1題目假定你是李華，你在暑期里參觀了市博物館舉辦的一次“遇見(jiàn)中國(guó)戲曲(MeettheChineseOpera)”的展覽，請(qǐng)你為你校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一則評(píng)論，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽概況；2.觀展感受；3.提出建議?！?審題1.文體：評(píng)論2.話題：中國(guó)戲曲3.對(duì)象：全校師生4.人稱：第一、三人稱5.時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主謀篇布局：首段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，點(diǎn)明背景信息，在暑期里參觀了市博物館舉辦“遇見(jiàn)中國(guó)戲曲”的展覽。Duringthesummerholiday/break,Ihadthepleasureofpayingavisitto/visitingthe“MeettheChineseOperaexhibitionatourcity'smuseum,whichwaswellworthit.2.Thissummervacation,Ivisitedthe“MeettheChineseOperaheldbythecitymuseum.Andsuchanexperienceleftmewithadeepimpression.3.Thissummervacationwitnessedmyinvolvementinvisitingthe“MeettheChineseOperaexhibitionhostedbythecitymuseum.中段:簡(jiǎn)要概述戲曲展覽的概況，并由此引到自身的一個(gè)觀展感受和評(píng)價(jià)展覽概況:l.DisplayingagreatvarietyoftraditionalChineseoperasviaimages,theexhibitionofferedusanin-depthlookatthediversityoftheoperas.Inaddition,basedondifferenthistoricalscripts,wecanenjoysomefabulousoperasperformedbyprofessionaldramaactors.2.Theexhibitsondisplayincludedcostumes,makeupdesigns,andmusicalinstrumentsusedintraditionalChineseoperas.DetailedinformationaboutthedifferenttypesofChineseoperawasalsoprovided.觀展感受:1.Theexhibitprovidedafascinatingglimpseintothehistoryandcultureofabygoneera,leavingmeanewfoundappreciationforthepast.AndIwasspellboundbytheemotionaldepthoftheChineseOpera,whichconveyedarangeofthoughts.2.AsIwalkedthroughthedisplays,Iwasstruckbytheefforttoexplainthehistoricalandculturalcontextsbehindeachoperaform.ThisnotonlyenhancedmyunderstandingbutalsodeepenedmyappreciationfortheartistryandstorytellinginherentinChineseopera.尾段:委婉語(yǔ)氣給出哪些方面可提升的建議，注意措辭和對(duì)象。1Hopefully,Ifelttheexhibitioncouldhavebeenmoreengagingifinteractiveelementshadbeenincluded.Lastbutnotleast,IhopethatmoreEnglishtranslationsandexplanationscouldbeoffered,whichwouldbemoreusefulforforeignvisitorstobeexposedtoChineseculture.3.AnditwouldbewonderfultohavelivedemonstrationsorshortperformancestogivevisitorsatasteofthedynamicenergythatcharacterizesChineseopera本篇文章難點(diǎn)：1.注意首段對(duì)題干的信息要寫(xiě)作完整【暑期里、市博物館、遇見(jiàn)中國(guó)戲劇展覽】是不能遺漏的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)。2.本篇文章的話題“戲曲”平時(shí)練習(xí)較少，大家可以趁機(jī)多積累起來(lái)。3下水文：Thesuccessfulexhibitionthemed“MeettheChineseOperaheldthissummerholidayinthecitymuseumattractedlargecrowdsofpeople活動(dòng)背景Toarousecitizens’interestinthetraditionalintangibleculturalheritage活動(dòng)目的itcontainedseveralelaboratelyarrangedsections,rangingfromanintroductiontohistory,acostumedisplaytoaliveperformance展覽概況.Whatimpressedmemostwastheliveshow,especiallythehouseholdKunquOpera-PeonyPavilion,whereeveryaudiencewastouchedbysuchabeautifulyetheartbrokenclassicstoryandtheactors’exquisiteacting展覽感受Idohopetoseemoresplendidexhibitionsbroughttousinthenearfuture建議話題表達(dá)積累：largecrowds

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牡丹亭abeautifulyetheartbrokenclassicstory一個(gè)美麗但令人心碎的經(jīng)典故事theactors'exquisiteacting演員精湛的演技下水文：Asoneoftheoldestdramaticartformsintheworld,Chineseoperaenjoyedgreatfamebothathomeandabroad.Thus,ahostoftouristspaidavisittoanexhibitionnamed“MeettheChineseOperaheldthissummerholidayinthecitymuseum活動(dòng)背景Itpresentedacontent-richworldofChineseopera,fromthehistoryofeachgenre.suchasBeijingOpera,KunquOperaandYujuOpera,toessentialitemslikeconventionalmusicianinstrumentsandcostumes展覽概況.Apartfromallthefascinatingshowpieces銜接,whatleftmealastingimpressionwastheliveshow,afeastforeveryone'seyesandears,whereactorsperformeduniquemelodiesaswellasbeautifullywrittendialoguesofhighliteraryvaluetous展覽感受ThedisplaywasfabulousandIsupposethatitwouldbebetterifthereweremoreinteractions建議.話題表達(dá)積累：

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各個(gè)流派的歷史conventionalmusicianinstrumentsandcostumes

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highliteraryvalue很高的文學(xué)價(jià)值參考范文：Thissummerholidaywitnessednumerousvisitorstothe"MeettheChineseOperaexhibitioninthecitymuseum.Tocultivatecitizen'sartisticaccomplishment,themuseumexhibitedmanyfantasticpictures.rangingfromPekingOpera,ShaoxingOperatoKunguOpera,bringinganaudio-visualfeastfortheartlovers.IenjoyedeverysecondofthedisplayandwasparticularlyattractedbyPekingOperaLegendoftheWhiteSnake.Exposedtotheplots,colorsandaffection,Iseemedtobepersonallyonthescene.Sincerely,Ihopeinthefutureshowscanlastlongerandmoredistinguishedworkscanbedisplayed.要點(diǎn)講解Thissummerholidaywitnessednumerousvisitorstothe"MeettheChineseOperaexhibitioninthecitymuseum.開(kāi)頭用了無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)，witness見(jiàn)證，也可以用see，不過(guò)要注意的是無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)的對(duì)