouldriskbeingfinedfinanciallyandmorally.It’snotonlydskithatneedtogrowup——alotofparentsneedtoaswell.優(yōu)選二、2016專(zhuān)四寫(xiě)作部分問(wèn)題解析（一）作文審題問(wèn)題。1.不熟習(xí)專(zhuān)四改革后的寫(xiě)作題目設(shè)計(jì)特色，只看資料馬上著手寫(xiě)作，忽略了對(duì)材料的解析和概括。2.題目要修業(yè)生：Youshouldcommentonwhetherparentsshouldtakechildrenoutofschoolforholidaysduringtermtimeinordertosavemoney。有相當(dāng)一部分學(xué)生對(duì)題目中提到的家長(zhǎng)可否應(yīng)該利用假期帶領(lǐng)孩子出游的見(jiàn)解進(jìn)行了詳細(xì)的論證，但是他們忽略了題目要求的最后一個(gè)重要信息：inordertosavemoney，致使學(xué)生在闡述個(gè)人見(jiàn)解時(shí)根本沒(méi)有涉及savemoney。（二）語(yǔ)篇連結(jié)問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中若是忽略語(yǔ)篇的連結(jié)，就會(huì)致使句子和句子之間的邏輯凌亂、層次不分明、不能夠有力地論證見(jiàn)解。比方：Iaminclinedtobanthetermtimeholidays.Itcansavemoney.Childrenarebasedonthebeliefthattoprovestudyskills.Schoolsareagoodplaceforchildrentopractice（非連結(jié)句）Iaminclinedtobanthetermtimeholidaysbecauseitcansavemoney.Foronething,childrencanimprovetheirstudyskillsatschoolwhichisagoodplaceforchildrentopracticetheirabilities（連結(jié)句）（三）語(yǔ)言功底問(wèn)題：句式單一，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯誤用，用詞缺少變化。Isupportsuchthingbythegovernment.Educationplaysaveryimportantroleinaperson’sdevelopmentinearlieryears.Withouteducation,heretmaybemoresocialproblems,andthepoorpeoplehavefewerchancestomoveupwardthesocialladder.（句式單一，用詞簡(jiǎn)單）Iaminsupportofsuchmovebythegovernmentbecauseeducationliesintheheartofaperson’sdevelop