7AUnit7ShoppingTaskHobo,doyouknowwhatdateitistoday?Iknowyoulikeshopping.ThereisaDouble12ShoppingFestivaltoday!Really?Let’sgototheSunshineShoppingMall!No,no,no.Justtakeoutyourphoneorcomputer.Theactivityisattheonlinemalls!AndIdon’tneedtocarrythebagsforyouthistime.12December.Whydoyouaskmeaboutthis?Wheredoyougoshopping?Andwhydoyougoshoppingthere?HKAHaveyoursayAShoppingMall?AnOnlineMall?Eddie:TherearemanypopularmallsontheInternet.雨花客廳E-Park弘陽(yáng)廣場(chǎng)RedSunMallHobo:TherearealsomanypopularshoppingmallsinNanjing.WandaPlazaandWandaMallbookshopclothesshoptoyshopsupermarketshoeshopsportsshopgiftshopHobo:Therearemanydifferentshopsinthemalls.Whatotherplacesdothemallshave?Andwhatcanwedothere?Let’slookatMillie’snotesaboutamall!WhatdoyouthinkofMillie’snotes?TopicFactsDetails(細(xì)節(jié))WhatdoyouknowaboutMillie’sarticlefromhernotes?TopicFactsDetailsWhatelse?Whatelse?abusstopfiveclothesshopsdifferentbookshoptopfloorareascinema1.Topicsentences2.OpinionswithsupportingReasons3.ConclusionLet’scompareMillie’sarticlewithhernotes.WhichsentencesdonotshowupinMillie’snotes?TopicSunshineShoppingMallPara.1BasicinformationPara.2DetailedInformationPara.3Highlights(亮點(diǎn))Para.4OpinionsConclusionSuggestions1.Topicsentences2.OpinionswithsupportingReasons3.Conclusionanewmall,nearabusstopverybig,fivefloorsofshopsmanyclothesshop--differentkindsofclothes,abigbookshop--lotsofinterestingbooksonefloorofrestaurants--topfloor,foodsfromdifferentareas/Iike…,abigcinema--myfavouriteplace/like…Themallisagoodplacetomeetfriendsandhavefun.WhydoesMillieaddsthesesentencestoherarticle?Tobuildthestructureofherarticle.HowdoesMilliesupportheropinion“Themallisverybig”?Sentence1:Themallisverybig.Tip1:Usedetailstosupportyourideas.Sentence2:IlikeChongqingRestaurant.Thefoodthereisreallygreat.Sentence3:Ilikewatchingfilms.WhydoesMillieaddssuchinformationtoherarticle?Canwedeletethem?Tip2:Usepersonalexperiences,suggestions,likesordislikes,andideastomakeyourarticlereal.HowdoesMilliesupportheridea“Themallisagoodplacetomeetfriendsandhavefun.”?Sentence4:Themallisagoodplacetomeetfriendsandhavefun.Tip3:Usefivesensestomakeyourfeelingsspread.LookSoundTasteSmellFeelTip4:Useadjectivestomakeyourarticlevivid.new,big,many,different,interesting,great,favouriteHowdoyoulikeMillie’sarticle?WhydoesMilliewritethisarticle?ReasonsSupportingdetailsOpinionsWonderful?Good?Notbad?WhatContentHowStructureHowLanguageandtechniquesWhyPurposeandfeelingsWonderful!Good!Notbad!EvaluationSuggestionsWhatdoesshewriteabouttheshoppingmall?DoesshefollowherNotes?Doessheusesomegoodexpressionsandwritingtechniquestosupportherideas?Doessheachieveherwritingpurposeandspreadherfeelings?Howmany“big”sdoesMillieuse?Shecanusedifferentexpressionstoexpressthesamemeaning.Tip5:usedifferentexpressionstoexpressthesamemeaningtomakeyourarticlecolourful.Themall_______alargebookshopand____________alotofinterestingbooksinit.Usebecausetorewritethissentence.new/old/big(large)/small/modern/traditional…near/notfarawayfrom/closeto/inthemiddleof…busstop/undergroundstation/myhome/ourschool…Youcantakeabus/taketheunderground/takeataxi/walkthere…Therebe…/Ithas…number+floorsof/buildingsof(buildingA,B,C…)different/many/all/kindsof…lotsof/alotof/many/onthetopfloor/first(ground)floor/B1(firstfloorunderground)…InbuildingA…Ilike…bestbecause…Themallisaperfect/nice/wonderfulplaceto…NotesWritingPlanFirstdraftRevisingTopicWhat’sinit?whydoyoulikeitbest?Whatisyourfavouriteshoppingmall?Whatcanyouget/dothere?What’sspecialaboutit?HKAHaveyoursayTopicMyfavouriteshoppingmallPart1:BasicinformationPart2:DetailedInformationPart3:Highlights(亮點(diǎn))Part4:OpinionsConclusionSuggestionsIt’stimeforyourwritingplan!Now,enjoyyourwriting!WhatContentHowStructureHowLanguageandtechniquesWhyPurposeandfeelingsWhatdoIwriteabouttheshoppingmall?DoIfollowmyFourSquares?DoIachievemyownwritingpurposeandspreadmyfeelings?DoIusesomegoodexpressionsandwritingtechniquestosupportmyideas?Wonderful!Good!Notbad!EvaluationIt’stimeforyourself-assessment!WhatContentHowStructureHowLanguageandtechniquesWhyPurposeandfeelingsWonderful!Good!Notbad!EvaluationSuggestionsWhatdoeshe/shewriteabouttheshoppingmall?Doeshe/shefollowhis/herFourSquares?Doeshe/sheusesomegoodexpressionsandwritingtechniquestosupporthis/herideas?Doeshe/sheachievehis/herwritingpurposeandspreadhis/herfeelings?He/shecan_____________________________It’stimeforPeer-editing!AShoppingMall?AnOnlineMall?Wordsispower.Butthemorepoweryouget,themoreresponsibilities(責(zé)任)youwillhave.Whichonedoyoulikebetter?Why?HKAhaveyoursayCol