Task:MybestholidayWhendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?Whowasthere?Whathappened?Howdidyoufeel?

Kitty'stripThenweshouldgivedetailstosupportthemainpoints.

When: duringthewinterholiday

Where:HongKongMainpoints

Who: Kittyandherparents

What: visitedHong KongDisneyland

How:

hadafantastictimeWhat:visitedHongKongDisneylandenjoyedtheSpaceMountainridewatchedaparade

watcheda4-DfilmdidsomeshoppingwatchedthefireworksDetails

MrwuisaskingtheClass1,Grade8studentstoorganizethefollowinginformationintomainpointsanddetails.First,helpthemwritethecorrectlettersintheblanks.aClass1,Grade8studentsbEnjoyedthenaturalbeautycEverybodyfeltexciteddFlewkiteseWentfishingbythelakef5MarchgSouthHillhAvisittoSouthHillWhen:____________Where:____________Who:_____________________What:_____________________How:______________________fgadhebcOn5March,theClass1,Grade8studentswenttoSouthHill.Theyenjoyedthenaturalbeautythere.Someofthemflewkites,whilesomeofthemwentfishingbythelake.Everybodyfeltveryexcited.Workinpairsandtalkabouttheirtrip.DisneylandKitty’stripDisneylandisafamousthemeparkandithasfourdifferentparts—MainStreetUSA,TomorrowLand,FantasylandandAdventureland.OceanParkKitty’stripInOceanPark,wecanseethedolphinshowandthebirdshow.Everyyear,manytouristsgotheretohaveagoodtimeespecially（特別）thechildren.MainPointsDetailsWhenThewinterholiday------whereHongKong------WhoMyparentsandI------WhatVisitingplacesofinterestDisneyland---paradeofDisneycharacters---excitingSpaceMountainride

Oceanpark---dolphinshowandbirdshowMainPointsDetailsWhatOtheractivitiesVisitedmuseumsWentshoppingEatingDeliciousseafoodHowEnjoyedthetripInteresting,exciting,fun,niceWanttovisititagain

Ittookus…toflyto…Thenextday,wewentto…Ilovedwatchingtheinteresting……wasexciting/beautiful/fantastic.Onthethirdday,wevisited…Wewentto…onthefifthday.…wasthebestpartoftheday.Weenjoyedthistripverymuch.UsefulexpressionsKittyiswritingabouthertriptoHongKong.Helphercompleteherarticle.Thedayfinallyarrived.MyparentsandIleftfortheairportintheearlymorning.IttookusaboutthreeandahalfhourstoflytoHongKong.Thenextday,wewenttothemostfamousthemepark—__________.Ilovedwatchingtheinteresting________ofDisneycharacters,andtheSpaceMountainridewasvery________.DisneylandparadeexcitingOnthethirdday,wevisitedanotherfamousthemeparkinHongKong—__________.Wewatchedthe____________andthebirdshowthere.Theyweregreatfun.Onthefourthday,wevisitedsomemuseums,andthenwewent_________.Mymotherenjoyedthatdaymost.Sheboughtalotofpresentsforourrelativesandherfriends.OceanparkdolphinshowshoppingWewenttoaseafoodrestaurantonthefifthdayandhada________meal.ThefoodinHongKongwasreallynice.Weenjoyedthistripverymuch,andIhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday.deliciousAnalysis(分析)kitty’sarticle.Wecangroupthisarticleinto3parts:Part1:para()—para()Itismainlyabout…

Part2:para()—para()Itismainlyabout…

Part3:para()—para()Itismainlyabout…

Part1:para()—para()Itismainlyabout_________________Part2:para()—para()Itismainlyabout______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Part3:para()—para()Itismainlyabout_______

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time,place,people①Activities(whatshedid)②Timedetails—thenextday/thethirdday/thefourthday/thefifthday③Place—Disneyland/OceanPark④Eatingfeelings/256/Youaregoingtowriteanarticleaboutoneofyourholidays.Writedownsomemainpointsanddetails,andorganizeyourideasbeforeyouwrite.MainpointsDetailsWhenWhereWhoWhatHowWhenyoupreparetowriteafactfileandanarticle,thefollowingtipscanhelpyou.1.Remembertostate(陳述)clearlytheplaceandthetimeofyourtrip,andthepeoplewhowentwithyou.2.Organizeyourideasbeforeyouwrite.3.Thinkofsomethinginter