歷年高考真題：讀后續(xù)寫+7大黃金原則2022年1月浙江高考WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning(指定)projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,IsecretlyhopedthathewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldn’tassignmetoworkwiththefiercelycompetitiveandextremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.Asfate(命運(yùn))wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren’tthere.IfelthetreatedmeasthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.Hewasn’tmeanorabusive;hejustgavemetheimpressionthathecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.Needlesstosay,Ididn’tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn’tsayanythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis(假說(shuō)),setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothestatisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputationforsingle-mindednessandgoodgrades—theexactoppositeofme.Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn’twanttogivehimthesatisfactionofmychickeningout.Idecidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.Afterlongdiscussionswesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwell-beingofteenagers.Iwasn’tsurewhatitmeantexactly,butatleastwehadatopic.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:

Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Paragraph2:

OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.參考范文1Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.

Atfirst,itseemedthathedominatedourdiscussionforhewasfamiliarwiththetopic,butIwastheopposite(與原文銜接自然).However,asdayspassed,Igraduallygotinvolvedbecausehestartedtoencouragemetoexplainmyviews!Icouldfeelhisicyshellgraduallymeltingaway(背誦的但是用的很自然)andeventuallyIcoulddiscusswithhimlookingstraightinhiseyes.Wefinishedthehypothesisandexperimentprocedure,ingreatharmonyactually.Thingscameoutthathewasserious,indeed,butheseemedicybecausehewaslonely.Wepartedthedaybeforeanalysisdiscussionwithconfidenceforourproject.ButwhenIreturnedthenextmorning,hewasnowheretobefound.Thefactstruckmefeelingdesperate.Hedidn’tcomeeitherinthefollowingdays.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.

ItwasthedaybeforedeadlineandIdrownedmyselfdoinganalysisandpreparingforthepresentation.Hearingtheword,Idashedtothehospitalandfoundhim,mydearteammate,lyingonthebed,facepale.Hiseyessparkledashesawme.BesidehimImanagedtofinishthelasttaskswithhisguidance---hisfingerspointingatcertainfigures.ThennextdayIwentforthepresentationinclass.參考范文2Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.

Seriousasmyteammatewas,wegraduallygrewingoodtunewitheachother.Hehadawaywithtechnicalthingsandapproachedeverydetailwithaclearpurpose.AndIsparednoefforttodomybit,collectingdataandrecordingresultscarefully,soastomakeupformyacademicdisadvantage.Ifullydiscussedmyideasandsharedmyinsightswithhim,whowasonceindifferentbutlaterlistenedtomewithcloseattention.Weweremakingsteadyprogresswithourproject.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.

ThemomentIsawhimlyinghelplesslyinbed,IdecidedIhadtoactaloneanddomybest.IassuredhimIwouldnotlethimdownandheshouldconcentrateonrecovering.Ipouredmoretimeandenergyintothatprojectthaneverbefore,andfinallypresentedourfindingstotheclass,whichsurprisinglyearnedusanexcellentgrade!WhenItoldhimaboutoursharedsuccess,hesmiled.Ithadtodowithtrustandthejoyofsharingacommonprize.2021年6月新高考卷母親節(jié)的驚喜AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jemafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jefturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJeftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear！Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Paragraph2:

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.參考范文Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

“Don’tpanic!”hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.Afterthat,Jeffstammeredouttheirplan,hisfaceflushing.However,Fatherlaughed,“Soundsgreat!Icanteachyoutocook.”Atthis,JennaandJefalmostjumpedtotheirfeet,joyineyes.Underhiscarefulguidance,itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready.Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Meetingtheirsmilingeyes,Motherfeltconfuseduntiltheypresentedthebreakfastandsaid“HappyMother’sDay”.Mothergavethematighthug,“Unbelievable!Youcancook!It’sthebiggestsurpriseIhavereceived.”Herfacelitupwithhappiness.“Theyhaveknownhowtotakecareofothers.”Fathersaidinresponsetoherexcitement,winkingatJennaandJef.Theycouldn’thelpgiggling.Itwasasecretonlysharedbetweenthem.2021年6月浙江卷“我”的工資Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andlthoughtthatIwouldsurpass（超過(guò)）anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimelwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid,70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone（長(zhǎng)號(hào)）.ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpaintedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,"Ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold."Mydad'swordsmademerealizethatmyearningmightnotbeminetodowithaswished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn'tinterested.Idecideditwasnotfairthatlhadtocontributemymoney.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.Paragraph2:

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.參考范文Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

IwasgladthatIfinallygotthepaymentafterworkinghardfortwoweeks.Whilewalkingbackhomewithanexcitedmind.Iconceivedmanyplansabouthowtodisposeofit.Ineededanewfootballbecausetheoldoneweplayedhadalreadywornout.Iintendedtopurchasemyfavoritechocolates.Uponapproachingthehouse,Inoticedmydadandmomstandingbesidetheoldtruck,lookingsadly.Itseemedasifsomethingunpleasanthappened.“Howmuchdowestillneedtopayforanewtruck?".askedmymother.Threehundreddollars,butwejusthadtwohundredleft.”Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.

Really,thetruckmydaddroveoftenbrokedownontheway,whichmademydadintrouble.Myparentshadintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn'taffordit.Suddenly,IrealizedwhatIshoulddo.Steppingforward,Isaid,“Dad,hereiswhatIreceivedformywork.Ithinkitwouldhelpyoualittle.”AlittlesurprisedatwhatIsaid,mymomhuggedmetightly.Thatnight,beforeIwenttobed,lthoughtIwouldtellthefarmerthenextdaythatIwouldcontinuemywork,afteralllgrewup.2021年1月八省聯(lián)考好心的墨西哥一家Duringthispastyear,I’vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn’tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤頂),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(鋸子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman’shand,buthewouldn’ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Paragraph2:

Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.參考范文1WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.

Ishookmyheadandsaidno,wonderingwhysheaskedsuchaquestion—wasshegoingtotreatmetolunchorsomething?“Waitaminute,”saidthegirl,andthenshewentbacktothetruck.Afterafewminutesshecamebackwithapaperbag.“HerearesomeMexicansnacksandyoucanhavesomewhenyouarehungry,”thegirlsmiled.Iwassosurprisedandtouchedthatwordsalmostfailedme.Ijustsaida“WOW!”insteadofa“Thankyou!”whenItookthebag.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.

WhenIsawwhatwasinthebag,Iwasovercomewithamixtureofrespectandgratefulness.Inadditiontothesnacks,therewasthe$20bill.Whatakindandrespectablefamily!Theyareaperfectexampleofwhatkindnessreallymeans.AndI’msureIwillpayitforward.參考范文2WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.

Ofcoursenot,forIhadbeentrappedthereforquiteafewhours.Shethenhadawordwithherparentsandwentbacktotheirtruck.Afewminuteslatershecamebackwithapaperbag.“That’sMommy’shand-madetaco,”explainedthegirl.“It’ssoyummythatyoumustloveit.”IwasstarvingtodeathafterallthatexhaustingworksoItooktheMexico-originatedfood,gratefulanddeeplymoved.Thenwewavedgoodbyetoeachother.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.

Insidethebagwasachickentaco.Thenextfewminutessawmywolfingdownthedeliciousfood.TearswelledupasIwaschewing.Itwasawesometoknowthatwhilemanypeopletendtoignorethoseinneed,therearesomekind-heartedoneswhogooutoftheirwaytolendahand.Thegooddeedtheforeignfamilydidwillneverescapeme.Iamgoingtopassitdowntocreateamuchfriendlierworld.2021年1月浙江卷尷尬的萬(wàn)圣節(jié)Pumpkin

(南瓜）carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.My

dad

hasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,

Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmy

mom

filmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmy

head

insidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,my

nose

brieflypreventedentry.FinallyI

managed

toputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingto

support

itsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewhereto

rest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenI

pulled

hard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:

Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Paragraph2:

ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.參考范文1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.

Growingmorepanic,Ibegantocry.Fortunately,hearingmecrying,

dad

cameandhelpedmelaymy

head

onthetable,somyneckcould

rest

forawhile.Thenhesaidtome“Listen,honey.Ihavetocutthis

pumpkin

inhalf.”Ihadnochoicebuttokeepstillwithmyeyestightlyclosedandlisteningtotheknifemovingonthepumpkin.Momentslater,myheadwasfinallyreleasedfromthishorriblepumpkincage.Then

mom

toldmeshehadjustfilmedme

managing

to

pull

myheadoutofthepumpkin.ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.

ActuallymymomhadaskedwhethershecouldpostitontheInternet,becauseafterallIwassoembarrassedandlookedsosillyinit.Anyway,Inoddedand

supported

heridea.ItturnedoutthatpeoplelikedandforwardeditcrazilyontheInternet,onlytomakemeanInternetcelebrity.2020年7月山東卷、海南卷愛心爆米花TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon’tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Paragraph2:

Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.參考范文WhenMrs.Meredithheardoftheidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.

ThenMrs.Meredithsearchedtheinternetandorderedahouseholdpopcornmachine.Afterthat,Mrs.Meredith,togetherwithherthreechildren,paidanothervisittothefamilyandtoldthemaboutthepopcornplan.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.Afewdayslater,themachinewasdeliveredtoMrs.Meredith’sdoorstep.Anditwasn’tlongbeforetheygotthehangofusingthemachinetomakepopcorn.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.

Althoughitwasahardtimeandthingsweretightforeverybody,Bernard’sbusinessworkedoutquitewell.Hecarriedthepopcornonhissmallbike,goingfromdoortodoortosellit.Peopleweresurprisedtoseesuchalittle,poorly-dressedboysellingpopcornattheirdoors,buteventuallyalmostallofthemwouldbuyabagortwo.ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.2020年7月浙江卷拍照北極熊遇險(xiǎn)Onefall,mywife

Elli

andIhadasinglegoal:to

photograph

polarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Taking

pictures

ofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfroma

safe

distance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethrougha

camera

withatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlic

bread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwire

fence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloud

noises

likethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepper

spray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebear

ran

tothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:

Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Paragraph2:

Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

參考范文Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Thenwerealizedthatthe

spray

hadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthe

fence

likemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,

Elli

grabbedseveralpiecesofgarlic

bread

andthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackand

ran

tothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenwewere

safe

onthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthe

camera

andphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!2020年1月浙江卷小狗Poppy的陪伴“I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,

Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhis

parents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions(情緒)getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntothe

university

wherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamily

hugged

andsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.The

boy

liftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.“Iguessthisisit.”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andthey

watched

ashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothe

dog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbe

back

tovisit,Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusual

cheerful

self.Herownersstartedtogetworried,“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabig

box.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging(擺動(dòng))eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Paragraph2:

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.參考范文1Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

Poppy

jumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittle

dog.Sheloweredherheadto

watch

itcuriously.Thenshebecamesoexcitedthatsheaccidentallyknockedoverthe

box

inanattempttogetcloser.Withtheboxtippingover,outcamethelittleone,whowasnotshyandinstantlygotfamiliarwithPoppy.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforethetwoplayedaroundthehouse,cheerfullyrunningaftereachother.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.

Hehadbeenmissinghis

parents

andthedogsinceitwasthefirsttimethathehadbeenawayfromhomeforsuchalongtime.Whenthe

boy

caughtsightofPoppy,hewentrushingtowardthedogandbentdowntogiveherabig

hug.Suddenly,theboynoticedthelittledog.“Ohmygod,whoisthis?”Hisparentslaughedatthelookofsurpriseonhisface.“It’sPoppy’snewcompanion.”saidMom.參考范文2Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

Dadputtheboxonthegroundandopenedthetop.Ashinylittlewetnosepoppedup.Thentwofluffypaws.Nexttheboxtippedoversideways,andouttumbledamassofwigglygoldensilliness.Poppywasamazed.Shewaggedfuriously.Shebarkedwithjoy.Shesmiled,hertonguelollingoutassheinvestigatedthesurprise.Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartingyippingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog."Thatdidn'ttakelong,"remarkedMom,asbothdogswentroaringaroundthehouseinanimpromptugameofchase.Dadlaughed.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.

HehadmissedPoppyandwaslookingforwardtoseeingher.Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo."Ohmygosh,whoisthis?"heexclaimed.Hisparentslaughedatthelookofshockonhisface."That'sPee-wee,"saidDad."Ican'tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy!""Wedidn't,"repliedMom."ThispuppyisforPoppy!"2018年6月浙江卷森林遇險(xiǎn)Itwassummer,andmy

dad

wantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe

farmhouse

listeningtothefrogsa