【原題重現(xiàn)】Carterenjoyedridingtheschoolbushome.Theridehomegavehimsometimetorelaxafterabusydayoffifthgrade.Heusuallysataloneandenjoyedthattoo.Withfoursiblings(兄妹)hedidn'tgetmuchtimealone.Sometimeshesatwithhisyoungerbrother,Jackson,butJacksonwassickathometoday.Thebusstoppedandthetallestboyinhisclass,Dexter,steppedofffollowedbyhisyoungerbrother,Billy.Asthebuspulledaway,Carterlookedbackoverhisshouldertowatchtheboys.Dexterwasyellingandwavinghishandsathislittlebrother.BillysaidsomethingCartercouldnothear.Dexteryelled,gavehisyoungerbrotherahardshove（推，擠）andknockedhimtotheground.Billywasonthegroundwipinghiseyes,butDexterwalkedaway.Carterturnedinhisseat,feelingdisgusted.Hehatedseeinglittlekidsgetpickedon(欺負(fù)).ThesightofBillyonthegroundcryingwasburnedintohismemory.Hetriedtothinkofsomethingelse.Hethoughtofthemodelcarhewasworkingonathome,a1967Corvette.Hestartedbuildingitoveraweekagoandjustfinishedputtingittogetherlastnight.Tonight,assoonashefinishedhishomework,hecouldstartpaintingthecar.Thatwashisfavoritepart.Healreadyhadtheperfectcolorofbluepickedout.Hehurriedoffthebus,ranthroughhisyard,andbreezedthroughthekitchenwithaquickhellotohismom.Shewasmakingspaghetti,whichsmelleddelicious.Heranupthestairstwoatatimeandrushedintohisroom.“Surprise!”hisbrotherJacksonsaid,throwinghisarmsintotheair."Whatareyoudoinginmyroom?Ithoughtyouweresick!”“Ifeelbetter!”"What'sonyourface?Areyoubleeding?""No!I'mnotbleeding."Jacksonwipedathisface,probablyjustpaint.Look!LookwhatIdid!”HepointedatthedeskinthecornerofCarter'sroom.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.Paragraph2Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfist.【好詞好句】1.他離開后面跟著弟弟Dextersteppedofffollowedbyhisyoungerbrother

2.汽車駛離thebuspulledaway

3.向他的弟弟揮舞拳頭wavehishandsathislittlebrother

4.推弟弟一把givehisyoungerbrotherahardshove（推，擠）5.把弟弟打倒在地knockhimtotheground.

6.抹眼淚wipehiseyes7.感到惡心厭惡feeldisgusted.

8.被欺負(fù)getpickedon

9.看到billy坐在地上哭的這一幕深深地刻在他的腦海里ThesightofBillyonthegroundcryingwasburnedintohismemory.

10.組裝putittogether11.輕松愉快地穿過廚房breezethroughthekitchen

12.把手舉向空中throwhisarmsintotheair.情節(jié)走向：第一段

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生氣（皺眉

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看到弟弟的反應(yīng)（從興奮到緊張害怕，大哭或抽泣等）聯(lián)想Dexter和Billy，意識到自己的錯誤行為牽扯Billy的唯一方式-提醒Carter不能和Dexter一樣欺負(fù)自己的弟弟Billy第二段

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冷靜下來道歉、請求原諒或友情提醒；Plot

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共同解決問題-一起涂色或增加新圖案或一起做新的模型Plot

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家庭溫馨的氛圍或媽媽出場肯定他們的做法點(diǎn)主題-團(tuán)結(jié)友愛（感悟+影響）誰動了我的小汽車？（下水文）Paragraph1

Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.Withhismodelcarpaintedred,thedeskwasinamess,whichirritatedCarter.Hiseyebrowsrisingintohisforeheadandfaceburningwithgreatanger,hecouldn’tcontainhisfuryandyelledathisbrother“Youruinedmymodelcar!”Instantly,Jackson’sexcitementfromhelpingcompletingasatisfactorymodelgavewaytoterriblepanic.NeglectingJacksonwhoattemptedtoexplainfurther,Cartersnapped,gavehimashoveandrushedtowardshisdesk.Pickinguptheredmodelcaratthedesk

and

strokingitcautiouslyasifitwasatreasure,Carter

feltasurgeofsadnessoverwhelmedhim.Thescenesofhishardworkonthemodelcarrosebeforehiseyes,whichfueledhisanger.

Hewalkedquicklytowardshislittlebrother,angerboilingupandhisfistclenched.

Atthattime,hisbrother’sinnocenteyesandthesceneofDexterpickingonBillytookoverhismind.(159)Paragraph2

Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfist.

Givingasighofreliefandtryingtocalmdown,herealizedheshouldn’thavetreatedhislittlebrotherinthisway,soheapologizedtoJacksonforhisbadattitudesincerely.Hearingthis,Jacksonembracedhisbrothertightlywitharelivedsmileonhisface,toldhisbrotherhisgoodintention

and

promisedhisbrothernottoaccesshisitemswithoutpermission.Catersuggestedtheirrepaintingthemodelcartogether.Thetwobrotherswereburiedintheirnewproject.Then,theirmomstoodatthedoorwithtwodishesofSpaghetti,satisfactionofsmilespreadingacrossherface,seeingthesiblingsliveinperfectharmonyandunity.

Throughthis,Carterrealizedtheimportanceofbeingtolerantandwasmoregoodatproblem-solvingwhengettingalongwithothers.(128)第一段Carter低頭看了看他的辦公桌，他的模型車被漆成了紅色，辦公桌亂七八糟，這讓Carter很生氣，橫眉冷對，無法控制他的憤怒，朝他的兄弟大喊：“你毀了我的模型車!”

立刻，Jackson幫助完成一個令人滿意的模型的興奮變成了可怕的恐慌。忽視了Jackson的進(jìn)一步解釋，Carter怒氣沖沖，推了他一把，沖向他的辦公桌。Carter拿起桌前的紅色模型車，小心翼翼地?fù)崦孟袼且患氊愃频?，他感到一股悲傷涌上心頭。他辛苦制作汽車模型的場景浮現(xiàn)在眼前，這激起了他的憤怒。他快步走向他的小弟弟，怒火中燒，緊握著拳頭。(他握緊拳頭，雙眼炯炯有神地向他哥哥）第二段

Carter深吸了一口氣，然后展開了拳頭。他松了一口氣，試圖冷靜下來，他意識到他不應(yīng)該這樣對待他的弟弟，所以他真誠地向Jackson道歉。聽到這個，Jackson緊緊地?fù)肀男值埽樕蠋е匦箩尫诺奈⑿?，告訴他的兄弟他的好意，并答應(yīng)他的兄弟未經(jīng)允許不得拿走他的東西。Carter建議他們一起重新給汽車模型涂色。兩兄弟埋頭于他們的新項目。然后，他們的媽媽站在門口，端著兩盤意大利面，滿意的笑容在她的臉上蔓延，看到兄弟姐妹們和睦團(tuán)結(jié)地生活在一起。通過這件事，Carter認(rèn)識到了寬容的重要性，并且在與他人相處時更善于解決問題?！緦W(xué)生易