讀后續(xù)寫：風(fēng)中救鳥--“風(fēng)鳥”

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中文"Hurryup,Kyle!Mom'scar!"Iyelled,pushingopenthedoorofourschool.Isteppedintothestrongwind,flyingsandhittingmycheeks."Kyle?"Iyelledagain."Rightbehindyou,Nikki!"Kyleyelledback,pullingmycoat.Whew!Mylittlebrotherwaswithme.WemadeittoMom'scaratlast."快點(diǎn)，Kyle！去媽媽的車?yán)铮?我大喊著，推開我們學(xué)校的門。我走進(jìn)強(qiáng)風(fēng)中，飛砂擊打我的臉頰。"Kyle?"我再次大喊。"我就在你后面，Nikki!"Kyle拉著我的外套，大聲回應(yīng)道。天哪！我小弟弟沒跟丟。我們終于到達(dá)了媽媽的車?yán)铩?Nikki,turnuptheradio."Theannouncerreported,"Highwindwarning.Windsuptoseventy-fivemilesperhour.Seekshelterinside."Ilookedintothedarkskybutsawnothingdangerous.Then...BLAM!Somethingknockedintothewind-shield,hard."Nikki，收音機(jī)的音量調(diào)大一些。"播音員報道說，"強(qiáng)風(fēng)警告。風(fēng)速可達(dá)每小時七十五英里。速尋找室內(nèi)避難場所。"我看向黑暗的天空，但沒有看到任何危險的東西。然而...砰的一生！什么東西撞上了汽車擋風(fēng)玻璃。Momhitthebrakes."EveryoneOK?""Yes!"ButIwasastonishedtoseeabighawklyingonthehood."Youtwostayhere,"shecalledoverhershoulder,butIwasalreadyunfasteningmyseatbeltandopeningthedoor.AndKylefollowed.Thewindblewthehawkacrossthehood.Ireachedoutandcaughtitbeforeitfelltotheground.Itwassosoft,sowarm."Isitdead?"Kyleasked.媽媽猛地踩下剎車。"大家都沒事吧？""沒事！"但我驚訝地看到一只很大的鷹躺在引擎蓋上。"你們倆呆在這兒，"媽媽叫道，但我已經(jīng)解開安全帶并打開車門。Kyle也跟著下車。大風(fēng)呼嘯著把鷹吹過引擎蓋。我伸手抓住它，以免它掉到地上。它如此柔軟，如此溫暖。"它死了嗎?"Kyle問。Abranchbrokeoffoverheadandcrashedtotheground."We'vegottogo!"Momshouted,"Loadthehawkintheback."KyleandIgentlypickeditup,ourbackstothewindtoprotectit.頭頂?shù)囊桓鶚渲嗔讼聛恚蚁虻孛妗?我們得走了！"媽媽喊道，"把鷹放在后面。"Kyle和我輕輕地把它撿起來，（抱在懷里）后背頂著風(fēng)保護(hù)著它。Wefinallypulledintothegarage."It'salive!Isawtheheadmove!"Kyleshoutedexcitedly,"Let'snameitStormy!"Justthen,thelightwentout."Youtwogetintothehouse,NOW!"Momordered,"Stayawayfromwindows.""ButwehavetotakecareofStormy!"Kyleinsisted,ontheedgeoftears.Iputahandonhisshoulder."Stormywillbesafeinthecaruntilmorning,"Isaid,hopingitwastrue.Iputahandonhisshoulder."Stormywillbesafeinthecaruntilmorning,"Isaid,hopingitwastrue.我們終于駛?cè)肓塑噹臁?它活著！我看到它的頭動了！"Kyle興奮地大叫，"我們叫它Stormy吧！"就在這時，燈熄滅了。"你們兩個現(xiàn)在進(jìn)屋！"媽媽命令，"遠(yuǎn)離窗戶。""但是我們必須照顧Stormy！"Kyle堅持到，眼淚都快掉下來了。我把手放在他的肩膀上說：“Stormy在車?yán)飼踩?，”我希望如此。Thenextmorning,werantothecarwithoutdelay.Stormywasrestingagainstthebackseat.Onewingwasbentatanawkwardangle.第二天早上，我們飛速跑向車子。Stormy靠在后座上。它的一只翅膀折斷了，無力地耷拉著?！癗owlet'sgetStormytotheanimalcenter.Theyknowhowtotakecareofinjuredhawks.”Momsaid."現(xiàn)在我們把Stormy帶到動物中心去。他們知道如何照顧受傷的鷹。"媽媽說。續(xù)寫第一段：Aftermakingthephonecall,wedroveourwaydirectlytotheanimalcenter.打完電話后，我們直接開車去了動物中心。續(xù)寫第二段：Fourmonthslater,wegotaphonecallfromthecenter,“We'rereleasingStormythisevening.Doyouwanttocomeandwatch?”四個月后，我們接到了動物中心的電話，“我們今晚要放飛Stormy。你們想來看嗎？”參考范文續(xù)寫第一段：Aftermakingthephonecall,wedroveourwaydirectlytotheanimalcenter.

Twopeoplecarryingabigcagecamealong.“I'mBev,andthisisAlfredo,"thewomansaid.“It'sared-tailedhawk.Injuredrightwing",hetoldBev.“InamedherStormy,"Kylesaid.AlfredosmiledandgaveKyleathumbsup.BevaskedsomequestionsandtappedStormy'sinformationintothecomputer.“OK,let'sgetStormyinside!TheywrappedatowelaroundStormy,placedherintothecageandwalkedtothebuilding.KyleandIfollowedclosebehind."Sorry,novisitors,”Bevsaid,“Welimithumancontactsowildanimalshaveabetterchanceofsurvivingwhenwe

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backintothewild.Weweredisappointed,butwehadtodothebestforStormy.ThedoorwasclosedandStormywasgone.續(xù)寫第二段：Fourmonthslaler,wegotaphonecallfromthecenter,“We'rereleasingStormythisevening.Doyouwanttocomeandwatch?

“YES！”Ishouted,“Where,when?“OnthesideoftheroadwhereyoufoundStormybysix-thirty.We'llreleaseheroutinthefield,butyouneedtowatchfromtheroadtoavoiddistraction."Wewaitedonthesideoftheroad.TheycarriedacageintothefieldandAlfredoopenedit.Stormystuckherheadout,butdisappearedbackinside.Fiveminutespassedbeforeshejumpedout.Sheopenedandclosedherwings,andtooktwostepsforward.Finally,Stormyspreadherwingswideandliftedoff!Shecircledoverusbeforeflyinghigherandhigher.Soon,shedisappearedfromsight.“Yougo,Stormy!”Kylewhispered,

sendingathumbsup.“Flystrongandlivelong!”Iwhispered,wavinggoodbye.讀后續(xù)寫--Bea老師的音樂課：機(jī)智引導(dǎo)學(xué)生，激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)動力題目原文呈現(xiàn)：讀后續(xù)寫原文中文翻譯“IhateTuesdays,”saidFinn.“Tuesdaysaretheworstdaysnow.”“Waitandsee,”saidhismother.“Youhaven'tevenmetMissBea.”“我討厭星期二，”Finn說，“現(xiàn)在星期二是最糟糕的日子?！薄跋葎e這么著急下結(jié)論，”他的母親說，“你甚至還沒見過Bea老師呢?！盕innwasstartingpianolessons.EveryTuesday,at3:30,rightafterschool.Rightwhenhisfeetwantedtorunandjump.RightwhenhishandswantedtobuildhisnewStar-Blaster.Hehadthekitwithhim,justincaseMissBeawasn'thome.Finn開始上鋼琴課了。每個星期二，下午3:30，剛放學(xué)。正是他想要去跑跑跳跳肆意玩耍的時間。正是他的想要組裝他的新星爆對決的時間。他帶著星爆對決套裝，以防Bea老師不在家。Butwhenthedooropened,therewasMissBea,athome,smilingandwideawake.“Hellothere,Finn,”shesaid.“Comeonin.”但門開了，Bea老師在家，笑容滿面，精神飽滿。"你好，F(xiàn)inn，"她說，“進(jìn)來吧?！盕innsatonthebenchnearthepianounwillingly.HeheldontohisStar-Blasterkit.Finn不情愿地坐在靠近鋼琴的長凳上。緊握著他的星爆對決套件?！癟hatlookslikeaspecialbox,”saidMissBea.“Isitsomethingnew?”“那看起來像個特別的盒子，”Bea老師說?！笆鞘裁葱缕娴臇|西嗎？”“It'sgoingtobeaStar-Blaster,”saidFinn,“butIhavetowaittillIgethome.”Hetriednottolookgrumpywhenhesaidit.“那將會是一個星爆對決，”Finn說，“但我必須等到我回家才能組裝它?！彼M量在說這話的時候不顯得悶悶不樂[下圖：LEGO星爆對決]?！癆h,soyou'reabuilder,”saidMissBea.Then,MissBeaopenedthelidofthepiano,sayingmysteriously,“Ithashammers,whichyoumustbeinterestedin.Standonthebenchandlookinside.Nowpressakeyandwatchwhathappens.”“所以你是個小建筑師，”Bea老師說。然后，Bea老師打開了鋼琴的蓋子，用神秘的口吻說到:“它有錘子，你一定會感興趣的。站在凳子上看看里面?，F(xiàn)在按一個鍵，看看會發(fā)生什么?！盩hehammersweren'tthekindheexpected.Theywerepiecesofwoodwithroundends.Theendswerecoveredwithfelt.Andtherewasarowofstringsinfrontofthehammers.Finnpressedakeyand(bong!)afathammerhitafatstring.Hepressedanotherkeyand(bong!)askinnyhammerhitaskinnystring.Pressinglotsofkeysatoncemadelotsofhammershitlotsofstrings.Itstillwasn’tasong,butMissBeasaid,“Goodjob.”錘子并不是他預(yù)期的那種。它們是有圓頭的木塊。頭部覆蓋著毛氈。而且在錘子前面有一排弦。Finn按下一個鍵，(咚！)一個粗錘子擊中了一根粗弦。他又按了另一個鍵，(叮！)一個細(xì)錘子擊中了一根細(xì)弦。一次按下許多鍵，許多錘子就會擊中許多弦。雖然這還不是一首歌，但Bea老師說，“非常好?！盕innsatdownandtriedmorekeys.Hislefthandmadelowrumbles，andMissBeasaiditsoundedlikearocketexplosion.Hisrighthandmadehightwinkles,andMissBeasaiditmadeherthinkofstars.ThenMissBeahadaquestion.“Ifyouweregoingtobuildapiano,howmanypieceswouldyouneed?”Finn坐下并嘗試按下更多的鍵。他的左手按出了低沉的轟鳴聲，Bea老師說，這聽起來像火箭爆炸。他的右手按出高亢的叮咚聲，Bea老師說，這讓她想到了星星。然后Bea老師提出了一個問題?！叭绻阋ㄔ煲慌_鋼琴，你需要多少個部件呢？”（忽然想到王千源主演的電影《鋼的琴》）續(xù)寫第一段：Withcuriosity,Finnactivelyparticipatedinthisguessinggame.出于好奇，F(xiàn)inn積極參與了這個"猜謎"游戲(學(xué)鋼琴)。續(xù)寫第二段：“Butyourkitwillbeworthyoureffort,”saidMissBea.“Pianolessonsarelikethat,too."“但你組裝的星爆對決值得你付出的努力，”Bea老師說。“鋼琴課也是如此?！痹囁魑模豪m(xù)寫第一段：Withcuriosity,Finnactivelyparticipatedinthisguessinggame.Hestartedtocountthekeys,thehammers,andthestrings,hismindracing.

"Hmm,IthinkIwouldneedalotofwood.

Andsomefeltforthehammers.Oh,anddefinitelyabunchofstrings!"Hesaidexcitedly.MissBeasmiledandnodded."Goodjob!

Apianoismadeupofhundredsofpartsworkingtogethertomakemusic."

Finnrealised

thecomplexityoftheinstrumentbeforehim.Thepianowasnotjustaninstrumentbutamagnificentpieceofengineering."MyStar-Blasterpalesincomparisontothedifficultyofconstructingapiano."murmu