Unit5

HuamnsandnatureSectionⅥ

Writing

本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一個(gè)宣傳手冊(cè)。宣傳手冊(cè)是為了某一特定需要，通過(guò)一定形式向公眾傳遞信息的手段，是說(shuō)明文的一種。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearntowriteafterthemodelHowtoSurviveanEarthquakeIfyou’reindoors：宣傳手冊(cè)·Don’trun,butprotectyourself.Don’ttrytorunoutofthebuildingduringanearthquake.Themostimportantthingistoprotectyourselfasmuchasyoucan.·Drop,coverandholdon.DROPdownontoyourhandsandknees.COVERyourheadandneckwithyourhands,armsorhardobjects.Ifpossible,findastrongshelternearbywhichwillcoveryourwholebody.HOLDONtoyourshelteruntiltheshakingstops.·Findthetriangleoflife.Sitonthefloornexttoasturdypieceoffurnituresothatifawallfallsdown,itwillcreateaspaceforyoutosurvive.Ifyou’reoutdoors：·Moveawayfromanythingthatcanfall.Movetoopenareas.Buildings,trees,streetlightsandpowerlinescanallfalldownduringanearthquake.·Findashelterwhereyoucanstay.Ifyouarenearobjectsthatcanfall,findasheltertoprotectyourselffromthem.·Waitamomentbeforemovingtoanyotherplace.Objectsmayalsofallafteraquakeandtherearealwaysstrongaftershocks.Observecarefullybeforeyoumoveaway.Ifyou’reinacar：·Stop.Stopyourcarasquicklyasyoucan,butavoidstoppingnearabuildingorunderatree.·Stayseated.Staycalminyourcar.Thecar’smetalbodycanprotectyoufromfallingobjects.·Driveawaycarefullywhenthequakestops.Avoidbridgesthathavebeendamagedormaybedamagedbyaftershocks.篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Thefirstpart：Whatyoushoulddoifyou’reindoors.Thesecondpart：Whatyoushoulddoifyou’reoutdoors.Thethirdpart：Whatyoushoulddoifyou’reinacar.(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①________________v．歡迎②________________n.冒險(xiǎn)③__________________位于……④________________v.覆蓋⑤________________n.活動(dòng)⑥________________v.體驗(yàn)⑦_(dá)_______________n.住宿⑧__________________為……做準(zhǔn)備⑨________________更多信息⑩__________________旅游景點(diǎn)welcomeadventurebelocatedin/liein...coveractivityexperienceaccommodationmakepreparationsforfurtherinformationtouristattractionⅡ.While-writing一家遠(yuǎn)足營(yíng)地(AdventureHiking)準(zhǔn)備組織一次冒險(xiǎn)遠(yuǎn)足旅行，并希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其寫一篇宣傳稿。主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1．本次遠(yuǎn)足活動(dòng)是為喜歡冒險(xiǎn)和遠(yuǎn)足的人士組織的一次活動(dòng)；2．遠(yuǎn)足要穿過(guò)一個(gè)大沙漠以考驗(yàn)參加者的體力和耐力；3．遠(yuǎn)足將體驗(yàn)激烈的漂流活動(dòng)；4．遠(yuǎn)足將爬一座最大海拔高度為5000米的高山，并可能遇到一些野生動(dòng)物；5．遠(yuǎn)足組織者將提供良好的住宿并要求參加者攜帶輕而有用的行李；6．欲參加者請(qǐng)致e-mail至adventurehiking.AH。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.首段：_______________________________________________________________；中段：__________________________________________________________________；尾段：_________________________________________________________________。首先對(duì)遠(yuǎn)足營(yíng)地進(jìn)行宣傳然后對(duì)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和注意事項(xiàng)進(jìn)行詳細(xì)描述再次宣傳遠(yuǎn)足營(yíng)地并給出具體的聯(lián)系方式Step2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1．Wordsandphrases①________________去遠(yuǎn)足②________________可供選擇的活動(dòng)③________________n.體力④__________________________最大海拔高度為⑤________________生存技巧⑥________________n.組織⑦_(dá)_______________n.住宿⑧________________n.耐力gohikingoptionalactivitiesstrengthwithamaximumaltitudeofsurvivalskillsorganizationaccommodationpatience2．Sentences①你們將體驗(yàn)令人興奮的水上漂流，你們將獲得你們從未有過(guò)的經(jīng)歷。(祈使句＋and＋陳述句)________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________②營(yíng)地提供良好的食宿，你們不用擔(dān)心遠(yuǎn)足后休息的地方。(so連接的并列句)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Experiencetheexcitingwhite-waterraftingandyou’llgaintheexperienceyouhavenevergot.Havegoodaccommodationatourcampsodon’tbeanxiousaboutyourrestplaceafterthehiking.Step3

Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.duringthehiking，and，lastbutnotleast，orAdventureHikingIfyoulikebothgoinghikingandadventure，AdventureHikingistheorganizationforyou.Duringthehiking，we’llhavethefollowingoptionalactivitiesforyou.Walkthroughabigdeserttotestyourstrengthandpatience.Experiencetheexcitingwhite-waterraftingandyou’llgaintheexperienceyouhavenevergot.Climbahighmountainwithamaximumaltitudeof5，000metresandperhapsyou’llmeetsomewildanimals.Havegoodaccommodationatourcampsodon’tbeanxiousaboutyourrestplaceafterthehiking.Lastbutnotleast，takeyourownluggagewithyou.Thethingsinitshouldbeusefulandlight.You’llhavemuchfunandlearnsurvivalskillsduringtheadventurehiking.Callustodayore-mailusat

adventurehiking.AH.Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner,andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Isthestructureofthepassageappropriate?□2.Arethereanyspellingmistakes?□3.Arethereanygrammaticalmistakeslikethetenses(時(shí)態(tài))?□4.Doesthebrochureincludeallthemaincontents?□5.IssimpleandinformalEnglishcorrectlyused?亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)1．Thiskindofcomputerisofgoodquality.2．Allthecommonfamiliescanaffordtobuyone.Itcontrolsmostlybyitself，soitisveryeasytooperate.3．Itisconvenienttocarry，foritissmallandlight.4．Onceyouhaveoneofthiskind，you’llenjoyitverymuch.5．Therearemanykindsoffoodservedintherestaurant，whichareverydelicious.6．Atthesametime，allthefoodlooksniceandsmellsgood.7．What’smore，thepricesofthemareveryreasonable.8．Theowneraswellasthewaitersisveryfriendlyandkind，andtheywillmakeyoufeelathome.句式欣賞IlikeSpringFestival,becauseSpringFestivalisafamilyreunionfestival.我喜歡春節(jié)，因?yàn)榇汗?jié)是個(gè)親人團(tuán)聚的節(jié)日。Peoplecannotonlyenjoyth