Howtowritea“travelogue”?(游記)Writing

LuoyangNo.26MiddleSchool洛陽(yáng)市第二十六中學(xué)張曉悅Theworldisbeautiful!Beautyisrighthere!StatueofLiberty（自由女神像）ThePyramidsofEgypt埃及金字塔TheAntarcticContinentisapuresnowworld.南極冰雪世界TheGreatWallinChina中國(guó)的萬(wàn)里長(zhǎng)城TheTempleofHeaven（天壇）Haveyoueverbeentoanybeautifulplaces?FreeTalk

◆Wheredidyougo?

◆Whatdidyoudo?

◆Howdidyoufeel?WhereWhatHowHowtokeepthememoryofyourtripforever?Howtowrite

a

travelogue?（如何書(shū)寫(xiě)游記？）Brainstorm（頭腦風(fēng)暴）travelogue◆

Howtowriteatravelogue?traveloguetransportationlocationfoodpeopleplacestovisitfeelingweather123Putthe3paragraphsintotherightorder.It’snosecretthat

theMerlion(魚(yú)尾獅)isthesymbolofSingapore.SoIvisitedtheMerlionParkfirstly.Besideshavingabreathoffreshair,strolling(漫步)throughtheparkwasalsorelaxing.ThenIwalkedtoLauPaSat(老巴剎)whereItrieddifferentkindsofnewfood.OnegreatthingaboutthisplacewasthatIcoulddiscoverthenewflavors(風(fēng)味).Atlast,IwenttoNightSafari(夜間動(dòng)物園)whereIwatchedanimalsinamorenaturalenvironmentthaninanormalzoo.Asananimallover,itwasmymostprecious(寶貴的)experience.IstillremembermyfirsttriptoSingapore.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttherebyplane.AndIreallyhadanunforgettabletrip.Whatanunforgettabletrip!IwishIcangothereagainifIhaveachance.123Putthe3paragraphsintotherightorder.It’snosecretthat

theMerlion(魚(yú)尾獅)isthesymbolofSingapore.SoIvisitedtheMerlionParkfirstly.Besideshavingabreathoffreshair,strolling(漫步)throughtheparkwasalsorelaxing.ThenIwalkedtoLauPaSat(老巴剎)whereItrieddifferentkindsofnewfood.OnegreatthingaboutthisplacewasthatIcoulddiscoverthenewflavors(風(fēng)味).Atlast,IwenttoNightSafari(夜間動(dòng)物園)whereIwatchedanimalsinamorenaturalenvironmentthaninanormalzoo.Asananimallover,itwasmymostprecious(寶貴的)experience.IstillremembermyfirsttriptoSingapore.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttherebyplane.AndIreallyhadanunforgettabletrip.Whatanunforgettabletrip!IwishIcangothereagainifIhaveachance.Whatanunforgettabletrip!IwishIcangothereagainifIhaveachance.213IstillremembermyfirsttriptoSingapore.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttherebyplane.AndIreallyhadanunforgettabletrip.It’snosecretthat

theMerlion(魚(yú)尾獅)isthesymbolofSingapore.SoIvisitedtheMerlionParkfirstly.Besideshavingabreathoffreshair,strolling(漫步)throughtheparkwasalsorelaxing.ThenIwalkedtoLauPaSat(老巴剎)whereItrieddifferentkindsofnewfood.OnegreatthingaboutthisplacewasthatIcoulddiscoverthenewflavors(風(fēng)味).Atlast,IwenttoNightSafari(夜間動(dòng)物園)whereIwatchedanimalsinamorenaturalenvironmentthaninanormalzoo.Asananimallover,itwasmymostpreciousexperience.ATriptoSingaporeIstillremembermyfirsttriptoSingapore.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttherebyplane.AndIreallyhadanunforgettabletrip.1Trytofindthekeywords.WhatWhereWhenWhoHowFeelingISingaporeLastsummervacation

It’snosecretthat

theMerlion(魚(yú)尾獅)isthesymbolof

Singapore.SoIvisitedtheMerlionParkfirstly.Besideshavingabreathoffreshair,strolling(漫步)

throughtheparkwasalsorelaxing.ThenIwalkedtoLauPaSat(老巴剎)whereItrieddifferentkindsofnewfood.OnegreatthingaboutthisplacewasthatIcoulddiscoverthenewflavors(風(fēng)味).Atlast,IwenttoNightSafari(夜間動(dòng)物園)

whereIwatchedanimalsinamorenaturalenvironmentthaninanormalzoo.Asananimallover,itwasmymostpreciousexperience.2Trytofindthekeywords.WhatHowFeelingMerlionParkrelaxing.LauPaSatfood.greatNightSafariprecious

Whatanunforgettabletrip!IwishIcangothereagainifIhaveachance.3Trytofindthekeywords.FeelingunforgettableMindMapWhoWhereWhenParagraph1Paragraph2What

How

Paragraph3FeelingHowtowriteapassagemorecoherently?

(連貫地)Whatanunforgettabletrip!IwishIcangothereagainifIhaveachance.213Howtowriteapassagemorecoherently(連貫地)?IstillremembermyfirsttriptoSingapore.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttherebyplane.AndIreallyhadanunforgettabletrip.It’snosecretthat

theMerlion(魚(yú)尾獅)isthesymbolofSingapore.SoIvisitedtheMerlionParkfirstly.Besideshavingabreathoffreshair,strolling(漫步)throughtheparkwasalsorelaxing.ThenIwalkedtoLauPaSat(老巴剎)whereItrieddifferentkindsofnewfood.OnegreatthingaboutthisplacewasthatIdiscoverthenewflavors(風(fēng)味).Atlast,IwenttoNightSafari(夜間動(dòng)物園)whereIwatchedanimalsinamorenaturalenvironmentthaninanormalzoo.Asananimallover,itwasmymostpreciousexperience.firstly.ThenAtlast

Whatanunforgettabletrip!IwishIcangothereagainifIhaveachance.213IstillremembermyfirsttriptoSingapore.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttherebyplane.AndIreallyhadanunforgettabletrip.It’snosecretthat

theMerlion(魚(yú)尾獅)isthesymbolofSingapore.SoIvisitedtheMerlionParkfirstly.Besideshavingabreathoffreshair,strolling(漫步)throughtheparkwasalsorelaxing.ThenIwalkedtoLauPaSat(老巴剎)whereItrieddifferentkindsofnewfood.OnegreatthingaboutthisplacewasthatIcoulddiscoverthenewflavors(風(fēng)味).Atlast,IwenttoNightSafari(夜間動(dòng)物園)whereIwatchedanimalsinamorenaturalenvironmentthaninanormalzoo.Asananimallover,itwasmymostpreciousexperience.Trytopolish(美化)yourpassage.

②.It’snosecretthattheMerlion(魚(yú)尾獅)isthesymbolofSingapore.SoIvisitedtheMerlionPark

firstly.③.

Besideshavingabreathoffreshair,strolling(漫步)

throughtheparkwasalsorelaxing.ThenIwalkedtoLauPaSat(老巴剎)whereItrieddifferentkindsofnewfood.OnegreatthingaboutthisplacewasthatIcoulddiscoverthenewflavors(風(fēng)味).Atlast,IwenttoNightSafari(夜間動(dòng)物園)whereIwatchedanimalsinamorenaturalenvironmentthaninanormalzoo.Asananimallover,itwasmymostpreciousexperience.Trytopolish(美化)

yourpassage.①.TheMerlion

isthesymbolofSingapore.④.

Itwasrelaxingtohaveabreathoffreshair.Itwasalsorelaxingtostrollthroughthepark.③.WritingwritingThingsYouShouldWriteDown.★★Trytouseconnectives(連接詞).★Trytopolish(美化)

yourpassage.

★Shareyourownfeelings.

★Trytousethepasttense.

PeerChecklist(同伴互評(píng)表)◆

Afterreadingmyclassmate’stravelogue,Iknow★wherehe/shewent(place)YES/NO★connectives（連接詞）YES/NO★good/usefulexpression（表達(dá)）YES/NO★his/herownfeelingsYES/NO★whenhe/shetraveled(time)YES/NO★whowentwithhim/her(people)YES/NO★whathe/shedid(activity)YES/NO★howhe/shefelt(feeling)YES/NO◆

Inmyclassmate’stravelogue,IcanfindTheBestTraveloguePeerCheck(同伴互評(píng))

★place

★time★people★activity★feeling★connect