M4WritingReadthetable.HealthyfoodanddrinkUnhealthyfoodanddrinkMeat,carrots,eggs,sweetpotatoes,cheese,fish,chickensoup,noodles,rice,fruitandvegetablesarehealthyfood.Juice,water,teaandmilkarehealthydrink.Icecream,hamburgers,sugar,andcandyaren’thealthyfood.Colaisn’thealthydrink.becauseitisrichinproteins

蛋白質(zhì)anditcanhelpusgrowtallerandstronger.becausetheyarefried油炸的andtheyhavetoomuchoil.[?pr??ti?nz]Meatishealthy,but

hamburgersaren’theathyThesteamed蒸的fishishealthybecause...,but

roastduckisunhealthybecause....itcanretainnutrition保留營(yíng)養(yǎng),andthecalcium鈣initisgoodforbones骨頭.itisnotonlysalty咸的

butalso

fullofoil.[r??te?n][nju?tr??n][??l]So

it’sbetterforustosteamthefoodthanroastorfryit.What’smore,don’tusetoomuchsalt.[?k?lsi?m]Anappleis

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toomuchicecreamisbadforourteethandstomach胃.theyarefullofvitamins,whichcanmakeusbeautiful.[?v?t?m?nz].Carrots,eggsandsweetpotatoesaregoodforeyes.Milk,cheeseandfisharegoodforteeth.Havelotsofdeliciouschickensoup.AdviceReadParagraph2andtrytohelphim.pooreyesightWhat'swrongwithhim?toothachetiredVitaminA(維生素A)[?v?t?m?n]Calcium(鈣)[?k?lsi?m]protein(蛋白質(zhì))[?pr??ti?n]Eattherightfoodandbehealthy.It’simportanttohavetherightfoodandstayhealthy.Doyouhavetherightfoodanddrinkforlunch?學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)體裁寫作任務(wù)分析時(shí)態(tài)人稱內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)說明文一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第一人稱（2）是否美味、健康

（3）通過合理飲食來保持健康的建議1.Isyourfoodanddrinkhealthy?Wehaverice,meat,fish,variousvegetablesforlunchatschool.

Myfavouritefoodis...because...2.Wehavedifferentkindsoffoodforlunch,suchasmeat,fish,variousvegetablesandsoon.

Iloveourschoollunchbecauseit’sreallydeliciousandhealthy.However,thereisstillsomeunhealthyfoodinit.3.Mylunchisdeliciousandhealthy.Weeatrice,vegetables,meatand...forlunch.Ilike...best,because...Beginning...ishealthy,becauseitisrichin/fullof/goodfor......isunhealthy,becauseithastoomuchandit’sbadfor...Remembertouse“and”,“but”,“so”...Whatadvicedoyouhaveonyourschoollunch?Why?Ihope

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Iwantahealthierschoollunch,whichisimportantforchildren.It’simportantto

eattherightfoodandstayhealthy,sopleasetakemyadvice!Lunchisimportantforstudents,soremember:eatwell,stayhealthy

and

don’tgetfat!Ending查（checkbyyourself）Readyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要點(diǎn)齊了嗎？2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)了嗎？3.句子連貫嗎？4.單詞都寫對(duì)了嗎？5.有沒錯(cuò)誤的語(yǔ)法？6.書寫整潔嗎？大聲朗讀文章并檢查是否符合以下要求一檔17-20二檔13-16三檔9-12很好地完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)，包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，中心突出，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)句流暢，意思清楚連貫，使用豐富的詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯運(yùn)用錯(cuò)誤較少，書寫規(guī)范。較好地完成了規(guī)定任務(wù)，有較好的表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的能力，有圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，具有一定的語(yǔ)言