范文模范參照Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingbutcouldmakedecisionsbymyself.Besides,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinkso.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghomeforcollege.Atlast,Iwillbeontheirown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturnwheneverIneedhelp.IwasreadinganarticleinabookwhileIcameacrossawordIdidn’tknow.“Dad,whatisthemeaningoftheword?”Mydad,asheusualdidafterwork,waswatchinghismostfavoriteshow.“Youhavethedictionary,don’tyou?”heshotback.Hedidn’tevenlookupmyface.Iwentbackmyroom,andthereonmystudytableisthatdictionary.Ilookeditupandfoundit’sexactmeaning.TenyearhavepassedandIstillusethatdictionary,alongwiththelessonIreceivedearlierinlifefrommyoldman:tobeindependent.圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照DearSir,I'velearnedateachingassistantforforeignteachersiswantedinyourschool.I'mwritingtoapplytotheposition.Firstofall,IhadgraduatedfromAnhuiUniversityonemonthago.Havingexposedtoforeignteacherssinceayoungage,IcancommunicatewithothersinfluentlyEnglish,What'smore,yearsofexperiencesofbeingmonitormakesmeabrilliantorganizer,whowillhelpalottokeeptheclassinorder.ThemostimportantfactoristhatIlovekids,andI'mconfidentofmypatienceandcarewillundoubtedly,winhistrust.Allinall,Ithinkmyenthusiasmandfullsenseofresponsibilitywillmakemeaqualifyingteachingassistant.I'dappreciateyouifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHun【剖析】1.句意為我想要應(yīng)聘這個職位。applyfor為固定搭配，表示申請。故將to改為for。2.句意為我一個月前從大學(xué)畢業(yè)。這里察看的是時態(tài)問題。從amonthago可知，畢業(yè)應(yīng)該是過去時，應(yīng)該用一般過去時。故將had去掉。3.句意為從小的時候開始我就接觸了外國老師。察看explose用法，裸露與作者之間應(yīng)該是圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照被動語態(tài)。故在having后邊增加been。4.句意為我能和他人用流利的英語交流。fluently為副詞，不能夠修飾名詞。故將fluently改為fluent。5.句意為當(dāng)班長的多年經(jīng)歷讓我成為一個很好的組織者。experience沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將experiences改為experience。6.句意為這會對保持班級序次有很大幫助。該句為非限制性定語從句，而且此處的關(guān)系代詞應(yīng)該是指的是作者是一個很好的組織者，為一件事，不能夠用who。故將who改為which。7.句意為我的耐心和關(guān)懷會毫無疑問的贏得他們的相信，對此我很有信心。beconfidentof后邊加名詞。beconfidentthat引導(dǎo)從句。故將of改為that。由文意可知，作者是想當(dāng)助教。因此贏得的相信應(yīng)該是一群學(xué)生，而不是一個人。故將his改為their。9.句意為我認(rèn)為我的熱情和責(zé)任感，會讓我成為一名合格的助教。察看形容詞。qualified為吻合資格的。故將qualifying改為qualified。10.句意為若是你將我的申請列入考慮范圍內(nèi)的話，我將特別感謝。察看appreciate用法。wouldappreciateit...為固定搭配表示感謝。故將you改為it。OnenightIwasgoingtoworkonmyusuallybusroute.Uponourarriveattheterminal,InoticedthatIwastheonlypassengerleftonthebus.Ilookedaroundandsawamobilephoneinachairthatmusthavebeenleftbehindbythepassenger.Igiveittotheconductor.Twodaylater,theconductortoldmethatthepassengerwasverymuchhappythatIreturnedthemobilephone.Thepassengerwastryingtogethername,soshewantedtopostonFacebookaboutwhathadhappenedasasortofappreciation.Ithoughtitwasunnecessary.WhatwasimportantwaswhenIsawthesmileonherface,Iwashappy.46.第1處【答案】usually改為usual【剖析】用形容詞修飾名詞。第2處【答案】arrive改為arrival【剖析】Uponone’sarrival是固定用法，意思是某人到來時。第3處【答案】on改為in【剖析】句意：我發(fā)現(xiàn)我是汽車?yán)镂ㄒ皇Ｏ碌某丝?，on改為in。圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照第4處【答案】the改為a【剖析】泛指“一位乘客”，因此用不定冠詞。第5處【答案】give改為gave【剖析】發(fā)生在過去的事情，因此用一般過去式。第6處【答案】day改為days【剖析】Day是可數(shù)名詞，且被“two”修飾，因此用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。第7處【答案】去掉much【剖析】“特別快樂”，直接說veryhappy，因此去掉much。第8處【答案】her改為my【剖析】句意：這名乘客想要知道我的名字，因此her改為my。第9處【答案】so改為because【剖析】句意：因為她想要張貼在臉書上。表示原因，因此so改為because。第10處【答案】when前加thatThebluewhaleiscertainlythelargestanimalsontheplanettoday.Justtheheartofabluewhalecanweightasmanyasafamilycar.Youmightthinkthatsuchabiganimalwouldneedtoeatanotherbiganimalstosurviving.Surprising,thebluewhalefeedsonsomeofthesmalleroceananimals.Abluewhalecanlivebetween80and90years.Unfortunately,itisbelievethattherewereonly10,000to25,000alive.Theywerehuntedforinthe1900sbuthundredsofthousandsofthemwerekilled.Let’shopenumberofwhalesontheplanetstartstoincreaseinthecomingyears.Thebluewhaleiscertainlythelargestanimalsontheplanettoday.Justtheheartofablueanimalwhalecanweightasmanyasafamilycar.Youmightthinkthatsuchabiganimalwouldneedtomucheatanotherbiganimalstosurviving.Surprising,thebluewhalefeedsonsomeofthesmallerothersurviveSurprisingly圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照oceananimals.Abluewhalecanlivebetween80and90years.Unfortunately,itisbelievethattherewerebelievedareonly10,000to25,000alive.Theywerehuntedforinthe1900sbuthundredsofthousandsofthem去掉forandwerekilled.Let’shope∧numberofwhalesontheplanetstartstoincreaseinthecomingyears.aWhenmytwentiethbirthdayscame,Iwasnotathome.Inordertocelebratesuchimportantdaywithmyparents,Iwrotehimaletter,inwhichIthankedthemforhavingraisedmefortwentyyears,andexpressedmyloveforthem.Latermymothertellmewhentheyreadtheletter,tearswerefilledhereyes.Andmyfatherappearedverycool.Beforethat,hereaditalonecareful,andthenheputitawayintoadeskdrawer.IcanimaginethesceneclearlybecauseIknowfather.Beingamanwithlittlewords,heprefersshowhisloveformeinasilentway.61.birthdays改為birthday62.such后加an63.him改為them64.tell改為told65.去掉were66.And改為But67.Before改為After68.careful改為carefully69.little改為few70.prefers后加toMyparentsliveinthecountry.TheykeepadogcallingAhFu.OnedaymyparentwenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.Whiletheyworking,mysisterwalkedtotherivernearby.AhFufollowsherthere.Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhileshefellintotheriver.AhFubarkedandjumpedtothewaterimmediately.WhenmyparentsheardofAhFubarking,theyrantotheriver.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryinghislittlesister.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarm.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesister.1.calling改為called2.parent改為parents圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照they后加werethe改為a5.follows改為followed6.while改為whento改為into去掉heard后邊的ofhis改為mywarm改為warmlyLastsummer,tomydelight,IgotachancetogototheUnitedKingdom.IwaseagertoseehowEnglandwaslike.Althoughmyparentsobjectedtomydecisionatfirst,butfinallytheywerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledabroadalone.Feltexcited,Iboardedtheplane.Suddenly,however,Ifoundmyluggagesgoneandfelthelplessly.Itwasonthatmomentthattheairhostesscametomyassistance.Afterhelpingmefinditback,shesuggestedthatIattachedalabeltomysuitcaseonmynextjourney.Iwasthankfullytothekindladyforhishelp!Whatunforgettabletrip!Lastsummer,tomydelight,IgotachancetogototheUnitedKingdom.IwashoweagertoseewhatEnglandwaslike.Althoughmyparentsobjectedtomydecisionatfirst,butfinallytheywerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledhadabroadalone.Feltexcited,Iboardedtheplane.Suddenly,however,IfoundmyFeelingluggagesonthatmomentthattheairhostesscamegoneandfelthelplessly.Itwasatluggagetomyassistance.Afterhelpingmefinditback,shesuggestedthatIattachedaattachlabeltomysuitcaseonmynextjourney.Iwasthankfullytothekindladyforhisthankfulher∧help!Whatanunforgettabletrip!Nowadays,asthedevelopmentofhightechnology,smartphoneisverypopulartohighschoolstudent.Smartphoneonceisforbidden.Butnowithasbecomeaverycommon圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照toolforstudents.Alotofstudentskeephiseyesonsmartphonesallthetime.Teachersareannoyingaboutthissituation,sotheyfeelmoststudentsignorethemwhentheyaregivinglessons.Someteachersthinkitistimetoletthestudentshandtohandintheirsmartphones.Idon’tthinkitisgoodidea.Evenfortheteachers,theyusedtheirphonessomuch,letalonethestudents.Theteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethodstocatchthestudents’interest.Nowadays,asthedevelopmentofhightechnology,smartphoneisverypopularwithtohighschoolstudents.Smartphoneonceisforbidden.Butnowithaswith/amongwastoolsforstudents.Alotofstudentskeephiseyesonsmarttoolbecomeaverycommontheirannoyingsophonesallthetime.Teachersareaboutthissituation,theyannoyedbecause/asfeelthatmoststudentsignorethemwhentheyaregivinglessons.Someteachersthinkitistimetoletthestudentstohandintheirsmartphones.∧usedIdon’tthinkitisagoodidea.Evenfortheteachers,theyusetheirphonessomuch,letalonethestudents.Theteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethodstocatchthestudents’interest.DearSir,I’mXiaoli,astudentofSenior3.Iamwritingtoaskyourselfforsomeadvice.SinceIenteredSenior3,myparentsandteachershavekeptaskingmetoboard（寄宿）intheschool.Theysayitwillbeverymuchconvenientformetoaskquestionwheneverandwherever.However,theythinkboardingwillmakethispossibletomakefullusemynighttime,andthatIcanalsodeveloptheabilitytolookaftermyself.However,inmyopinion,stayathomeintheeveningallowmemoretimetoworkatmylessons.Atasametime,IcanlearnwhichIthinkI’mnotgoodat.Ireallydon’tknowhowtodealwiththedisagreement.Canyouhelpmeout?Yours,圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照Xiaoli71.yourself改為you72.去掉much73.question改為questions74.However改為Besides75.this改為it76.use后邊加of77.stay改為staying78.allow改為allows79.a改為the80.which改為whatAsaSeniorTwostudent,myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourschoolfootballteam.WepracticeforthreetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVorontheInternettogether.Playfootballnotonlymakesusgrowtallandstrongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindsthatweplayfortheteaminsteadourselves.Also,sportsteachustheimportantofobeyingtherulesinamatch.Eachplayermustlistentothecaptain,whichistheleaderoftheteam.Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.AsaSeniorTwostudent,myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofouramschoolfootballteam.WepracticeforthreetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchTVorontheInternetPlayfootballnotonlymakesusgrowontogether.matchesPlayingtallandstrongbutalsogiveasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepusgivesmindsinthatweplayfortheteammindimportantimportanceofobeyingtherulesinwhichistheleaderoftheteam.Andwhowanttowinthegame.

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∧ofourselves.Also,sportsteachustheEachplayermustlistentothecaptain,mustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifweThewinterholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgesthatwecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnot圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照costmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.71.【答案】第1處how改為what第2chose處改為choose第3take處改為taking第4but處改為and;第5about處后加the第6處your改為our第7knowledges處改為knowledge第8除刪處can或can改為should第9thought處改為think第10many處改為muchAsthesayinggoes,chancesfavoredthepreparedmind.Ilearnedthisfromoneofmyexperience.Iwasnotchosenasmemberofthevolleyballteamofourschool.Becauseofthis,Idecidedtogiveupplayvolleyball.Luckily,mybestfriendstoppedmebutpointedoutthatitwasmylazinessandpoorpreparationwhichledtomyfailure.Afterthat,Ipracticedplayingvolleyballoneveryday.Whenanothertryoutarrived,Iwasfullpreparedandtriedmybest.Asaresult,Iwasselectedandbecameanimportantplayeronourschoolteam.Fromthis,Iamfirmlyconvincingthat,nomatterwhenchancesarrive,wewereabletoseizethemaslongaswegetwellprepared.Asthesayinggoes,chancesfavoredthepreparedmind.Ilearnedthisfromoneofmyfavorexperience.experiencesIwasnotchosenas∧memberofthevolleyballteamofourschool.Becauseofthis,I圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照adecidedtogiveupplayvolleyball.Luckily,mybestfriendstoppedmebutpointedoutthatitwasplayingandmylazinessandpoorpreparationwhichledtomyfailure.Afterthat,Ipracticedplayingvolleyballthatoneveryday.Whenanothertryoutarrived,Iwasfullpreparedandtriedmybest.Asaresult,Iwas去掉onfullyselectedandbecameanimportantplayeronourschoolteam.Fromthis,Iamfirmlyconvincingthat,nomatterwhenchancesarrive,wewereabletoseizeconvincedarethemaslongaswegetwellprepared.It’snoteasyforustoacceptthefactwhichwearegoingtoleaveourbelovedschool.However,wearelookedforwardtoourfuturelife.Lastnight,myfriendsandIwalkaroundourschooltalkingaboutthefunnythingsthathadbeenhappenedinthepastthreeyears.Suddenly,Igotanidea.Isaidtohimweshouldmakeadealthatwecouldgettogetherherefouryearslate.Myfriendsweresoexcitingaboutit,andtheyagreedwithme.IstartedtothinkaboutwhatIwouldbecomeinthefuture.Imaybecomingateacher,oradoctor.Ithinkdealwillhelpuskeepintouchtoeachother.51.which-that52.looked-looking53.walk-walked54.hadbeenhappened去掉been55.him-them56.late-later57.exciting-excited58.becoming-become59.deal前加the60.to-withOneneighborofmyisauntyAnabel.Everyoneintheneighborhoodknowsherforthe“queenoftheneighborhoodcookingfortheentire

”.Youmayaskwhat.Well,it’sbecausesheusedtoneighborhoodwhenevertherewasfestival.Iremembertheday圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照thatMr.Carterceleberatedhis90thbirthday.Inordertomakesureeveryoneknewaboutit,hemadeMrs.Carterbakesmallcookies.Thenhewalkedaroundandgiveeveryhouseonecookie.Believeitornot,butitwasaninvitation.Assoonasmyauntyheardthenews,shegotallneighbortogetherandstartedahugebarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn’tonepersonwhowillingstayedhomethatday.OneneighborofmyisauntyAnabel.Everyoneintheneighborhoodknowshermineforthe“queenoftheneighborhood”.Youmayaskwhataswhycooking.Well,it’sbecausesheusedtofortheentireneighborhoodwhenevertherewas∧festival.IcookarememberthedaythatMrCarterceleberatedhis90thbirthday.Inordertomakesurewheneveryoneknewaboutit,hemadeMrsCarterbakesmallcookies.Thenhewalkedaroundandgivegaveeveryhouseonecookie.Believeitornot,butitwasaninvitation.Assoonasmyauntyheardthenews,shegotallneighbortogetherandstartedahugeneighborsbarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn’tonepersonwhowillingstayedhomethatday.willinglyOnemorning,ablindboysatonasquarewithahatbyherfeet.Heheldupasignwhichwassaid:“Iamblind,pleasehelpme.”Therewasonlyafewcoinsinthehat.Amanwaswalkingby.Hetookthesign,turningitaround,andwrotesomethingonit.Heputthesignbacksothateveryonewalkedbywouldseethenewwords.Surprising,soonalotmorepeopleweregivingmoneytotheblindboy.Thatafternoon,themanwhohadchangedthesigncametoseewhatthingswere.Theboyrecognizedhisfootstepandasked:“Areyoutheonewhochangedmysignthismorning?Howdidyouwrite?”Themansaid:“TodayisabeautifuldayandIcannotseeit.”O(jiān)nemorning,ablindboysatonasquarewithahatbyherfeet.Heheldupahiswassignwhichwassaid:“Iamblind,hehat.Amanwaswalkingby.Hetookthesign,somethingonit.Heputthesignbacksothateveryone

”Thereonlyafewcoinswereturningturneditaround,andwrote∧walkedbywouldseethewho圓滿Word格式整理版范文模范參照newwords.Surprising,soonalotmorepeopleweregivingmoneytotheblindboy.SurprisinglywhatThatafternoon,themanwhohadchangedthesigncametoseehowthingswere.Theboyrecognizedhisfootstepandasked:“AreyoutheonewhochangedmysignthisfootstepsHowandmorning?Whatdidyouwrite?”Themansaid:“TodayisabeautifuldaybutIcannotseeit.”DearHarry,IhavegoodnewsforyouthattherewillbeainternationalmusiccampinourcitythissummerThecampisopenlytostudentsfromallovertheworldwhoisinterestedinplayingmusicalinstruments.Iknowyouareamusiclover,sowhynottojointhecamptogetherwithus?Atthecamp,campersaregivingclassesbyexpertsinthemoringandintheafternoontheydoacoupleofhourofpractice.Intheevening,thereisamusicexchangeconcertthatcamperscangiveperformancesandplaysdifferentkindsofmusicfromtheirowncounties.I’msureyouwillhavealotoffunsthere.I’mlookingforwardyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】1.a→an2.openly→open3.is→are4.tojoin→to去掉5.giving→given6.hour→hours7.that→where8.plays→play9.funs→fun10.forward后加toDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaproblemthattroub