Welcometoourclass!Let'stalk1.Whichgradeareyouin?2.Areyoubusythesedays?3.Doyoudoanysportstokeephealthyandenergetic?Let’sseewhatDaminghasbeendoing,heisalsoaGradeNinestuedent.

Asamiddleschoolstudentofjuniorthree,Idosportsoneortwohoursaday,suchasdoingmorningexercise,playingbasketball,long-distancerunningandsoon.Ithinkitisveryhelpfultome.WhydoIthinkso?Therearetworeasons.

Firstly,takingexercisemakesmehealthierandmoreenergetic.Secondly,Icanfeelrelaxedindifferentkindsofsports,andthenIdoabetterjobinmystudy.

Inaword,bydoingphysicalexercise,I’mbecomingstrongerandmoreconfidentthanbefore.soIthinkitisnecessaryforustospendsometimeonsportseverydaythoughweareinGrade9.bodyconclusionWhydoIstilldoexercise?titleIsitagoodwriting?DOyouwanttowritewellandgethighmarksincompositions?Bytheway,Howcanwewriteanicecomposition?Let'sstudy★

動(dòng)筆之前（BeforeWriting）

1.仔細(xì)審題，明確要點(diǎn)。(*Knowwhatshouldwewriteabout)1)認(rèn)真分析材料,明確：2)注意細(xì)節(jié)：a.人稱、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件等信息

b.字?jǐn)?shù)要求(如：80詞作文，60——100詞內(nèi)不扣分;不少于80詞---）

a.主題（看圖作文要看懂圖意）；b.體裁（如看圖作文，提示作文，記敘文，應(yīng)用文，自由作文）；c.文章表達(dá)所用的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)。Part1:Writingstepsandskills

2.選擇材料，梳理思路。(*Howtowriteit)1)選擇材料。（針對(duì)開放性作文）注意：a.圍繞主題

b.選擇自己會(huì)表達(dá)的內(nèi)容

2)列提綱（outline)，主要包括：時(shí)態(tài)，段落，細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)，

keywords（關(guān)鍵詞）…Task1:(題型a:根據(jù)圖畫和提示用語寫短文。)

目前，有少數(shù)學(xué)生抽煙，這是一個(gè)很壞的習(xí)慣，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示和所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一篇短文，勸告抽煙的學(xué)生下定決心戒煙。短文包括圖畫的內(nèi)容和以下要點(diǎn)。字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。（生詞：標(biāo)語——sign)要點(diǎn)：1.時(shí)間：某日2.地點(diǎn)：教室前面3.人物：MrGreen,theheadmaster;Tom,astudentinGradeOne4.勸告：抽煙危害學(xué)生身心健康，應(yīng)下定決心戒掉?！癐’minGradeOne.Ican’treadyet.”O(jiān)utlineP1:describethepictureP2:givethestudentssomeadviceWhenwherewhowhatbebadfor…,health,makeuptheirminds,giveup一般過去時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給圖示和故事開頭，按要求續(xù)寫。要求：表達(dá)完整，語句通順連貫；不少于60詞（開頭詞數(shù)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，不要用對(duì)話形式）OnChildren’sDayMrsGreen,fromAustralia,tookherdaughtertotheSummerPalace.Intheafternoon,shecouldn’tfindherdaughter.________________________________Task2:(題型b：文章續(xù)寫。)Outline:P1:P2:Finally,whatMrsGreenfelt,saidWhathappenedonChildren’sDay時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)以“MySummerHoliday”為題寫一篇短文，字?jǐn)?shù)在100字左右。內(nèi)容要求：1.Howdidyouspendyourlastsummerholiday?2.What’syourplanforthisyear’sholiday?3.What’syourfavoritesummerholidaylike?MySummerHolidayP1:時(shí)態(tài):P2:時(shí)態(tài):P3:時(shí)態(tài):ThepasttenseThepresenttenseThefuturetensePlanforthisyear’sholidayTask3:(題型c：根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)寫短文。)Theexperienceinthelastsummerholiday.DescribemyfavoritesummerholidayOutline:★寫作之中（InWriting）:1）連詞成句。注意：a)語法錯(cuò)誤

b)用英語思維，不寫Chinglishc)用把握大的詞句

d)不會(huì)表達(dá)時(shí)，轉(zhuǎn)換思維，用同義，近義詞句

認(rèn)真寫作，注意細(xì)節(jié)。

注意：a)適當(dāng)使用連接詞如：表并列：both…and,notonly…butalso…,either…or…

表轉(zhuǎn)折：but,though,instead…

表因果：so,becauseof,inthisway,asaresult…

表目的：sothat,inorderthat…

表結(jié)果：so…that…,such…that…

表順序：first,second,then,atfirst,atlast…b)盡量避免重復(fù)多次使用同一詞句c)句子排列符合邏輯2）連句成文⑤.適當(dāng)評(píng)論,發(fā)表己見。

Howfriendlytheyare! Whatahappyfamily.!3）結(jié)尾可以適當(dāng)評(píng)論，發(fā)表意見。Ithink….Inmyopinion..Part2PractisewritingLet'sgo!中文名：周琳英文名：Susan性別：女

年齡：15出生地：嘉善陶莊學(xué)校：陶莊中學(xué)年級(jí)：九班級(jí)：六特長(zhǎng)：數(shù)學(xué)、英語

愛好：唱歌、看電視、打排球

優(yōu)點(diǎn)：友好，善良，樂于助人，學(xué)習(xí)努力

Ex1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給周琳的個(gè)人小檔案，以Mygoodfriend為題，寫一篇英語短文，介紹周琳的基本情況。要求條理清楚，語句通順，體現(xiàn)表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容，不得少于12句話。

MyLastSundayEx2:(根據(jù)圖畫和提示用語寫短文。)Whendidthestoryhappen?Where?Howmanypeoplearethereinthepicture?Who?Whatwasitabout?Howwaseverythinggoing?MainideaIdidmyhomeworkinmystudy.LastSundaywasafineday,Igotupearly.AfterbreakfastIhelpedmymothercleanthewindowsinthekitchen.whenmymotherwaswashingthedishes.IntheafternoonIwenttoseemygrandparents.……Theywereverypleasedtoseeme.Iplayedfootballwithmyfriends.Iplayedfootballwithmyfriendsontheplaygroundhappily.HowcanwegotoPicture2fromPicture1?LastSundaywasafineday,Igotupearly.AfterbreakfastIdidmyhomeworkinmystudy.I

helped….

?

Don’tforgetthelinkwords:and,butorthen,when,before,after,while,assoonas..not…until...notonly…butalso…

nomatterhow/where/when/who………____________________________

2011年全國(guó)實(shí)施公共場(chǎng)所禁煙規(guī)定，針對(duì)這一話題，某中學(xué)對(duì)該校學(xué)生的吸煙情況進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，結(jié)果如圖所示。請(qǐng)就此話題用英語寫一篇短文。要求：1.對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行描述；

2．表明自己的看法并提出建議；

3．詞數(shù)在80左右。提示詞:doasurveyabout…(做一個(gè)有關(guān)……的調(diào)查)3%ofthestudents(百分之三的學(xué)生)____________________________Ex3.Practisewriting!★成文之后

(Afterwriting)①.一般語法項(xiàng)目的檢查

人稱:Mr.Greenworkshard,sheisthebestworkerintheiroffice.時(shí)態(tài):Oneday,theyaregoingtotheisland.主謂一致:Everyoneinourclassworkhard.習(xí)慣用法:HehelpsmeinmyEnglish.②.注意語序

(感嘆句，賓語從句等)1.Hedidn’tknowwherethebookshopwas.2.Howbeautifultheflowersare!.

③.符合習(xí)慣

Myworkisverybusy.Iverylikeit.I’mverybusywithmywork.Ilikeitverymuch.Body

Conclusion/End

.5WH+

.RightLinkwords

andsentencepaterns.Killallthemistakes(包括:時(shí)態(tài)人稱句法等等）ApassageTitle

SummaryThankyou!Goodbye!Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/endMyadvice1).Recitesomegoodphrases,sentencesandarticles.Eg:

Proverbs(sayings):

3).Don’twritelongsentencesifyouarenotsureaboutit,Remember----shortbutgoodsentencesareok.

2).Writeneatly.Homework

按照今天所學(xué)方法寫一篇作文---Waystoshareopinionswitheachother.

寫作時(shí)切記：

主題不偏移，要點(diǎn)不漏遺，語法無錯(cuò)誤，行文要順暢。

目前，有少數(shù)學(xué)生抽煙，這是一個(gè)很壞的習(xí)慣，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示和所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一篇短文，勸告抽煙的學(xué)生下定決心戒煙。短文包括圖畫的內(nèi)容和以下要點(diǎn)。字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。（生詞：標(biāo)語——sign)要點(diǎn)：1.時(shí)間：某日2.地點(diǎn)：教室前面3.人物：MrGreen,theheadmaster;Tom,astudentinGradeOne4.勸告：抽煙危害學(xué)生身心健康，應(yīng)下定決心戒掉。“I’minGradeOne.Ican’treadyet.”體裁：字?jǐn)?shù)要求：時(shí)態(tài)：看圖提示作文80詞左右一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給圖示和故事開頭，按要求續(xù)寫。要求：表達(dá)完整，語句通順連貫；不少于60詞（開頭詞數(shù)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，不要用對(duì)話形式）OnChildren’sDayMrsGreen,fromAustralia,tookherdaughtertotheSummerPalace.Intheafternoon,shecouldn’tfindherdaughter.________________________________鏈接中考Outline:體裁：時(shí)態(tài)：詞數(shù)：Keywords:P1:P2:記敘文

過去時(shí)

不少于60police,notfind,tellreturn,happy,thank…timeageclothes...

Recentlywedidasurveryaboutsmokinginourschool.Itshowsthat90%ofthestudentsneversmoke,3%ofthestudentsoftensmokeand7%sometimesdo.Inotherwords,10%ofthestudentssmoke.That’sterrible.Asweallknow,smokingisharmfultoourhealth.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplelosetheirlivesbecauseofit.What’smore,Smokingnotonlydoesharmtosmokers,butalsoharmspeoplearound,Besides,itwastesmoney.Sometimes,itcanevencauseafire.

Inaword,smokingissodangerousthatweshouldkeepawayfromit.

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