應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作—申請(qǐng)信

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應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作—申請(qǐng)信

Isitsodifficult?

WhatdoesJaneGoodall(古道爾)do?Doyouthinkwhatshedoesisimportant?Whatkindofpersonisshe?Doyoulikeher?看視頻回憶文本評(píng)價(jià)人物4.Ifsheneedsvolunteersforherchimps–center,willyouwanttohaveatry?determinedoutspokenconsideratedevotedtoherjob◆假設(shè)你是李明，得知古道爾救助中心正在招募志愿者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封英語(yǔ)申請(qǐng)信：●寫(xiě)信目的●你的優(yōu)勢(shì)

(性格特點(diǎn)；英語(yǔ)水平等）●你的希望呈現(xiàn)任務(wù)進(jìn)入情境審題解析：1.選用什么時(shí)態(tài)？文體？2.段落劃分如何？3.會(huì)用到哪方面的語(yǔ)言？ApplicationLetter◆假設(shè)你是李明，得知古道爾救助中心正在招募志愿者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封英語(yǔ)申請(qǐng)信：●寫(xiě)信目的●你的優(yōu)勢(shì)

(性格特點(diǎn)；英語(yǔ)水平等）●你的希望Ifyoucan’tworktogetherwithothervolunteers,areyoufitforthisjob?呈現(xiàn)任務(wù)進(jìn)入情境Ifyouarenotpatientordevoted,areyoufitforthisvolunteerjob?Ifyouarenotfamiliarwithanimals,areyoufitforthisvolunteerjob?頭腦風(fēng)暴“說(shuō)”出你的詞匯性格品質(zhì)形容詞支架搭建素材準(zhǔn)備1

人物描寫(xiě)話題詞匯歸納

性格特點(diǎn)1.friendly2.active3.modest

4.considerate5.devoted6.warm-hearted7.hard-working8.determined

9.confident10.brave12.outgoing

13.outspoken

性格特點(diǎn)友好的積極的謙虛的考慮周到的

奉獻(xiàn)的熱心的工作努力的意志堅(jiān)定的

自信的

勇敢的外向的

直言的

性格特點(diǎn)Befriendlyto…Beactivein…謙虛的考慮周到的

Bedevotedto熱心的工作努力的BedeterminedtoBeconfidentin勇敢的外向的

BeoutspokenaboutFirstly,youare_________(性格形容詞）Secondly,youare__________.（性格形容詞）Thirdly,youare__________,whichmakesyou_____________________.（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）Finally,youare_____________sothatyoucan_________________（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）

Therefore,Ithinkyou_______________beingateacher.

ThereisnodoubtthatIwouldbegratefulifyou________________________

SaymeInyoureyes,我是怎樣的老師Firstly,Iamfriendly(性格形容詞）Secondly,Iamconsiderate.（性格形容詞）Thirdly,Iamdevoted,whichmakesmeapplytobeateacher.（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）Finally,Iamwarm-heartedsothatyoucanaskmeforhelp。（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）

Therefore,IthinkIamsuitableforbeingateacher.

ThereisnodoubtthatIwouldbegratefulifyouareactiveinthisclass.

SaymyselfInmyeyes,我是怎樣的老師思考：僅僅寫(xiě)出關(guān)于性格特點(diǎn)的詞匯就可以了嗎？

重點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用（性格+結(jié)果）回歸教材

ForfortyyearsJaneGoodallhasbeenoutspokenaboutmakingtherestoftheworldunderstandandrespectthelifeoftheseanimals.

JaneGoodallis_____________,(直言的）which_______________________________________(讓世界上的其他人理解和尊重這些動(dòng)物的生命）outspoken

makestherestoftheworldunderstandandrespectthelifeoftheseanimals.變換句式Whatmadehersucceedlateronwasthekindnessandconsiderationsheshowedtoallherpatients.Shewas_______（善良的）and_________（考慮周到的）sothat________________(稍后成功了）.kind

considerate

shesucceededlateron重點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用（性格+結(jié)果）中國(guó)婦產(chǎn)科奠基人Hehasstruggled(奮斗)forthepastfivedecadesforChinesefarmers.Yuanlongpingis____________(奉獻(xiàn)的）.This

means________________________________________(他適合當(dāng)科學(xué)家)devotedheissuitableforbeingascientist重點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用（性格+結(jié)果）世界雜交水稻之父Iam_______,fromNo.5middleschoolofLicheng.FirstlyIam_______（性格形容詞）What’smore,Iam_______（性格形容詞）Inaddition,Iam_______,whichmakesme________________________（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）Themostimportant,Iam________sothat/thismeans________________________（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）

Sayyou說(shuō)一說(shuō)你的性格重點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用（性格+結(jié)果）情境:你想?yún)⒓訃?guó)際中學(xué)生野外夏令營(yíng)Iam_______.FirstlyIam_______（性格形容詞）What’smore,Iam_______（性格形容詞）Inaddition,Iam_______,whichmakesme________________________（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）Themostimportant,Iam________sothat/thismeans_____________________________（性格形容詞+結(jié)果）

Sayyou說(shuō)一說(shuō)你的性格重點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用（性格+結(jié)果）情境:你正在參加相親節(jié)目AreyougoodatEnglish?Canyouspeak

fluent

English?Canyoucommunicatewithaforeigner?Are

youinterestedinhelpinganimals?Areyoufamiliarwithanimal-protectionknowledge?

What’syourquality?IamgoodatEnglish,especiallyspokenEnglish.Icanspeak

fluent

spokenEnglish.Ihavenotroubleincommunicatingwithaforeigner.Ihavebeeninterestedinanimalssincemychildhood.Ihavereadalotofbooksaboutanimals.Therefore,Iamfamiliarwithanimal-protection.支架搭建素材準(zhǔn)備2要點(diǎn)信息1表述自己的性格特點(diǎn)說(shuō)明適合做志愿者接待參觀團(tuán)Iam….Sothat….(性格特點(diǎn)1+結(jié)果）Iam…which…（性格特點(diǎn)2+結(jié)果）Iam…thismeans（性格特點(diǎn)3+結(jié)果）要點(diǎn)信息2:表述自己的英語(yǔ)水平說(shuō)明能夠接待參觀團(tuán)

選取2---3點(diǎn)介紹自己的英語(yǔ)能力句式ThereisnodoubtthatbesuitableforIwouldbegratefulif寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐Para2.●性格和語(yǔ)言優(yōu)勢(shì)（一稿）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2分（2個(gè)）要點(diǎn)全2分要點(diǎn)少于2個(gè)2分不扣要點(diǎn)0分語(yǔ)言15分準(zhǔn)確5無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法及拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤5分有2處以上語(yǔ)法拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤2分語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較多1分豐富10較多運(yùn)用本課重點(diǎn)詞匯句型10分較少運(yùn)用本節(jié)課重點(diǎn)詞匯句型5分字?jǐn)?shù)（70左右）

2分70以上2分不足501分卷面1分

卷面是否整潔；書(shū)寫(xiě)是否認(rèn)真1分寫(xiě)作評(píng)價(jià)量規(guī)（第二段）I’mLiMing,astudentfromChina.Ilearnthatsomevolunteersareneededforyouranimal-protectioncentre.I’mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteer.(目的）

There’snodoubtthatI’msuitableforthevolunteerjob.(主旨句）Firstly,I’moutgoingandliketohelpothers,whichisimportanttobeavolunteer.Besides,I’mkindandconsiderate,soIcangetonwellwiththevisitors.（要點(diǎn)一）Secondly,I’mgoodatspokenEnglishandfamiliarwithanimals,soIcancommunicatewiththemfreely.（