《2024年高考英語(yǔ)新課標(biāo)卷真題深度解析與考后提升》專題09應(yīng)用文寫作（新課標(biāo)I卷）解析版(答案解析+專家評(píng)價(jià)+三年真題+滿分答案+滿分策略+話題變式+題型變式)目錄一、原題呈現(xiàn)P1二、答案解析P2三、專家評(píng)價(jià)P2四、寫作素材P3五、滿分范文P7六、三年真題P9(一)2023年閱讀理解A篇P9(二)2022年閱讀理解A篇P11(三)2021年閱讀理解A篇P12七、滿分策略P14八、話題變式P15九、題型變式P21一原題呈現(xiàn)一原題呈現(xiàn)應(yīng)用文寫作關(guān)鍵詞：告知信，人與社會(huì)，公園上美術(shù)課，學(xué)生活動(dòng)，五育并舉假定你是李華，你們班上周五在公園上了一節(jié)美術(shù)課，請(qǐng)給英國(guó)好友Chris寫一封郵件分享你的經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的作品內(nèi)容；2.你的感想。注意: 1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右： 2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheartclassIhadintheparklastFriday.二答案解析二答案解析DearChrisI’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Itwassuchanovelandexcitingexperiencetobeabletocreateartsurroundedbynature.（整體評(píng)價(jià)活動(dòng)效果；高級(jí)詞匯+非謂語(yǔ)）Icreatedaworkwiththethemeof"Nature'sHarmony",whosemainelementsaretrees,flowers,andasmallpond.Istartedbysketchingtheoutlinesofthemainelements,withdifferentcolorstocreateagentleandharmoniousatmosphere.Takingtheartclassintheparkwasreallyanovelty.Itmademefeelsoclosetonatureandappreciateitsbeautyinawholenewway.（定語(yǔ)從句+非謂語(yǔ)+高級(jí)詞匯）Whatdoyouthinkabouthavingartclassesinthepark,Chris?Haveyoueverhadanartclassoutdoorslikethisbefore,Chris?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.（特殊疑問(wèn)句式+客套語(yǔ)）YoursLiHua三專家評(píng)價(jià)三專家評(píng)價(jià)聚焦立德樹(shù)人，強(qiáng)化高考育人功能高考英語(yǔ)命題貫徹落實(shí)高考內(nèi)容改革要求，通過(guò)選取有關(guān)體育、美育和勞動(dòng)教育的語(yǔ)篇，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生堅(jiān)持五育并舉，實(shí)現(xiàn)身心健康成長(zhǎng)和德智體美勞全面發(fā)展。在體育方面，新課標(biāo)Ⅱ卷閱讀A篇介紹了秋季徒步健身活動(dòng)，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生走近大自然，開(kāi)展體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，文中提及多項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng)，于潛移默化之中強(qiáng)調(diào)了運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的重要性。在美育方面，全國(guó)甲卷閱讀A篇介紹了校園藝術(shù)節(jié)上豐富多彩的活動(dòng)，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生走進(jìn)畫廊和博物館，培養(yǎng)審美情趣，提高藝術(shù)品味。新課標(biāo)I卷/II卷應(yīng)用文寫作告知英國(guó)筆友在公園上了一節(jié)美術(shù)課的作品和感受。在勞動(dòng)教育方面，新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷閱讀A篇介紹了一個(gè)地區(qū)生物棲息地修復(fù)工作隊(duì)的工作內(nèi)容和招募志愿者的要求，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)、參與勞動(dòng)、享受勞動(dòng)。四寫作素材四寫作素材一、應(yīng)用文審題分析1．體裁：郵件。2．主題：給好朋友Chris介紹上周五在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷。3．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1）

除了開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)，需要具體描述完成的作品是什么樣子的，包括使用的色彩、呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容等。2）詳細(xì)闡述自己對(duì)于這次在公園上美術(shù)課的感想，比如對(duì)戶外創(chuàng)作的感受、對(duì)藝術(shù)的新理解等。4．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)：1）要用較為流暢自然的英語(yǔ)來(lái)表述。2）

注意時(shí)態(tài)，描述上周五的事情一般用過(guò)去時(shí)。3）整體來(lái)說(shuō)，這是一個(gè)比較常規(guī)的書信類寫作任務(wù)，重點(diǎn)在于如何清晰地描述作品和生動(dòng)地表達(dá)自己的感想，讓英國(guó)朋友

Chris能較好地感受到這次特別的美術(shù)課經(jīng)歷。二、要寫好這個(gè)應(yīng)用文，學(xué)生需具備的能力：1.語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力：學(xué)生需要使用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行有效溝通，包括詞匯的準(zhǔn)確使用、語(yǔ)法的正確性以及句子結(jié)構(gòu)的流暢性。2.寫作組織能力：包括組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)的能力，如何合理地安排引言、正文和結(jié)尾，以及如何使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使文章連貫。3.描述和敘述能力：學(xué)生需要能夠清晰地描述自己的作品和經(jīng)歷，同時(shí)能夠敘述個(gè)人的感受和思考。4.創(chuàng)造性思維：在介紹自己的作品和感想時(shí)，學(xué)生需要展示自己的創(chuàng)造性思維，使文章具有個(gè)性和吸引力。5.跨文化交流能力：由于是寫給外國(guó)朋友，學(xué)生需要考慮到文化差異，使用適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言和表達(dá)方式，以確保信息能夠被正確理解和接受。6.情感表達(dá)能力：在表達(dá)個(gè)人感想時(shí)，學(xué)生需要能夠真實(shí)、自然地傳達(dá)自己的情感和態(tài)度。三、寫作構(gòu)思開(kāi)頭（第一段）：1.在開(kāi)頭部分，除了已給出的語(yǔ)句表明寫信目的是分享上周五公園美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷。2.還需要寫一句過(guò)渡語(yǔ)銜接。主體（第二段）：1、先描述自己完成的作品，包括作品的主題、主要元素、表現(xiàn)形式等，自己是如何創(chuàng)作的。2、接著表達(dá)自己的感想，比如在公園上課的新奇感受，對(duì)自然之美的感悟，從這次經(jīng)歷中獲得的啟發(fā)等。結(jié)尾（第三段）：可以詢問(wèn)Chris對(duì)這種在公園上美術(shù)課的看法，或者詢問(wèn)Chris有沒(méi)有類似在戶外上美術(shù)課的情況，使郵件內(nèi)容更加豐富。四、相關(guān)的詞匯和表達(dá)素材1.色彩：vivid鮮艷的rich濃郁的dullish有點(diǎn)暗淡的pastel柔和的monochromatic單色的2.線條與形狀：curvy彎曲的angular有棱角的rounded圓形的zigzag之字形的3.整體效果：fantastic極好的spectacular壯觀的charming迷人的delightful令人愉快的captivating迷人的4.風(fēng)格：impressionistic印象派的abstract抽象的minimalist極簡(jiǎn)主義的5.細(xì)節(jié)與質(zhì)感：elaborate精心制作的textured有質(zhì)感的rough粗糙的smoothassilk如絲般光滑6.氛圍與情感：solemn莊重的cheerful愉快的mysterious神秘的romantic浪漫的melancholic憂郁的五、首段過(guò)渡銜接寫作素材1.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Itwasanextraordinaryexperiencethatleftadeepimpressiononme.我寫信是想和你分享上周五在花園里的美術(shù)課。那是一次非凡的經(jīng)歷，給我留下了深刻的印象。2.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Thewholeclasswasfilledwithcreativityandjoy.我寫信是想和你分享上周五在花園里的美術(shù)課。整個(gè)課堂都充滿了創(chuàng)造力和喜悅。3.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Whathappenedtheretrulybroadenedmyhorizons.我寫信是想和你分享上周五在花園里的美術(shù)課。在那里發(fā)生的事情真的拓寬了我的視野。4.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Itmademerealizethebeautyandmagicofartinanewway.我寫信是想和你分享上周五在花園里的美術(shù)課。它讓我以一種新的方式認(rèn)識(shí)到藝術(shù)的美麗和魔力。5.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Thatdayinthegardenwastrulyunforgettable.我寫信是想和你分享上周五在花園里的美術(shù)課。在花園里的那一天真的令人難忘。6.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Thecombinationofartandnaturewassimplyperfect.我寫信是想和你分享上周五在花園里的美術(shù)課。藝術(shù)與自然的結(jié)合簡(jiǎn)直太完美了。7.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday.Itwasadayfilledwithinspirationanddiscovery.我寫信是想和你分享上周五在花園里的美術(shù)課。那是充滿靈感和發(fā)現(xiàn)的一天。8.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheuniqueexperienceoftheArtclasswehadintheparklastFriday.Itwasanextraordinarydaywhereweblendedlearningwiththeserenityofnature.我寫信是為了和你們分享上周五我們?cè)诠珗@上的藝術(shù)課的獨(dú)特經(jīng)歷。這是一個(gè)非凡的一天，我們把學(xué)習(xí)與大自然的寧?kù)o結(jié)合在一起。9.I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheArtclassinthegardenlastFriday,whereweexploredthehistoricalbeautyandartisticheritageofourcity'spark.我寫信是為了和你們分享上周五我們的藝術(shù)課的豐富經(jīng)歷，在那里我們探索了我們城市公園的歷史之美和藝術(shù)遺產(chǎn)。六、介紹公園上美術(shù)課活動(dòng)寫作素材1.Icreatedaworkwiththethemeof"Nature'sHarmony".我創(chuàng)作了一幅主題為“自然的和諧”的作品。2.Themainelementsaretrees,flowers,andasmallpond.主要元素是樹(shù)木、花朵和一個(gè)小池塘。3.Theformofexpressionisawatercolorpainting.表現(xiàn)形式是一幅水彩畫。4.Istartedbysketchingtheoutlinesofthemainelements.我首先通過(guò)勾勒主要元素的輪廓開(kāi)始。5.ThenIuseddifferentcolorstofillinandcreateagentleandharmoniousatmosphere.然后我使用不同的顏色去填充并營(yíng)造出一種輕柔和諧的氛圍。6.Ialsoaddedsomedetailslikebirdsandbutterfliestomakethepicturemorevivid.我還添加了一些像鳥兒和蝴蝶這樣的細(xì)節(jié)以使畫面更加生動(dòng)。7.Imadeaworktitled"SunlitPark".我創(chuàng)作了一幅名為“陽(yáng)光照耀的公園”的作品。8.Themainelementsarethebrightsun,thegreengrass,andpeopleenjoyingtheleisuretime.主要元素是明亮的太陽(yáng)、綠草以及享受休閑時(shí)光的人們。9.Ibeganbyoutliningthebasicshapesoftheelementswithlightstrokes.我一開(kāi)始用輕柔的筆觸勾勒出元素的基本形狀。10.ThenIgraduallyaddedcolorsandshadestobringoutthevividnessofthescene.然后我逐漸添加顏色和色調(diào)以展現(xiàn)出場(chǎng)景的生動(dòng)性。七、公園上美術(shù)課活動(dòng)感受寫作素材1.It'ssoamazingtohaveclassesinthepark.Itreallybringsawholenewfeeling.在公園上課真是太令人驚奇了。它真的帶來(lái)了一種全新的感受。2.Thebeautyofnatureistrulybreathtakingandmakesmefeelsopeaceful.自然之美真的令人驚嘆，讓我感到如此平靜。3.Thisexperiencehasinspiredmetocherishandexploremoreofthewondersofnature.這次經(jīng)歷啟發(fā)我要珍惜并探索更多自然的奇妙之處。4.Takingclassesintheparkmakesmefeelclosertonatureandenrichesmylearningexperience.在公園上課讓我感覺(jué)更貼近自然，豐富了我的學(xué)習(xí)體驗(yàn)。5.Thebeautyofnatureisanendlesssourceofinspirationandmakesmeappreciatelifemore.自然之美是無(wú)盡的靈感源泉，讓我更加珍惜生活。6.Thisparkclassexperiencehastaughtmetolookattheworldfromadifferentperspective.這次公園上課的經(jīng)歷教會(huì)我從不同的角度看世界。7.Beingsurroundedbynatureduringclasshasmademerealizehowimportantitistoprotectourenvironment.在上課期間被自然環(huán)繞讓我意識(shí)到保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境是多么重要。8.Thepeaceandtranquilityofnatureintheparkhavegivenmeanewfoundappreciationforsimplicity.公園里自然的寧?kù)o與安寧讓我對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單有了新的認(rèn)識(shí)。9.Takingtheartclassintheparkwasreallyanovelty.在公園上美術(shù)課真的是一種新奇體驗(yàn)。10.Itmademefeelsoclosetonatureandappreciateitsbeautyinawholenewway.它讓我感覺(jué)如此貼近自然，并以全新的方式欣賞它的美。11.Iwasdeeplyinspiredbythisexperienceandrealizedtheimportanceofconnectingwithnature.我從這次經(jīng)歷中深受啟發(fā)，意識(shí)到與自然相連接的重要性。12.Thisclassintheparkbroadenedmyhorizonsandtaughtmetolookatthingsfromdifferentperspectives.這次在公園的課拓寬了我的視野，教會(huì)我從不同角度看待事物。八、公園上美術(shù)課活動(dòng)結(jié)尾寫作素材1.Whatdoyouthinkabouthavingartclassesinthepark,Chris?克里斯，你覺(jué)得在公園上美術(shù)課怎么樣？2.Haveyoueverhadanartclassoutdoorslikethisbefore,Chris?克里斯，你以前有過(guò)像這樣在戶外上美術(shù)課的情況嗎？3.Didyouenjoythiskindofartclassinthepark,Chris?克里斯，你喜歡這種在公園上的美術(shù)課嗎？4.Haveyouexperiencedsomethingsimilartothisartclassinthepark,Chris?克里斯，你經(jīng)歷過(guò)類似在公園上美術(shù)課這樣的事情嗎？5.What'syouropinionontakingartclassesinsuchanopenenvironmentlikethepark,Chris?克里斯，對(duì)于在像公園這樣開(kāi)闊的環(huán)境中上美術(shù)課，你有什么看法呢？6.Wasitinterestingforyoutohaveanartclassinthepark,Chris?克里斯，在公園上美術(shù)課對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)有趣嗎？7.Howdidyoufeelwhenyouhadanartclassinthepark,Chris?克里斯，當(dāng)你在公園上美術(shù)課的時(shí)候你感覺(jué)如何？五滿分范文五滿分范文滿分范文1DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?Hearingthatyouareanenthusiastinpainting,Icouldhardlywaittosharemydelightfulexperiencefromourpaintingclass.LastFridaywitnessedourventuringintothepark,auniquesettingthatinspiredmetocreateapaintingoftheserenelakesurroundedbylushgreentrees.Thetranquilityofnaturewastrulycaptivating.Notonlywaspaintingoutdoorsarefreshingchange,butitalsoallowedmetoseecolorsandshapesinanewlight.Moreover,itwasasensoryfeastthatheightenedmyperceptionandappreciationforthebeautyofournaturalworldevenmore.Needlesstosay,itwasadayfilledwithcreativityandasenseofpeace.Lookingforwardtohearingaboutyouradventures!Yours,LiHua滿分范文2DearChris,Ihopethismessagefindsyouwell.I'mexcitedtosharewithyoumylatestartworkcreatedduringourartclassintheparkonFriday!Itwassuchasereneenvironment,withthegentlebreezeandthesoftrustleofleaves,whichtrulyinspiredme.Forthispiece,Ichoseacrylicstodepictavibrantlandscape.Drawntotheplayoflightandshadowamidstthetrees,Itriedtocapturetheinterplayofcolorsasthesunbegantoset.Theresultisamixofwarmoranges,deepreds,andcoolblues,whichIthinkconveysthepeacefulyetvibrantnatureofthatmoment.I'dlovetohearyourthoughtsonmycreation.Maybenexttime,wecouldtakeourartsuppliesandpainttogetherinthepark!Lookingforwardtoournextadventure!YoursLiHua滿分范文3DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing!ThisFridayafternoonwitnessedsuchamarvelousartclassheldinthecityparkthatIcan’twaittosharewithyou.Asthesungentlycaressedthegrassyexpanse,ourteachersetupanarrayofcanvases,paints,andbrushesamidstthesereneenvironment.Withgreatenthusiasm,Ibegancraftingmymasterpiece,avibrantlandscapethatcapturedtheessenceofnature'sbeauty.Theverdanttrees,theazuresky,andthedelicateflowerscamealiveundermybrushstrokes.Imustadmit,itwasachallengingtasktobalancethecolorsandthelighting,buttheresultwastrulyrewarding.Mypiecereceivedcommendationsfrombothmyinstructorandpeers,fillingmewithprideandmotivationtocontinueimprovingmyartisticskills.Ieagerlyawaityourfeedbackandhopeyouwillenjoythissmallglimpseintomyworldofcreativity.YoursLiHua滿分范文4DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?Hearingthatyouareanenthusiastinpainting,Icouldhardlywaittosharemydelightfulexperiencefromourpaintingclass.LastFridaywitnessedourventuringintothepark,auniquesettingthatinspiredmetocreateapaintingoftheserenelakesurroundedbylushgreentrees.Thetranquilityofnaturewastrulycaptivating.Notonlywaspaintingoutdoorsarefreshingchange,butitalsoallowedmetoseecolorsandshapesinanewlight.Moreover,itwasasensoryfeastthatheightenedmyperceptionandappreciationforthebeautyofournaturalworldevenmore.Needlesstosay,itwasadayfilledwithcreativityandasenseofpeace.Lookingforwardtohearingaboutyouradventures!Yours,LiHua滿分范文5DearChris,LastFriday,wehadafantasticartclassinthepark.I'mwritingtosharetheexcitingexperiencewithyou.Thenaturalbeautyintheparkinspiredmetopursuemyartdreams.Ichosetopainttheharmoniousenvironmentofthepark.Inmypainting,thebirdsweresingingsweetlyinthetreesandbutterfliesweredancinggracefullyinthefields.Weliveinharmonywithnature.Whatameaningfulactivityitistopaintinthepark!HowIwishyoucouldhavebeenheretoexperienceitwithme！Yours,LiHua滿分范文6DearChris,I'mwriting

tosharewithyouanartclass

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Friday.Insteadofourusualclassroomsetting,ourteachertookustothelocalpark,whereweweresurroundedbynatureandvibrantautumncolors.Formyartwork,Idecidedtocapturethesceneofasmallbridgeoverthepark'spond.ThecolorfulleavesreflectingonthewatercreateavisuallystunningeffectthatItriedtoreproducewithwatercolor.Itwaschallengingbutincrediblyrewardingtopaintdirectlyfromnature.

Thisoutdoorclassnotonlyenhancedmyartisticskillsbutalsodeepenedmyappreciationfortheenvironment.It'srefreshingtogetoutofthetraditionalclassroomandgetintouchwithnature,whichtrulysparkedmycreativity.Yourssincerely,LiHua滿分范文7DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclasswehadinaparklastFriday.Ourteacherdecidedtohaveoursessionoutdoors,whichwasarefreshingchange.Wesetupourmaterialsundertheopensky,eachofuschoosingadifferentpartoftheparktodraw.Iselectedalargeoaktreebyaquietpond.Itsthickbranchesandthegentleripplesonthewatermadealovelyscene.Itriedtocapturethelightandshadows,whichmadethetreelookevenmoreimpressive.

Thisoutdoorclasswasawonderfulexperience.Beinginnaturenotonlyimprovedmydrawingskillsbutalsomademefeelcalmandinspired.Itwasgreattoseehowadifferentenvironmentcaninfluenceourcreativity.Ican’twaittoshowyouthepaintingImade!Yourssincerely,LiHua六三年真題六三年真題【2023年新高考I卷應(yīng)用文寫作】標(biāo)簽：建議信；給外教寫郵件指出分組問(wèn)題并提出建議假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括；1.說(shuō)明問(wèn)題；2.提出建議注意: 1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右： 2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan, I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生給外教寫一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建議：suggestion→advice選擇：choose→select2句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（運(yùn)用了省略句和who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）【2022年新高考I卷應(yīng)用文寫作】標(biāo)簽：邀請(qǐng)信；邀請(qǐng)外教Caroline到校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”做一次訪談假定你是校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是校廣播站“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建立：establish→setup了不起的：amazing→fabulous幫助：aid→assistance許多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略)【2021年新高考I卷應(yīng)用文寫作】標(biāo)簽：短文投稿；校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年投稿你校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2.喜愛(ài)的欄目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。YouthYouthandMe第一節(jié)這是一篇針對(duì)報(bào)紙創(chuàng)刊10周年投稿的文章。通過(guò)審題，我們可以確定，本文主要以第一人稱進(jìn)行展開(kāi)和敘述。文章可以用三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段簡(jiǎn)明表示對(duì)報(bào)刊創(chuàng)辦10周年的祝賀。第二段是文章的主體，主要闡述閱讀報(bào)紙的經(jīng)歷和喜愛(ài)的欄目。第三段表達(dá)對(duì)報(bào)紙的期望和祝福。Possibleversion1:DearEditor-in-Chief，Congratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.Obsessedwithit,Ireadeachissuefromcovertocover.Itboastsavarietyofcolumns,ofwhichChinesecultureismyfavorite.Theseriesofcontentsnotonlyintroducesabundantculturalknowledgebutalsovaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantcultureandstrengthensourculturalconfidence.AsafanofYouth.IrecommendthatitwillbebetterifitcarriessomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeignteensandIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHuaPossibleversion1:Deareditor,MynameisLiHua,asenior3student.

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gainmorepopularity.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向?qū)W校英文報(bào)Youth表達(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建立：found→establish沮喪的：depressed→upset此外：besides→what’smore得到：receive→obtain2.句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略和which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)七滿分策略七滿分策略英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)高分秘訣根據(jù)最新《考綱》、書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)、及高考后的閱卷情況，可以看出書面表達(dá)高分卷應(yīng)具備以下特點(diǎn)：一、外在美：第一印象很重要！書寫清楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，卷面整潔。二、結(jié)構(gòu)美：有合理的段落層次，多為3段式，條理清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。三、詞匯美：生動(dòng)具體詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。四、句式美：運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。五、銜接美：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、條理清晰。書面表達(dá)增加細(xì)節(jié)五大技巧一、增加交際功能性語(yǔ)言1.收信人和寫信人是朋友關(guān)系在書信的開(kāi)頭可以添加問(wèn)候語(yǔ)Howareyoudoingthesedays?或根據(jù)題目增加合適的寒暄語(yǔ)。2.收信人是長(zhǎng)輩或地位高一點(diǎn)的人，或陌生人。在信件開(kāi)頭可以補(bǔ)充自我介紹，以表尊重。結(jié)合題目中設(shè)置的情景，增加個(gè)人身份介紹，合情合理，符合交際需要。3.回應(yīng)來(lái)信所提問(wèn)題，自然引出寫作目的有些書面表達(dá)題，要求考生根據(jù)題目要求，給對(duì)方回信。先提及對(duì)方的來(lái)信內(nèi)容，說(shuō)明回信背景。4.根據(jù)信件寫作目的，補(bǔ)充適當(dāng)?shù)拈_(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不同類型的信件一般會(huì)有特定的格式，我們要用心去整理和歸納。如建議信：寫作目的——Iamwritingtogiveyousomepractical/constructivesuggestions.信件結(jié)尾——Idohopethatyou’llfindthesesuggestionsuseful/beneficial/helpful.二、擴(kuò)充寫作要點(diǎn)的具體內(nèi)容我們要根據(jù)提示要求，通過(guò)列舉等添加與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的具體內(nèi)容。如:三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充實(shí)文章在要點(diǎn)句基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)增加合乎邏輯的附加成分，如定語(yǔ)，狀語(yǔ)（如原因，目的，結(jié)果，讓步，方式）等，使語(yǔ)言邏輯清晰，便于理解。1.巧用修飾語(yǔ)恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眯稳菰~或定語(yǔ)從句使句子更加形象生動(dòng)。2.明確交待原因交待原因是為了使句意更完整，避免給讀者留下疑問(wèn)。交待原因通?？梢越柚樵~短語(yǔ)或原因狀語(yǔ)從句，如owingto,dueto,becauseof,thanksto,asaresultof,because,as,since,nowthat等詞語(yǔ)引導(dǎo)。3.清晰闡明目的在句子中使用闡明目的的詞語(yǔ)，如:soas(not)to,inorderto,sothat,inorderthat,forthefearthat,forthepurposeof等，使句子條理清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)。4.恰當(dāng)補(bǔ)充條件，增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果可以通過(guò)if,aslongas,onlyif,unless,providedthat,supposingthat等引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)。如：5.合理延伸結(jié)果可用sothat,so…that,such…that或therefore,hence等來(lái)增加結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)句。6.添加與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的讓步狀語(yǔ)等內(nèi)容可通過(guò)although,though,while,as,eventhough,evenif,whoever,whatever,whenever,wherever,however,nomatter+疑問(wèn)詞等添加與寫作內(nèi)容相關(guān)的信息。四、添加過(guò)渡詞，突出篇章連貫性根據(jù)行文或段落需要，在句子與句子或段落與段落之間適當(dāng)增加過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)或過(guò)渡句，以使文章渾然一體，五、補(bǔ)充個(gè)人感受和評(píng)價(jià)作者如果能在行文中流露真實(shí)情感，則可以有效縮短與讀者之間的距離，使讀者產(chǎn)生共鳴。八話題變式-名校好題再練八話題變式-名校好題再練1．（23-24高三下·河北邢臺(tái)·階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你校即將舉行“用英語(yǔ)講述中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化”活動(dòng)。你的英國(guó)朋友Jack對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化感興趣，想要了解即將到來(lái)的端午節(jié)。請(qǐng)你寫信向他介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.端午節(jié)的時(shí)間及起源；2.端午節(jié)的習(xí)俗。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,KnowingthatyouareinterestedintheDragonBoatFestival,I'dliketointroduceittoyou.TheDragonBoatFestival,oneofthemosttraditionalfestivalsinChina,fallsonthe5thdayofthe5thlunarmonthinhonorofagreatpoetnamedQuYuan,whodevotedhislifetohismotherland.Onthatday,weofteneatZongzi,aspecialkindofrice-dumplings.Besides,excitingdragon-boatracesareusuallyheld,throughwhichwefollowthetraceofourancestorstospreadtraditionalChineseculture.AstheDragonBoatFestivalisapproaching,whynotjoinustocelebrateit?Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的告知信。要求考生給英國(guó)朋友Jack寫信，向其介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累對(duì)……感興趣：areinterestedin→showinterestin為了紀(jì)念：inhonorof→inmemoryof獻(xiàn)身于：devote…to…→dedicateto此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Onthatday,weofteneatZongzi,aspecialkindofrice-dumplings.拓展句：Onthatday,weofteneatZongzi,whichisaspecialkindofrice-dumplings.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】TheDragonBoatFestival,oneofthemosttraditionalfestivalsinChina,fallsonthe5thdayofthe5thlunarmonthinhonorofagreatpoetnamedQuYuan,whodevotedhislifetohismotherland.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Besides,excitingdragon-boatracesareusuallyheld,throughwhichwefollowthetraceofourancestorstospreadtraditionalChineseculture.（運(yùn)用了介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）2．（2024·重慶·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，重慶某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生。在寒假期間，你作為交換生（exchangestudent）將前往美國(guó)進(jìn)行為期三周的交流活動(dòng)，你被安排在Peter家寄宿。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給Peter寫一封email。要點(diǎn)如下：1.自我情況介紹；2.告之自己的生活習(xí)慣；3.詢問(wèn)注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Your,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,MynameisLiHua,asenior3studentfromChongqing,China.I’msoluckytobechosenasanexchangestudenttopayathree-weekvisittotheUSandwillbehostedinyourhome.Firstly,I’dliketosaythankyouforyourreceptionduringmystayintheUS.Iwillbeaniceguest.Idon’tsmokebutIdon’tmindifanybodysmokes.Besides,Ienjoyvariousfoods,includingpork,beefandmuttonandI’mnotparticularaboutfood.What’smore,Ilikepets,soit’sOKformeifyourfamilykeepssomepets.Ifyouhaveanyrequestsorsuggestionsforme,don’thesitatetotellmesothatIcangetwellpreparedbeforeIgoandpayattentiontomybehaviorswheninyourhome.IbelieveIwillhaveagoodtimeandlearnalotinyourhome!Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。在寒假期間，你作為交換生（exchangestudent）將前往美國(guó)進(jìn)行為期三周的交流活動(dòng)，將被安排在Peter家寄宿。要求考生給寄宿家庭寫一封信，介紹自己的一些情況，告知對(duì)方自己的生活習(xí)慣，并詢問(wèn)注意事項(xiàng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累各種各樣的：various→allkindsof此外：besides→inaddition建議：suggestion→advice對(duì)……挑剔：beparticularabout→bepickyabout2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,I’dliketosaythankyouforyourreceptionduringmystayintheUS.拓展句：Firstly,I’dliketosaythankyouforthereceptionyouwillprovideduringmystayintheUS.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】What’smore,Ilikepets,soit’sOKformeifyourfamilykeepssomepets.(運(yùn)用了so連接的并列句和if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】IbelieveIwillhaveagoodtimeandlearnalotinyourhome!(運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)3．（23-24高三下·江西宜春·階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你校今年開(kāi)設(shè)了蔬菜栽培、傳統(tǒng)工藝（handcraft）等實(shí)踐課程。請(qǐng)你給外國(guó)好友John寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的參與情況；2.你的體會(huì)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。DearJohn,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,Howareyoudoingrecently?Ican’twaittoinformyouoftherelevantdetailsthatwilldefinitelyattractyoualot.Tofosterstudents’correctoutlookonlabor,twocourses,plantingvegetablesandtraditionalhandcraftsareavailabletostudentsineachgradethisyearinourschool.Fullofcuriosity,Itakethesecourses.Makinghandicraftsisoneofmyfavourite,whereIgainedafundamentalglimpseofessentiallifeskillssuchassewingabuttonandknittingascarf.Itwassurelyarewardingexperience,enrichingmyafter-schoollifeandhelpingmeformthegoodhabitoflaboring.Mostofthestudentsarefascinatedbythecoursesbecausetheyofferanalternativetoourbusyschoollife.Notonlycanwegetrelaxedbutalsowecangainahighermoralvalueonlife.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外國(guó)好友John寫一封郵件，告訴他參加學(xué)校今年開(kāi)設(shè)的蔬菜栽培、傳統(tǒng)工藝等實(shí)踐課程的情況以及體會(huì)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累相關(guān)的：relevant→related/relative培養(yǎng)：foster→cultivate肯定地：surely→certainly獲得：gain→obtain/get2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itwassurelyarewardingexperience,enrichingmyafter-schoollifeandhelpingmeformthegoodhabitoflaboring.拓展句：Itwassurelyarewardingexperience,whichenrichesmyafter-schoollifeandhelpsmeformthegoodhabitoflaboring.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Ican’twaittoinformyouoftherelevantdetailsthatwilldefinitelyattractyoualot.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Notonlycanwegetrelaxedbutalsowecangainahighermoralvalueonlife.(運(yùn)用了“notonly...butalso...”連接并列句，且notonly位于句首引出的部分倒裝）4．（23-24高三下·北京·階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三年級(jí)的學(xué)生李華。你校的交換生Tom受邀要去一個(gè)中國(guó)朋友家做客，他發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)一些做客習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容回復(fù)：1.到達(dá)的時(shí)間及禮物；2.中國(guó)餐桌禮儀及含義。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.餐桌禮儀：tablemanners。DearTom,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTom,Iamgladtohearfromyou.KnowingthatyouaregoingtocometoChina,Iamexcited.IwouldliketotellyousomeChinesec