高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習勇敢司機幫助警察抓小偷1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Acoupleofdaysago,thereweremanypeopleonthebus.Halfwaydowntheroad,thedriversuddenlystoppedthebusbythesideoftheroadandsaid,“I’mgoingtohavedinnerfirst.I’mhungry.”Thenhebegantoeatfriedricenoodleswhiletalkingonthephone.Afterawhile,manypassengersurged(催促)thedrivertogoahead,butthedriverrepliedrudely,“Can’tyouseeI’menjoyingmynoodles?I’msohungry.”Afterafewminutessomeonewantedtogetoffthebus,butwasrefusedbythedriver.HeexplainedthatnobodycouldgetoffbecauseitwasNOTabusstop!Standingbesidethedriver,Iwatchedhimhavethelastofthenoodles,thinkingthatwecouldfinallystartnow.However,thedrivertookoutanotherbagofsoup!4續(xù)寫原文IbegantofeelalittleangrybecauseIwouldbelateforanimportantmeeting.SoIurgedthedrivertohurryup.However,thedriversuggestedpolitelythatIshouldaskforaleave.Whenthesoupwasabouttobefinished,thedriverpickedupthephoneagain,lookingintherear-viewmirror(后視鏡)fromtimetotimeasifhewerewaitingforsomeone.Atthistimeallthepassengersonthebusbegantoshout,“Wehavewaitedtoolong.Startrightnow!”Suddenly,apolicecarstoppedinfrontofourbus.Weallthoughtthatthepolicemencouldhelpusandwecouldgoatonce.5段首句Para1：Tooursurprise,thetwopolicemengotonourbuswithhandcuffs.

Para2：Watchingthethieveshavingbeencaughtbythepolicemen,allthepassengerssmiledwithdelight.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者有一天坐公交車時，司機突然把車停在路邊說要吃晚飯，有人要求司機繼續(xù)開車，司機都拒絕了，作者感到很生氣，司機喝完湯后又拿起手機，時不時地看后視鏡，好像在等人，突然，一輛警車停在公共汽車前面，乘客們都認為警察可以幫助他們。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Tooursurprise,thetwopolicemengotonourbuswithhandcuffs.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“令我們吃驚的是，那兩個警察戴著手銬上了我們的車”可知，第一段可描寫警察上來抓小偷的過程。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Watchingthethieveshavingbeencaughtbythepolicemen,allthepassengerssmiledwithdelight.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“看到小偷被警察抓住，所有的乘客都高興地笑了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫乘客們對司機改觀。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索警察宣布有小偷——意識到司機做的事——警察找出小偷——欽佩司機——認為司機是英雄12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①意識到：realizethat/accompanyhim/keephimcompany②找出：findout/digout③欽佩：showadmirationto/feeladmirationfor情緒類①高興：delight/happiness②欽佩：admiration/worship13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Ladiesandgentlemen,justnowwereceivedacallsayingtherearetwothievesonthebus,andsomeone’smobilephonehasbeenstolen.(由that引導的賓語從句，省略了that)[高分句型2]Onlyatthattimedidwerealizethatthedriverhadinformedthepolicemenofthetheft.(部分倒裝句)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Tooursurprise,thetwopolicemengotonourbuswithhandcuffs.“Ladiesandgentlemen,justnowwereceivedacallsayingtherearetwothievesonthebus,andsomeone’smobilephonehasbeenstolen.”O(jiān)nlyatthattimedidwerealizethatthedriverhadinformedthepolicemenofthetheft.Thenthedriverlockedthedoorsofthebus,whilethepolicemencheckedthepassengersonebyone,andfoundoutthetwothieves!Finally,thethieveswerearrestedandtakenaway.16范文呈現(xiàn)Watchingthethieveshavingbeencaughtbythepolicemen,allthepassengerssmiledwithdelight.Obviouslynoneofushadeverseensuchascenebefore,andweallshowedouradmirationtothedriverinsilence.Minuteslater,thedriverlookedatmeandsmiled,“Sorryforkeepingyouwaitingforsolong.Doyoustillconsidermeasarudeguy?”Ishookmyheadandsaidloudly,“Absolutelynot,youaremyhero!”17范文譯文令我們驚訝的是，兩名警察戴著手銬上了我們的公共汽車(手銬).“女士們，先生們，剛才我們接到一個電話，說車上有兩個小偷，有人的手機被偷了?！边@時我們才意識到司機已經(jīng)通知了警察這起盜竊案。然后司機鎖上了公交車的車門，而警察則逐一檢查乘客，發(fā)現(xiàn)了兩個小偷！最后，小偷被逮捕并帶走了。18范文譯文看著小偷被警察抓住，所有的乘客都高興地笑了。顯然，我們誰也沒