書面表達句式提升

SentencePatternsinWriting

什么樣的作文是一篇好作文無遺漏信息點（審題）篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞句式多樣地道的高級詞匯和恰當?shù)脑~組根據(jù)要點來定檔根據(jù)語言來定分根據(jù)文采來加分推薦高考寫作10種句式一、主動句與被動句的互換。

1.PeoplegrowriceintheSouthofChina.

RiceisgrownintheSouthofChina.

2.Theyhaveprintedoneandahalfmillioncopiesofthedictionarysince1986.

Oneandahalfmillioncopiesofthedictionaryhavebeenprintedsince1986.二、將陳述句改為倒裝句。IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.

HardlycouldIunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.

2.Wedidnotrealizeourmistakesuntilatthattime.

Notuntilatthattimedidwerealizeourmistakes.三、將簡單句改為強調(diào)句Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.

Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth.

2.Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents.

Itisthroughhardworkthatourmoneyisearnedbyourparents.3.Hewentthereyesterday.Hedidgothereyesterday.四、將兩個簡單句合并為并列句1.Youcandoit.Icandoit.Oneofusmustdoit.

you

Imustdoit.2.Iwanttobuythisbike.Idon’thaveenoughmoney.Iwanttobuythisbike,

Idon'thaveenoughmoney.Eitherorbut五、將兩個簡單句合并為復(fù)合句1.同位語和同位語從句LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.HewonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.___________,__________________________,wonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.2)Thewordistrue.Thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech.___istrue______thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech.

LiuXianganexcellentathleteItthat2.定語從句1)The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing,anditssloganisOneWorld,OneDream,

The2008OlympicGames,________________________

__________________________2)Inmyopinion,theGreatWallandtheSummerPalacearewellworthvisiting.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallandtheSummerPalace

__________________________________________3)Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,___________________________OneDream,willbeheldinBeijing.arethetwoplaceswhicharewellworthvisiting.whereweboughtaWhosesloganisOneWorld,lotofclothes.3.主語從句1)Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.

mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.2)Itsatisfiedme.Thedininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes.

thedininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes.3)Ilearnedfromthestorythataslongaswehavepatience,confidenceandperseverance,wecanrealizeourdreams.

aslongaswehavepatience,confidenceandperseverance,wecanrealizeourdreams.WhatimpressedmeWhatsatisfiedmeisthatWhatIhavelearntfromthestoryisthat推薦句型Whatsurprises\astonished\satisfied\impressedmeisthat…WhatIwouldliketosuggest\advise\putforwardisthat…Whatmattersmostisthat…WhatIlearn\concludefromthestoryisthat…4.表語從句推薦句型：

…isnolongerwhatitusedtobe.1)我的家鄉(xiāng)不再像以前那樣了。

Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.2)他不再是以前那樣了。

Heisnolongerwhatheusedtobe.5.狀語從句結(jié)果、程度so…that…;such…that…讓步nomatterhow\what\when\where….=whatever,however,whenever,wherever時間…wasdoing…when…,assoonas,themoment,thenexttime,everytime1)不管前面有多少困難，我們都要學(xué)會獨立的克服他們。

_______________________________________________________________________,weshouldlearntoovercomethemindependently.

2)我正沿著馬路走，突然我聽到有人叫我。

I________________alongtheroad_____________suddenlyIheardmynamecalled.waswalkingwhenNomatterhowmanydifficultiesthereareaheadofus,六、將兩個簡單句合并為一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句

Recentlymanystudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.

Recentlymanystudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings,about_differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.2.Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.

Manyboyslearntosmoke,_______________________________whichwhichdoesharmtotheirhealth.七、it作形式主語或形式賓語句型1.Youpretendtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.It’snogood.

It’snogoodpretendingtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.2.ItiseasytogetonwithPam.Ifind.IfinditeasytogetonwithPam.八、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)代替狀語從句Ifyouworkharder,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.______________,andyouwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.2.Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob,hesaidnothingtothepolice.____________________________,myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice.Workhard

Frightenedoflosinghisjob

九、with引導(dǎo)的短語或者復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)With+賓語+adj./adv./介詞短語/todo\doing\done常用句型withapopulationof….withatotalareaof…withalonghistoryof…years1)這個地區(qū)占地2000平方千米，人口10萬。

Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers,________________________2)我們學(xué)校周圍種了很多花，吸引了大量的學(xué)生來參觀。

___________________________________________,itattractsalargenumberofpeople.3)我們學(xué)校是一所有100多年歷史的名校。

Ourschoolisafamousone________________________________

withapopulationof100,000.

Withmanyflowerssurroundingourschool

withahistoryofover100years.

4）沒有做完作業(yè)，這個小孩不敢去上學(xué)。

___________________________,theboydarednotgotoschool.5)這兩個男人早早就睡了，蠟燭燒了一晚上。

Thetwomenwenttobedearly,____________________________________.6)他睡覺的時候嘴巴張得大大的。

Hesleep______________________.withcandlesburninganightlong

Withhomeworknotfinished

withhismouthwideopen

實戰(zhàn)操練：最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。60%的同學(xué)認為1、不應(yīng)收門票2、公園是公眾休閑的地方3、如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象

40%的同學(xué)認為1、應(yīng)收門票，但票價不宜高2、支付園林工人工資3、購新花木注意：1、信的開頭已為你寫好2、參考詞匯：門票：entrancefee1．60％的同學(xué)認為公園不應(yīng)該收費。

Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkthattheparkshouldnotchargeentrancefees．＝Sixtypercentofthestudentsholdtheviewthatentrancefeesshouldnotbecharged

．被動句＝Sixtypercentofthestudentshavetheideathatpeopleshouldbeallowedtoenterparkswithoutcharge.＝Intheopinionof60％ofthestudents,peoplecanenterparksforfree．2．如收門票，需建大門﹑圍墻，會影響城市形象。

Ifentrancefeesarecharged,itwillbenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwillaffecttheappearanceofthecity．（which指代上文）＝Withentrancefeescharged,itwillbenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofthecity．3．40%的同學(xué)認為應(yīng)收門票，但票價不宜高。

40％ofthestudentsthinkthatentrancefeesarenecessary,butthepricesshouldnotbehigh．＝Thereare40％ofthestudentswhothinkthatentrancefeesshouldbecharged,butfeesshouldbelow．（定語從句）＝Intheopinionof40％ofthestudents,entrancefeesshouldbecharged