讀后續(xù)寫試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文,根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。ThoughIeatanapplealmosteveryday,onemonthagomydoctorcametomyhousestandinginfrontofme,notbeingkeptaway,duetomysuddenillness.“WellJian,IthinkI

needtohaveastrongtalkwithyou.Youareoverweight.HaveyoueverheardaboutBodyMassIndex(指數),BMI?Well,I’veweighedyouandmeasuredyourheightandyouhaveaBMIof28.

Thatisobese(肥胖的),”saidthedoctor.IknewIwasalittlebitoverweightbutIdidn’tthinkitwasthatbad.HeaddedthatmynamemeanshealthyinChineseandhethoughtitistimethatI

shouldbecomehealthy.Thereisadirectlinkbetweenmyhealthandsport.Soheaskedme,“Howmuchsportdoyoudoeveryweek?”ItoldhimthatIgoforawalkeveryweekend.Thenhereplied,“Hmm,that’snotalot.Sportandhealthgotogether.Theyaffectyourmental,physicalandemotionalhealth.Forexample,sportcanimproveyourmentalhealth,allowingyourbraintothinkbetterandfocus.Itwillhelpyoutolearnmoreeasily.Isthatclear,Jian?”“Ithinkso.Iknowitwouldbegoodtobeabletoconcentratebetteratschool.”Isaid.Thedoctorexplainedtomethatfromaphysicalpointofview,sportmakesustiredsohelpsustosleepbetter.Atthesametime,sportburnsoffthecalories

thatwehaveconsumed.Itbuildsmuscleandimprovesourcirculation

(血液循環(huán)).Sporthelpstocontrolourcholesterolcount(膽固醇指標)andthisisimportanttostopushavingaheartattack.Additionally,italsokeepsourbloodpressurenormalandstrengthensourbones.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.

“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.

???試題分析1.主要人物?

I：overweight?

thedoctor：givesgoodadviceinjoininginsports2.前文情節(jié)雖然平時都注意健康飲食，但一個月前因為突然生病，醫(yī)生來到我跟前說我超重要減肥了，然后跟我說了好多體育運動的好處。于是，我......3.續(xù)寫安排第一段：Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.①（與前一句銜接）我是怎么想的②我接下去有什么行動③（與下文開頭句銜接）鍛煉很枯燥，打算放棄。于是，問醫(yī)生找對策第二段：“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.①（與前一句銜接）于是，聽從醫(yī)生建議去參加團隊性運動②效果不錯③（主題升華）反思鍛煉之路下水作文Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.Indeed,lackofexerciseiswhatIfeltashamedof.Sometimes,seeingothersdoingexercisehappily,Ihadsomethoughtsofdoingthesameasthem.ButtheresultwasthatIalwayshadtheexcusesofputtingofftheso-calledplanofexercise.Nowthedoctor’swordsdraggedmeintothedecisionthatIhadtoshowmygreatconcernformyhealth.Ipickedupjoggingastheeasiestwaytokeepmyselffit.However,aweeklater,Ihadtoturntomydoctor,fornofunofexercisingwasfound.(94words)“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynot:trysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.Asanintrovert,Ishowednointerestinjoiningothersfortheworkout.Butwiththedoctor’sencouragement,Ifinallydecidedtohaveatryforthesakeofmyhealth.Contactingwithalocalrunningclub,Iwasshockedbytheirenthusiasm,acceptingmewithoutanythoughts.Peopleintheclubweresoeasy-goingthatIhadnodifficultyinsteppingoutofmycomfortzone.Everydaywegatheredandranalongthebeautifullake,enjoyingandsharingthemarveloustime.Thankstomydoctor,notonlydidIimprovemyhealthbutIharvestedpreciousfriendship.(99words)參考范文Thedoctor’swordsleftmelostinthought.IrealizedthatIneededtotakemyhealthmoreseriouslyandmakesomechangestomylifestyle.IstartedtolookintodifferentsportsandexercisesthatIcoulddotoimprovemyhealth.Ialsobegantopaymoreattentiontomydiet,cuttingoutunhealthyfoodsandreplacingthemwithhealthieralternatives.Iknewthatitwouldn’tbeeasy,butIwasdeterminedtomakeachange.(70words)“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynottrysometeamsports?”thedoctorsuggested.Ithoughtaboutitforamomentandrealizedthathewasright.Ihadalwaysbeenhesitanttojoinasportsteam,butIdecidedtogiveitatry.IjoinedalocalsoccerteamandwassurprisedathowmuchIenjoyedit.NotonlywasIgettingtheexercisethatIneeded,butIwasalsomakingnewfriendsandhavingfunintheprocess.Istartedtolookforwardtoourweeklypracticesandgames,andIcouldfeelmyselfgettingstrongerandhealthierwitheachpassingweek.Thankstomydoctor'sadvice,Ihadfoundanewwaytoimprovemyhealthandmylife.(111words)試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文,根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。thought.Onthewaybacktoschool,herememberedtheexactlocationofthecave.Thenextday,Williamaskedhisfourfriendstothecavetogether.Theytoldtheirparentstheywouldgotothelibraryandreturnhomeintheevening.Noneoftheteenagerstoldtheirparentsabouttheirplantovisitthecave.Whentheteenagersreachedthecave,theylefttheirschoolbagsoutsidetoreducetheburden.Onebyone,theyenteredthecave.Justwhentheytookafewstepsinside,somerocksfromthecavewallfellandblockedtheentrance.“Howarewegoingtogetoutnow?”oneoftheteenagersSarahshouted.Williamhadanideaandsaid,“Maybewecantrydiggingthroughthefallenrockswithourhandstoreachtheentrance.”Butrealizinggettingoutofthecaveonlybytheirhandswasimpossible,theyhadgreatfear.Thesunwasabouttogodown.Theteenagersstartedcallingforhelp,butnobodycouldhearthem.Theteenagerswerelosinghope.Victorhappenedtopassbytheentrancetothecave,andfiveschoolbagscaughthisattention.Healsoheardsomesoundscomingfrominsidethecave.“Who’sinthere?”Victorshouted.“I’mWilliam!Wecamehereyesterdaywithourteacher!”Williamrepliedinstantly.“Helpus,please!Wearestuck!Sarahcan’tbreatheherebecauseoffear.”“Okay,calmdown,children!”Victorsaid.“I’llhelpyougetout!”Paragraph1:Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Paragraph2:Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.參考范文

Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.

Afteralittlewhile,Victorgotbacktotheentrancewithashovelandaflashlight."Hey!I'mback!"heshouted,assuringthekidsthathewouldrescuethem.Then,hebegandiggingthroughtherocksattheentrance.Itwasn'teasyforonemantodigthroughtherocks,buthewastryinghisbest.Meanwhile,Williamandhisfriendstriedtostaycalmand