eq\a\vs4\al(讀寫結(jié)合·增分寫作\b\lc\|\rc\(\a\vs4\al\co1(,,,))第一組)自主練評(píng)——試試自己能力如何(先自主構(gòu)思并寫作)一、應(yīng)用文寫作(?？俭w裁：邀請(qǐng)信)假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生朋友David對(duì)中國(guó)國(guó)畫非常感興趣。你校國(guó)畫社團(tuán)正在招募新的成員，請(qǐng)寫信邀請(qǐng)他加入。內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的；2.社團(tuán)活動(dòng)；3.期待加入。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。DearDavid，Yours，LiHua二、讀后續(xù)寫(?？荚掝}：家人關(guān)愛(ài))閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。FindingNisha'scourageThechillfromtheautumnwindswasbad,butitwasnotnearlyashardtobearasthechillNishafeltinherheart.Shecouldnotforgetthewayshehadfrozeninfrontoftheclasstoday.MrRobertshaddividedtheclassintogroupstodopresentations.TodayhadbeenNisha'sturn.However,thingsdidnotturnoutasexpected.MrRobertshadkindlyendedNisha'spartofthepresentationeventhoughshehadclearlynotfinished.HehadalsoaskedNishatostayafterclassforamoment.“Nisha,Iknowyou'reshy,butyouworkedhardonthisproject.I'dhatetoseeyougiveuponyourself.”MrRobertshesitated,“IfIgiveyouanotherchanceuntiltomorrow,doyouthinkyoucanfindyourcourage？”Nishanodded,gratefulforthechance.Shehadkeptherheaddownandhopedtheschooldaywouldendsoon.Whenshereachedherbackstepsthatafternoon,shecouldseeaninvitinglightcomingfromthekitchenwindows.Mommawasbaking.MommastudiedNisha'sfaceasshecameintothekitchen.“What'swrong,Nisha？”TearsshoneinNisha'sbrowneyes.Nishaletthewholestoryout.Mommawassilentforamoment,herhandsstillbusywiththecake.“Whyisitthatyoucantalktomeaboutanythingandeverything,butyoucan'ttalktoyourclass？”Mommaasked.Shesetthetimerandthensaid,“Letmeshowyousomething.”NishafollowedMommatoherbedroom.ThereMommapulledoutabookfilledwithnewspaperclippingsandpictures.Inittherewasablueribbonthatsaid“FirstPlace”andapictureofherselfwhenshewasveryyoung,standingwithherparents.“Iwonitforpublicspeaking.Istartedtheschoolyearastheshyestgirlonthespeechteam,butIendedtheyearastheblueribbonwinner.Itwasn'teasybecauseIwasatimidgirl—notsureofmyselfatall.Iworkedhard,andmostlyIfacedmyfears.Youjustneedtofindyourcourage.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Thatwasthesecondtimesomeonehadtoldherthattoday.ThenextdayNishaagainwalkedtothefrontoftheclassroomtogiveherpresentation.自悟賦能——看看他人高在何處(再晨讀背誦學(xué)亮點(diǎn))說(shuō)明：文中黑體部分為亮點(diǎn)詞匯，波浪線部分為亮點(diǎn)句式，多揣摩領(lǐng)悟，以下同。一、背“應(yīng)用文”范文——學(xué)范式、學(xué)亮點(diǎn)DearDavid，LearningthatyouarekeenonChinesepaintings,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojointheChinesepaintingclubinourschool.(第一段：發(fā)出邀請(qǐng))Variousactivitiesareorganizedforitsmembers.First,theclubholdsthemelecturesbymasters,whichequipuswithrelevantpaintingskills(定語(yǔ)從句).Also,itoffersvisitstogalleriestoappreciatesomemasterpieces,helpingusgainadeeperinsightintotheChinesepaintingsandthestoriesbehind.Ifinterested(狀語(yǔ)從句的省略),youcanvisitourschoolwebsiteandsignuponlinebeforeMay4th.(第二段：社團(tuán)活動(dòng)情況、益處及加入方式。此處敘述容易忽略活動(dòng)的益處及加入方式，對(duì)所給信息缺乏邏輯思考)IbelievetheChinesepaintingclubwillleadyouintoacolorfulworldandyouwillbenefitalotfromit.Lookingforwardtoyourjoining.(第三段：期待參加)Yours,LiHua二、悟“讀后續(xù)寫”范文——學(xué)構(gòu)思、學(xué)表達(dá)[范文一]Thatwasthesecondtimesomeonehadtoldherthattoday.Gazingattheblueribbon,Nishawonderedwhethershewouldbeabletofindherowncourage.Lostinthought(過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)),shewasledbacktothekitchenforthebakedcake.MommaseemedtohavenoticedNisha'suncertainty.“YoucanmakeitasIdid(方式狀語(yǔ)從句)．”MommareassuredherandreachedoutherhandstotietheblueribbontoNisha'swrist.InspiredbyMomma,NishafeltrelievedandbegantotastethecakefullofMom'slove.ThenextdayNishaagainwalkedtothefrontoftheclassroomtogiveherpresentation.Again,afloodoffearwelledup,andherhearthammeredviolently.ShecastaglimpseatMrRoberts,whoworeacomfortingandinspiringsmile.WiththeblueribbontiedbyMommaonherwrist(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，with＋名詞＋過(guò)去分詞),herfearsgraduallyfadedaway.Withadeepbreath,Nishabeganherpresentation.Whenshefinished,theclassburstintothunderousapplause.AbigsmilespreadacrossNisha'sface.Definitely,Nishaknewthatshehadfoundhercourage(賓語(yǔ)從句)．[范文二]Thatwasthesecondtimesomeonehadtoldherthattoday.FollowingMommabacktothekitchen,Nishawaswonderingwhatitwasthathadmadehersoafraid(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型).Atalosswhattodo,Nishasatdowninthekitchen.AsMommapulledthecakesfromtheoven,thesmellofthesweetcakecomfortedNisha.Mommathencutathicksliceforher.“There'snothingbetterthanMomma'slovebakedinacake(“否定詞＋比較級(jí)”表示最高級(jí))，”saidMomma,handingherasli