2023年高考全國(guó)乙卷作文適用地區(qū):河南、江西、甘肅、青海、內(nèi)蒙古、寧夏、新疆、陜西。假期所學(xué)到的新技能1.學(xué)的新技能是什么；2.分享心得感悟。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目和首句已為你寫(xiě)好。下水作文1:①ThenewskillIlearnedduringthevacationiscooking.WhenIencounteredanAPPupdatescookingskillsregularlyin

June,Ifellinlovewithitatonce.IfollowedthestepswhileIworkedinthekitchenforafewtimesandsoonbecameexperienced.（①作文開(kāi)頭快速入題，直接交代新技能是什么，在什么機(jī)緣下決定學(xué)習(xí)的）②Cookingshowedmeacompletelynewworld.③

NeverdidIknowthatthesecommoningredientsfromthemarketscouldbemadeintosuch

deliciousdishes.

Itseemedlikeamagic.

④Absorbedincooking,

⑤IfeltasifIwerecreatingamiraclelikeamagician.⑥NowonderthatIwasfascinatedbyit.

（②第二段就事論事，引出心得感悟，③倒裝句的應(yīng)用，增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)勢(shì)④

過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)，高一下學(xué)期的語(yǔ)法點(diǎn),

⑤嘗試一下虛擬語(yǔ)氣，豐富句式）⑥

直接套用nowonderthat

結(jié)構(gòu)即可）⑥What'smore,cookinghelpedmereducemypressureindailylife.⑦

HoweverdepressedIwas,

asIenteredintothekitchenandgotmyselfinvolvedincooking,Iforgotallthetroubleinlife.⑧As

the

result,Igotrefreshedagain.（⑥第三段比第二段再往深挖一下，從物質(zhì)上升到精神，深化主題

⑦此處的However=Nomatterhow結(jié)構(gòu)

⑧再加個(gè)學(xué)生肯定能想出來(lái)的As

the

result湊熱鬧）⑨Itwassoblessedto

have

learned

anewskilllikecooking,⑩

whichmakesmehappy,healthyandrefreshedeveryday.（⑨結(jié)尾要短促有力

⑩這句也可以改成whichmakesmehappyandhealthy嘗試一下押頭韻的修辭手法，）下水作文2:①I(mǎi)learnedwritingfrommybrotherlastwinterholiday.

whenIcameback

home,Ifoundmybrotherwritingsomethingonthecomputer.Whenhepresstheenterbutton,

fanscrowdedinandgavehim

likes

belowhisarticle.

Itwassocool.

Iwanted

toexperiencethisimpressivemoment

aswell,soI

askedhimtoteachmetheskillofwriting.（①作文開(kāi)頭直接交代新技能是什么，為什么想學(xué)這項(xiàng)技能）②AtfirstIgotnoideaaboutwritingatall,whichleadtotheresultthatIwriteawfullinesandnobodyreadsit.Igotdiscouragedandalmostwantedtogiveup.Mybrotherencouragedmetokeepontryingandwriteafewlineseverydaytokeepsensitivetowriting.

Heshowedmesomereallyimpressiveexamplesfromclassicalwritingartworksandorderedmetoimitate.Ifollowedhisadviceandtrytoimitatetensentencesfromclassicalwritingartworkseachmorning.Meanwhile,Ireadtheexamplesagainandagaintoexplorethesecretofwriting.（②展示學(xué)習(xí)新技能過(guò)程中遇到的挫折，以及自己是如何應(yīng)對(duì)，為后文主題不放棄做鋪墊）③Itisamazingthatafterafewweeks,Iwritebetter,Icouldevenwritesomeimpressivelinesallbymyself.

④It

wasnotuntilthenthatIstartedtowriteshortarticles.⑤surprisingly,Igotmyownfansandfollowers,whichis

a

greatencouragementtome,likeamiracle.⑥ImaginehowhappyIwas.

⑦Timepermitting,Iwouldwriteafewlineseachdaytohelpothers.（③不斷努力就會(huì)見(jiàn)到成效，給點(diǎn)正能量

④加一個(gè)notuntil結(jié)構(gòu)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，豐富句式

⑤副詞修飾整個(gè)句子，語(yǔ)法填空題中經(jīng)?？嫉囊粋€(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)

⑥感嘆句，抒發(fā)一下情感

⑦獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，來(lái)?yè)蝹€(gè)場(chǎng)面）Frommywritingexperience,Ilearnedthatnobodyisbornperfect.⑧

Whenintrouble,weshouldtrytoaskforhelpandkeepontrying.⑨Anyway,Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.⑩Onlyifonenevergaveup,couldheachiev