五、建議信全國高考英語二輪突破分類寫作五、建議信全國高考英語二輪突破分類寫作【必備詞語】1.給某人提建議 ____________________2.如下 ____________________3.向某人征求意見 ____________________4.聽從某人的建議 ____________________5.把……考錄在內 ____________________6.有了某人的共同努力 ____________________7.開闊我們的視野 ____________________8.掌握英語 ____________________9.意識到 ____________________10.某事掌握得很好 ____________________11.記住 ____________________12.英語作文 ____________________givesb.someadvice(on)asfollowsasksb.foradvicefollowone’sadvicetakesth.intoaccount/considerationwiththejointeffortsofsb.broadenourhorizonmasterEnglishbeawareofhaveagoodcommandofsth.keepsth.inmindEnglishcomposition【必備詞語】1.給某人提建議 _____________13.記憶英語單詞 ____________________14.控制某人的脾氣 ____________________15.一個有效的方式 ____________________16.保持樂觀 ____________________17.振奮某人的精神 ____________________18.提高閱讀能力 ____________________19.習慣于這個現(xiàn)象 ____________________20.對……有壞影響 ____________________21.垃圾箱 ____________________22.制定具體的制度 ____________________23.培養(yǎng)好的習慣 ____________________24.涵括各種各樣的…… ____________________memorizeEnglishwordscontrolone’stemperaneffectivewayremainoptimisticaboutsth.liftone’sspiritsimproveone’sreadingabilitygetusedtothephenomenonhaveabadeffectondustbinsetupspecificrulesdevelopgoodhabitscoverawidevarietyof13.記憶英語單詞 __________________【好句背誦】

開頭總起句

1.HerearesomesuggestionswhichIhopewillbeofsomehelptoyou.這里是一些建議，希望會對你有幫助。2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.你就……向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設性的建議?！竞镁浔痴b】開頭總起句

說明具體問題

3.Almostperfectasitis,itshouldmakemoreimprovementinsomearea.盡管它近乎完美，它在一些方面仍需要改進。4.Iwonderiftheschoolcouldplacemoredustbinsaround.我想學校是否能夠在周圍多放些垃圾桶。說明具體問題

結尾詢問或希望

5.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,doletmeknow.如果您需要更多的信息，請告知我。6.Ibelievethat,withthejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudents,ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.我相信，有了老師和學生的共同努力，我們學校會在不久的將來成為一個更令人快樂的地方。結尾詢問或希望【單句改錯】1.I’dliketogiveyousomesuggestionsthatmayhelpyoulearnyourmathgood.good改為well2.Ifyouwillneedtobuyagoodsmartphoneatalowprice,IwillsuggestaHongmiMi3.

刪掉第一個will3.Weallknowthatitisalwaysveryhardtostartinginanewschool.starting改為start【單句改錯】1.I’dliketogiveyou4.IfounditdifficulttoexpressmyselfinEnglish,andmyEnglishteacheradvisedmethatIpracticedmore.practiced改為practice5.Asforyourfuturemajor,IthinkmostsuitablethingforyouisteachingChineseasaforeignlanguage.most前面加the6.Isorrytolearnthatyouhaven’tadaptedtothenewlifethere.

在I后加am4.Ifounditdifficulttoexp7.Playingfootballnotonlymakeusgrowtallandstrongbutalsogivesusasenseofteamspirit.make改為makes8.IhopeeverythingwillbeOKandyouwillsoonmakesomefriendinthenewcity.friend改為friends7.Playingfootballnotonlym9.Whynotaskhimtogiveaexplanationforhisbeingabsentfromthemeetingyesterday？a改為an10.Ithinkyoushouldgrasptheopportunityandgotoabroadforfurtherstudies.

刪掉to9.Whynotaskhimtogiveae【習作改錯】DearEditor, Asastudentreader,IamwritetotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishbyyourhouse.Thesebookshavemanyadvantage.Oneofwhichisthattheycoverawidevarietyoftopics,rangingfromhistoryandgeographytothelatestscientificdevelopment,whicharesuretobroadourhorizon.writingpublished____________advantages___them___broaden【習作改錯】DearEditor,writingpubliWhat’smore,alongwiththetextstherearemuchbeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.EventhestudentswhoareusedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttointerestedinthesubject.However,sometextscarrytoomanydifficultywordsandexpressions,whichconsequentlyaddtothedifficultyinlearningthetexts.Therefore,I’dliketosuggestchangingthemaseasierones.Bestregards,LiHuamanydifficultinto_______?beWhat’smore,alongwithth【真題滿分佳作賞析】【2011全國Ⅱ卷：讀者給報刊建議】

假定你是李華，你所喜愛的GlobalMirror周報正值創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請你依據(jù)以下內容給主編寫封信，內容主要包括：1.說明你是該報的忠實讀者；2.贊賞該報優(yōu)點：1)兼顧國內外新聞2)介紹名人成功故事；3.提出建議：刊登指導英語學習的文章?！菊骖}滿分佳作賞析】【2011全國Ⅱ卷：讀者給報刊建議】【結構導圖】【結構導圖】【滿分佳作】DearEditor-in-Chief,

Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!I’maregularreaderofyournewspaper.①Ilikeitverymuchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.②First,itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnewssothat,bysimplyturningthepages,Icanlearnallimportantthingsthathavehappenedduringtheweek.③Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.

④Asayoungstudent,IsuggestthatGlobalMirrorcarryarticlestoguideusinourEnglishlearning,andIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【滿分佳作】DearEditor-in-Chief,【滿分賞析】

①用到…mainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.解釋原因的總起句，體現(xiàn)了對寫作句型的熟練掌握。

②cover(覆蓋……范圍、包括……)一詞用得地道；還用上了sothat引導的結果狀語從句。

③Equallyattractiveare…(同樣吸引人的還有……)這是地道、不同于一般模板的連接手段，表示與上面提到的內容并列；本句還有which引導的定語從句和tomaketheworldabetterplace這樣地道自然的表達；這樣的句子是提分的句子。

④用到suggest加賓語從句，從句動詞用do或者shoulddo?！緷M分賞析】①用到…mainlyforthefol【模仿翻譯】【2012四川卷改編：告訴老師學習情況和建議】作文原題假如你是大學一年級新生李華。開學之初，你的英語老師MsLi希望了解每位同學的英語學習情況，并征求教學建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。1.對英語學習的認識；2.自己目前的英語水平；3.自己英語學習存在的主要問題；4.對英語教學的兩點建議。【模仿翻譯】【2012四川卷改編：告訴老師學習情況和建議】作文翻譯親愛的李老師，

我非常高興您當我們的英語老師。隨著世界變成了地球村，英語變得越來越重要，因此掌握好英語意味著我們可以通過一扇新的窗戶看世界。

雖然我意識到其重要性，但我的英語掌握得不好。我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的問題主要在于兩個方面。一方面，我覺得很難記住英語單詞。而且，在寫英語作文上我也有困難，寫作時甚至犯一些愚蠢的錯誤。

因此，我希望您能給我們一些如何記憶英語單詞的實用的方法。另外，如果您能教我們如何寫好的英語作文就更好了。

謝謝您！誠摯的李華作文翻譯【模仿翻譯】DearMsLi,

IamveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher.Astheworldisbecomingaglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant,somasteringEnglishmeanswecanseetheworldthroughanewwindow.ThoughI’mawareofitsimportance,Idon’thaveagoodcommandofit.AndI’vefoundthatmyproblemlieschieflyintwoaspects.Foronething,IfinditdifficulttokeepEnglishwordsinmind.Foranotherthing,IalsohavedifficultywithmyEnglishcompositionandevenmakesomefoolishmistakeswhenIwrite.

Therefore,it’smyhopethatyoucangiveussomepracticaltipsonhowtomemorizeEnglishwords.Besides,itwouldbebetterifyoucouldinstructusonhowtowritegoodEnglishcompositions.

Thankyou!

Sincerelyyours,LiHua【模仿翻譯】【全真考場】①【2008全國Ⅱ卷：建議如何學好中文】

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢如何才能學好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫回信。1.參加中文學習班；2.看中文書刊、電視；3.學唱中文歌曲；4.交中國朋友。June8,2008DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.……Bestwishes,LiHua【全真考場】①【2008全國Ⅱ卷：建議如何學好中文】June8,2008DearPeter,

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

HerearesomesuggestionswhichIhopewillbeofsomehelptoyou.

Tobeginwith,itisagoodideatotakeaChinesecourse,whereyoucanfollowtheteacherandgethelpfromyourclassmates.Next,readingsomeChinesebooksandmagazineswillhelpyoutoimproveyourreadingability.YoucanalsowatchsomeChineseprogramsonTV,whichwillimproveyourlisteningability.TomakesurethatlearningChineseisn’ttoodull,itwouldbeagoodideatolearntosingsomeChinesesongs.Lastbutnotleast,ifpossible,makesomeChinesefriends,sothatyoucanlearnlanguagesfromeachother.LookingforwardtoreceivingyourletterwritteninChinese.Bestwishes,LiHuaJune8,2008【全真考場】②【2011浙江卷改編：建議應對亂涂亂扔】

假設你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫(toscribble)和亂丟垃圾(tolitter)的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封信。信中應包括以下內容：1.說明寫信目的；2.對這些行為進行批評；3.提出建議。

June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster,IamLi