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①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．

③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．

④Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．

⑤Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．Readingpassage①Thesedayso1Stepsofwriting1明確主旨結(jié)構(gòu)2尋找主題句3提取主次信息4獨(dú)立表達(dá)5語篇銜接Stepsofwriting1明確主旨結(jié)構(gòu)2尋找主題句32keywords—fortopic

①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．

③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．

④Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．

⑤Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．liveaslowerlifeargumentationkeywords—fortopic①Theseday3Structure

①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．

③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．

④Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．

⑤Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．

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thesisStructure①Thesedaysoursoc4thesis>argument/evidence>conclusion>Identifythetextualpattern.structureofargumentation

thesis>argument/evidence>concl5Para.1①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．②Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．③However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．SentenceFunctionKeywordsS1S2S3引出要點(diǎn)引出要點(diǎn)提出論點(diǎn)rushgetusedto,inahurrylivetheirlifeataslowerpaceFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.1①Thesedaysoursociety6Para.2①

Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．②Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．③Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"④Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．⑤Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．SentenceFunctionKeywords

S1S2S3S4,S5

提出要點(diǎn)舉例論證引用論證提出建議reason,possibilty,dowrongsHastmakeswastethinkcarefully,doworklessquicklycan'tmakeasounddecision

Figureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.2①Themainreasonthat7Para.3①Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．②

Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．③However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．④Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．⑤Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．SentenceFunctionkeywordsS1S2,S3,S4S5提出要點(diǎn)舉例論證補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)helpenjoylifebetterForexamplehurry,losechances,enjoyingFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.3①Slowingdownthepace8Para.4①Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．

②Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．③Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．④Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．⑤Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．SentenceFunctionkeywordsS1S2,S3,S4S5提出要點(diǎn)指出危害研究論證hurt,physicallyandmentallyfewerdiseases,happier,livelongerFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.betterhealthconditionsPara.4①Finally，slowerlifepa9Para.5①Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．②Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．③Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．

SentenceFunctionkeywordsS1S2S3提及好外對(duì)比論證提出要點(diǎn)enjoymet,friends,health,importanttakeyourtime,aslowerpaceFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.materialbenefitsPara.5①Inshort，workingquick10DraftoftheversionIt'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．(要點(diǎn)1)

Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．

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Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．(要點(diǎn)3)Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．(要點(diǎn)4)Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．(要點(diǎn)5)點(diǎn)評(píng)：該版本完全覆蓋了文章全部要點(diǎn)，但是都采用了原文的語句，因此是對(duì)文章的縮寫，而不是真正意義的概要。仔細(xì)觀察，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)本文多處涉及表達(dá)原因的內(nèi)容，因此我們?cè)诤竺娴谋磉_(dá)微技能中聚焦如何表達(dá)因果關(guān)系。【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)DraftoftheversionIt'sbettedespiteinspiteofwhilealthough/though

SummaryforPara.1However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

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liveaslowerlifeDespitebeingaccustomedtothefastpaceinmodernsociety，peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife．【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)SummaryforPara.1However，it'12SummaryforPara.2Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Slowingdownlowersthepossibilityofcommittingerrorsbycomprehensivethinking．slowerdownthelife

makemistakescommiterrors

【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)SummaryforPara.2Themainre13SummaryforPara.3Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpace．

【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)SummaryforPara.3Slowingdow14SummaryforPara.4Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．

Lastly，betterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentallyisalsowhataslowerlifebrings．

physicalandmentalhealth【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評(píng)】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)SummaryforPara.4Finally，slo15SummaryforPara.5Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeat