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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Throughthediningroomwindow,
theraysofthesettingsunglowedorangeandgold.
Itlookedlikeahugetraditionallantern(燈籠)litintheskyforthewholeworldtosee,asRamadan(齋月),the
Muslim(穆斯林)holymonth,
cametoanend.透過(guò)餐廳的窗戶(hù),落日的光芒閃耀著橙色和金色。它看起來(lái)像一個(gè)巨大的傳統(tǒng)燈籠(燈籠)照亮天空,讓全世界都能看到,就像齋月一樣(齋月),穆斯林(穆斯林)神圣的月份,結(jié)束了。DuringRamadan,Muslimchildren
danceinthestreets,swingingtraditionallanternsofallsizes.Thisyear,Ayasha'sgrandparentsinEgypthadsentalanterntoKamil,Ayasha'syoungerbrother.Kamil's
lantern
was
bright
blue,with
abattery-powered
flashing
light
instead
of
a
candle.
Ever
sinceKamil
hadopened
the
package,he
had
been
joyouslyswinging(
旋轉(zhuǎn))
hisflashinglantern.齋月期間,穆斯林兒童在街上跳舞,揮動(dòng)各種大小的傳統(tǒng)燈籠。今年,Ayasha在埃及的祖父母給Ayasha的弟弟Kamil送了一盞燈籠。卡米爾的燈籠是亮藍(lán)色的,用電池供電的閃光燈代替了蠟燭。自從卡米爾打開(kāi)包裹后,他就高興地?cái)[動(dòng)著(旋轉(zhuǎn))他閃爍的燈籠。“Hislanternis
reallyjustaholidaytoy,"Ayashasaidtoherselfasshewatchedhim,"Mylanternis
special,somethingIwanttokeepforever".Herlantern,madeofbeautifulshinyglass,was
alovingtouchofhome.Hergrandparentshadsentittoherwhenher
familymovedtoAmericaforherdad'snewengineeringjob.Ayashasmiledproudlyasshelit
thecandle
insideher
lantern.“他的燈籠真的只是一個(gè)節(jié)日玩具,”Ayasha看著他對(duì)自己說(shuō),“我的燈籠很特別,我想永遠(yuǎn)保存下去?!彼臒艋\是由美麗閃亮的玻璃制成的,是一種充滿(mǎn)愛(ài)的家的感覺(jué)。當(dāng)她的家人搬到美國(guó)為她父親的新工程工作時(shí),她的祖父母把它寄給了她。Ayasha驕傲地笑著點(diǎn)燃燈籠里的蠟燭。Tomorrowwouldbeadayforcelebration—forwearingnewclothestomorningprayers(禱告)forsharinggiftsandsweettreatsandforshowinglovetofamilyandfriends.
Ayashacouldn'twait.明天將是慶祝的日子——穿著新衣服去做晨禱(禱告)分享禮物和甜食,向家人和朋友表達(dá)愛(ài)意。Ayasha等不及了?!癟imefor
dinner!The
food
smells
delicious!”Dad
announced.“My
favoritecake!”Kamilcriedexcitedly,swinginghislanternincircles.“Becareful,Kamil!”Mom
cried
and
carefullyavoidedtheswinginglanternasshecarriedalargebowlofsouptothetable.ButKamilwastooexcitedtocalmdown.Thebluelightkeptswinginguntilunfortunately,heknockedintoMom.Hislanternfellontothesofaandwasintact(完好無(wú)損的),butthebowlMomwasholdingfell
tothefloor,spilling(灑)thesoupandsendingbrokenpieceseverywhere!“晚飯時(shí)間到了!食物聞起來(lái)很香!”爸爸宣布??谞柵d奮地喊道:“我最喜歡的蛋糕!”他把燈籠轉(zhuǎn)了一圈。“小心點(diǎn),卡米爾!”媽媽一邊哭一邊小心翼翼地避開(kāi)擺動(dòng)的燈籠,一邊端著一大碗湯端到桌子上。但卡米爾太激動(dòng)了,無(wú)法平靜下來(lái)。藍(lán)光一直在閃爍,直到不幸的是,他撞到了媽媽。他的燈籠掉在沙發(fā)上,完好無(wú)損(完好無(wú)損的),但是媽媽拿著的碗掉到了地板上,灑了出來(lái)(灑)湯和發(fā)送碎片到處!注意:1.
續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.
請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Tomake
things
worse,Kamil
stumbled(絆倒)against
the
table,knockingoverAyasha’glasslantern.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.故事梗概:
這是穆斯林齋月前一天,弟弟Kamil收到了爺爺奶奶的一份禮物——一個(gè)漂亮的電池藍(lán)燈籠。當(dāng)Kamil拿著燈籠開(kāi)心得轉(zhuǎn)圈炫耀時(shí),姐姐Ayasha雖然有點(diǎn)羨慕,但是看到前兩年?duì)敔斈棠趟徒o自己的玻璃燈籠,感到也很自豪。
很明顯Kamil有點(diǎn)興奮過(guò)頭了。當(dāng)媽媽端著一大碗湯過(guò)來(lái)、并且提醒他不要再轉(zhuǎn)圈、以防止碰到時(shí),Kamil根本聽(tīng)不進(jìn)去。突然,他碰到了媽媽?zhuān)臒艋\掉到沙發(fā)上。而媽媽的湯碗掉到地上碎了,湯撒了一地。Para1:更加糟糕的是,Kamil絆到了桌子,然后碰上Ayasha的玻璃燈籠。Para2:
Ayasha打開(kāi)門(mén),看見(jiàn)Kamil手里提著他最珍愛(ài)的燈籠站在門(mén)口。續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)發(fā)展:第一段1.theconsequenceofKamil’sstumble樂(lè)極生悲Ayasha’sfeelingsandreactions悲痛欲絕Kamil’sfeelingsandreactions后悔不迭(注意銜接)第二段:1.Kamil’sapology賠禮道歉Ayasha’sreactions接納迎接Theme揭示主題【初步構(gòu)思】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbledagainstthetable,
knockingover
Ayasha'sglasslantern.Thebeautifulshinyglass
shattered
intopieces,scatteringalloverthefloor.Ayashafelther
heartsink
asshelookedatthebrokenpiecesofherspeciallantern.Shecouldn'thelpbut
feelupsetandangry
atKamilforbeingsocareless.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Hiseyeswere
filledwithremorse,andhe
heldoutthelanterntoher."I'msosorry,Ayasha.Ididn'tmeantobreakyourlantern,"Kamilsaid,hisvoicefilledwithgenuineregret.【銜接+升華】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbled(絆倒)againstthetable,knockingoverAyasha’sglasslantern.Itsbreakingglasssoundedlikeawarningbell,andthecandleinsideblewoutimmediately.
The
roomwas
very
quiet
for
a
moment.
“Accidents
happen,”
Mom
broke
thesilencewithasighasshewipedupthespills.Inafitofanger,
Ayashastormedintoherbedroom
withherbrokenlantern,
slammingthedoorbehindher.
ThebrightRamadansunsetfadedtodarkness,andherexcitementfadedwithit.
Forher,thecelebrationwasspoiledbeforeitevenstarted.Ayashacriedherselftosleep.
Suddenly,shewaswakenupbyaknockonthedoor.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Withhisheaddrooping,hesaidsoftly,“YoucanhavemylanternsinceIbrokeyours.”Knowing
howmuchhisfirstlanternmeanttohim,Ayashawastouchedbyhisoffer.
Ramadanwasatime
forfamilyandforgiveness,andlanternswereonlysymbols.
Thereallightandwarmthcame
fromactsofkindness.Ayashaembracedherbrotherandanswered,“Thankyou,Kamil,butkeep
yourlantern.Gotobedearlytonight.
Wedon’twanttobelateformorningprayerstomorrow.”
Ayashasmiled,determinedtogivethanksforstrength,health,andalltheblessingsinlife.(參考答案)【下水作文】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbledagainstthetable,knockingoverAyasha'sglasslantern.Thebeautifulshinyglassshatteredintocountlesspieces,scatteringacrossthefloor.Ayashagaspedinshock,hereyeswellingupwithtearsasshelookedatthebrokenremnantsofher
cherished
lantern.Theroomfellsilent,theexcitementandjoythathadfilledtheairjustmomentsagonowreplacedbyaheavyatmosphereofdisappointment.
Ayasha'sparentsrushedtocleanupthemess,carefullypickingupthebrokenglassandwipingawaythespilledsoup.Kamilstoodinthecorner,hisfacefilledwithregretandsadness.Heknewhehadcausedagreatdealoftroubleandhadruinedhissister's
precious
lantern.
Unabletocontainheremotionsanylonger,
Ayasharantoherroomandclosedthedoorbehindher.
Shesatonherbed,feelingamixofangerandsadness.Butasshewipedawayhertears,athoughtoccurredtoher.Perhapsthis
accident
wasareminderofwhattrulymatteredduringthisspecialtimeofcelebration.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Itsbrightbluelightstillflashed,illuminatingthehallway.Inthatmoment,Ayasha
realizedthatmaterialpossessionscouldbereplaced,buttheloveandbondbetweenfamilymemberswereirreplaceable.
Withagenuinesmileonherface,Ay
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