ALessonofWriting1精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第一頁，共二十六頁。Howtowriteacomposition.2精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第二頁，共二十六頁。Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.

Keypoints:1.Topic（主題）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(時(shí)態(tài)):pasttense&presenttense

一般過去時(shí)&一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)First,considerthetaskcarefully.3精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第三頁，共二十六頁。LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecarsSecond,brainstorm(頭腦風(fēng)暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools農(nóng)耕工具reasongovernmentefforts4精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第四頁，共二十六頁。liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducation5精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第五頁，共二十六頁。PPT內(nèi)容概述ALessonofWriting。精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯。3.Where:LiMing’shometown。First,considerthetaskcarefully.。Then,writethecomposition.。Onepossibleversion:。馬路寬廣，許多人有小車，交通方便。馬路寬廣，許多人有小車，交通方便。4、我的感受是希望記住過去，展望未來是很重要的。4、我的感受是希望記住過去，展望未來是很重要的。可能會(huì)用到的詞匯：poorandbackward貧窮落后的。takeplace發(fā)生。First,consideritcarefully.。I/myself。a.Changesin。c.Changesin。is/are。Inthepast。25第六頁，共二十六頁。LivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchangesBrainstormforthebody(正文)a.

Changesin

livingconditions.b.

Changesin

workingtools.C.

Changesin

education.7精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第七頁，共二十六頁。OutlineTitle題目:

ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading開頭：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.

Changesin

livingconditionsb.

Changesin

workingtoolsC.

Changesin

educationConclusion結(jié)尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Next,drawupanoutline.提綱8精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第八頁，共二十六頁。配色花哨文字多套用模板套用模板邏輯不清內(nèi)容空洞太土太雜太亂太繁“”精品PPT·實(shí)用可編輯第九頁，共二十六頁。Then,writethecomposition.10精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十頁，共二十六頁。Finally,checkoverthecomposition.11精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十一頁，共二十六頁。ChangesinLiMing’sHometown

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.

Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.

Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading開頭body正文conclusion結(jié)尾12精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十二頁，共二十六頁。AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.13精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十三頁，共二十六頁。以GreatchangesinmyHometown

為題，按下列提示要求寫一篇80詞左右短文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化。1、過去生活貧困，房屋破舊陰暗；道路窄交通不便。2、現(xiàn)在住房寬敞、明亮；現(xiàn)代學(xué)校，孩子可接受良好的教育；馬路寬廣，許多人有小車，交通方便；人們生活大為改善。3、未來會(huì)更加富饒和美麗4、我的感受是希望記住過去，展望未來是很重要的。

可能會(huì)用到的詞匯：poorandbackward貧窮落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；Thanksto多虧；thecountryandthegovernment國(guó)家和政府；takeplace發(fā)生；education教育；modern現(xiàn)代；dreamabout憧憬

14精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十四頁，共二十六頁。Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense時(shí)態(tài):First,consideritcarefully.greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense

……15精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十五頁，共二十六頁。LivingconditiontransportationchangeshouseBrainstorming(頭腦風(fēng)暴)educationroadsbuilding16精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十六頁，共二十六頁。Example:Outline提綱Title題目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading開頭：Body正文:a.Changesin

…b.Changesin

…c.Changesin

…Conclusion結(jié)尾:Next,drawupanoutline.LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportation17精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十七頁，共二十六頁。nowUsedtobe…Once曾經(jīng)pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.

2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:Brainstormforthetense(時(shí)態(tài))18精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十八頁，共二十六頁。LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancarsBrainstormforthebody(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.19精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第十九頁，共二十六頁。精品PPT·收集整理第二十頁，共二十六頁。schoolhouseBrainstormforthebody(正文)21精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第二十一頁，共二十六頁。Then,writethecomposition.22精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第二十二頁，共二十六頁。以GreatchangesinmyHometown

為題，按下列提示要求寫一篇80詞左右短文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化。1、過去生活貧困，房屋破舊陰暗；道路窄交通不便。2、現(xiàn)在住房寬敞、明亮；現(xiàn)代學(xué)校，孩子可接受良好的教育；馬路寬廣，許多人有小車，交通方便；人們生活大為改善。3、未來會(huì)更加富饒和美麗4、我的感受是希望記住過去，展望未來是很重要的。

可能會(huì)用到的詞匯：poorandbackward貧窮落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；thanksto多虧；thecountryandthegovernment國(guó)家和政府；takeplace發(fā)生；education教育；modern現(xiàn)代；dreamabout憧憬

23精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第二十三頁，共二十六頁。TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!24精品PPT|實(shí)用可編輯第二十四頁，共二十六頁。ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,