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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Throughthediningroomwindow,

theraysofthesettingsunglowedorangeandgold.

Itlookedlikeahugetraditionallantern(燈籠)litintheskyforthewholeworldtosee,asRamadan(齋月),the

Muslim(穆斯林)holymonth,

cametoanend.透過(guò)餐廳的窗戶(hù),落日的光芒閃耀著橙色和金色。它看起來(lái)像一個(gè)巨大的傳統(tǒng)燈籠(燈籠)照亮天空,讓全世界都能看到,就像齋月一樣(齋月),穆斯林(穆斯林)神圣的月份,結(jié)束了。DuringRamadan,Muslimchildren

danceinthestreets,swingingtraditionallanternsofallsizes.Thisyear,Ayasha'sgrandparentsinEgypthadsentalanterntoKamil,Ayasha'syoungerbrother.Kamil's

lantern

was

bright

blue,with

abattery-powered

flashing

light

instead

of

a

candle.

Ever

sinceKamil

hadopened

the

package,he

had

been

joyouslyswinging(

旋轉(zhuǎn))

hisflashinglantern.齋月期間,穆斯林兒童在街上跳舞,揮動(dòng)各種大小的傳統(tǒng)燈籠。今年,Ayasha在埃及的祖父母給Ayasha的弟弟Kamil送了一盞燈籠。卡米爾的燈籠是亮藍(lán)色的,用電池供電的閃光燈代替了蠟燭。自從卡米爾打開(kāi)包裹后,他就高興地?cái)[動(dòng)著(旋轉(zhuǎn))他閃爍的燈籠。“Hislanternis

reallyjustaholidaytoy,"Ayashasaidtoherselfasshewatchedhim,"Mylanternis

special,somethingIwanttokeepforever".Herlantern,madeofbeautifulshinyglass,was

alovingtouchofhome.Hergrandparentshadsentittoherwhenher

familymovedtoAmericaforherdad'snewengineeringjob.Ayashasmiledproudlyasshelit

thecandle

insideher

lantern.“他的燈籠真的只是一個(gè)節(jié)日玩具,”Ayasha看著他對(duì)自己說(shuō),“我的燈籠很特別,我想永遠(yuǎn)保存下去?!彼臒艋\是由美麗閃亮的玻璃制成的,是一種充滿(mǎn)愛(ài)的家的感覺(jué)。當(dāng)她的家人搬到美國(guó)為她父親的新工程工作時(shí),她的祖父母把它寄給了她。Ayasha驕傲地笑著點(diǎn)燃燈籠里的蠟燭。Tomorrowwouldbeadayforcelebration—forwearingnewclothestomorningprayers(禱告)forsharinggiftsandsweettreatsandforshowinglovetofamilyandfriends.

Ayashacouldn'twait.明天將是慶祝的日子——穿著新衣服去做晨禱(禱告)分享禮物和甜食,向家人和朋友表達(dá)愛(ài)意。Ayasha等不及了?!癟imefor

dinner!The

food

smells

delicious!”Dad

announced.“My

favoritecake!”Kamilcriedexcitedly,swinginghislanternincircles.“Becareful,Kamil!”Mom

cried

and

carefullyavoidedtheswinginglanternasshecarriedalargebowlofsouptothetable.ButKamilwastooexcitedtocalmdown.Thebluelightkeptswinginguntilunfortunately,heknockedintoMom.Hislanternfellontothesofaandwasintact(完好無(wú)損的),butthebowlMomwasholdingfell

tothefloor,spilling(灑)thesoupandsendingbrokenpieceseverywhere!“晚飯時(shí)間到了!食物聞起來(lái)很香!”爸爸宣布??谞柵d奮地喊道:“我最喜歡的蛋糕!”他把燈籠轉(zhuǎn)了一圈。“小心點(diǎn),卡米爾!”媽媽一邊哭一邊小心翼翼地避開(kāi)擺動(dòng)的燈籠,一邊端著一大碗湯端到桌子上。但卡米爾太激動(dòng)了,無(wú)法平靜下來(lái)。藍(lán)光一直在閃爍,直到不幸的是,他撞到了媽媽。他的燈籠掉在沙發(fā)上,完好無(wú)損(完好無(wú)損的),但是媽媽拿著的碗掉到了地板上,灑了出來(lái)(灑)湯和發(fā)送碎片到處!注意:1.

續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Tomake

things

worse,Kamil

stumbled(絆倒)against

the

table,knockingoverAyasha’glasslantern.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.故事梗概:

這是穆斯林齋月前一天,弟弟Kamil收到了爺爺奶奶的一份禮物——一個(gè)漂亮的電池藍(lán)燈籠。當(dāng)Kamil拿著燈籠開(kāi)心得轉(zhuǎn)圈炫耀時(shí),姐姐Ayasha雖然有點(diǎn)羨慕,但是看到前兩年?duì)敔斈棠趟徒o自己的玻璃燈籠,感到也很自豪。

很明顯Kamil有點(diǎn)興奮過(guò)頭了。當(dāng)媽媽端著一大碗湯過(guò)來(lái)、并且提醒他不要再轉(zhuǎn)圈、以防止碰到時(shí),Kamil根本聽(tīng)不進(jìn)去。突然,他碰到了媽媽?zhuān)臒艋\掉到沙發(fā)上。而媽媽的湯碗掉到地上碎了,湯撒了一地。Para1:更加糟糕的是,Kamil絆到了桌子,然后碰上Ayasha的玻璃燈籠。Para2:

Ayasha打開(kāi)門(mén),看見(jiàn)Kamil手里提著他最珍愛(ài)的燈籠站在門(mén)口。續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)發(fā)展:第一段1.theconsequenceofKamil’sstumble樂(lè)極生悲Ayasha’sfeelingsandreactions悲痛欲絕Kamil’sfeelingsandreactions后悔不迭(注意銜接)第二段:1.Kamil’sapology賠禮道歉Ayasha’sreactions接納迎接Theme揭示主題【初步構(gòu)思】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbledagainstthetable,

knockingover

Ayasha'sglasslantern.Thebeautifulshinyglass

shattered

intopieces,scatteringalloverthefloor.Ayashafelther

heartsink

asshelookedatthebrokenpiecesofherspeciallantern.Shecouldn'thelpbut

feelupsetandangry

atKamilforbeingsocareless.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Hiseyeswere

filledwithremorse,andhe

heldoutthelanterntoher."I'msosorry,Ayasha.Ididn'tmeantobreakyourlantern,"Kamilsaid,hisvoicefilledwithgenuineregret.【銜接+升華】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbled(絆倒)againstthetable,knockingoverAyasha’sglasslantern.Itsbreakingglasssoundedlikeawarningbell,andthecandleinsideblewoutimmediately.

The

roomwas

very

quiet

for

a

moment.

“Accidents

happen,”

Mom

broke

thesilencewithasighasshewipedupthespills.Inafitofanger,

Ayashastormedintoherbedroom

withherbrokenlantern,

slammingthedoorbehindher.

ThebrightRamadansunsetfadedtodarkness,andherexcitementfadedwithit.

Forher,thecelebrationwasspoiledbeforeitevenstarted.Ayashacriedherselftosleep.

Suddenly,shewaswakenupbyaknockonthedoor.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Withhisheaddrooping,hesaidsoftly,“YoucanhavemylanternsinceIbrokeyours.”Knowing

howmuchhisfirstlanternmeanttohim,Ayashawastouchedbyhisoffer.

Ramadanwasatime

forfamilyandforgiveness,andlanternswereonlysymbols.

Thereallightandwarmthcame

fromactsofkindness.Ayashaembracedherbrotherandanswered,“Thankyou,Kamil,butkeep

yourlantern.Gotobedearlytonight.

Wedon’twanttobelateformorningprayerstomorrow.”

Ayashasmiled,determinedtogivethanksforstrength,health,andalltheblessingsinlife.(參考答案)【下水作文】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbledagainstthetable,knockingoverAyasha'sglasslantern.Thebeautifulshinyglassshatteredintocountlesspieces,scatteringacrossthefloor.Ayashagaspedinshock,hereyeswellingupwithtearsasshelookedatthebrokenremnantsofher

cherished

lantern.Theroomfellsilent,theexcitementandjoythathadfilledtheairjustmomentsagonowreplacedbyaheavyatmosphereofdisappointment.

Ayasha'sparentsrushedtocleanupthemess,carefullypickingupthebrokenglassandwipingawaythespilledsoup.Kamilstoodinthecorner,hisfacefilledwithregretandsadness.Heknewhehadcausedagreatdealoftroubleandhadruinedhissister's

precious

lantern.

Unabletocontainheremotionsanylonger,

Ayasharantoherroomandclosedthedoorbehindher.

Shesatonherbed,feelingamixofangerandsadness.Butasshewipedawayhertears,athoughtoccurredtoher.Perhapsthis

accident

wasareminderofwhattrulymatteredduringthisspecialtimeofcelebration.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Itsbrightbluelightstillflashed,illuminatingthehallway.Inthatmoment,Ayasha

realizedthatmaterialpossessionscouldbereplaced,buttheloveandbondbetweenfamilymemberswereirreplaceable.

Withagenuinesmileonherface,Ay

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