PAGEPAGE1專題14單元話題書面表達(dá)精練精析15篇期中真題+名校模擬Unit1:介紹房間/房子1．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英語老師請同學(xué)們以MyRoom為題寫一篇英語短文。請你根據(jù)下列圖片信息，寫一篇短文描述一下你的房間。要求

(1)70詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入詞總數(shù))；(2)意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；(3)請勿在文中使用真實的姓名和校名。MyRoomHi!MynameisLiHua.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是Kate，剛搬進(jìn)了新家，想給你的筆友Nick介紹你的書房（study），并根據(jù)房間里的全家福介紹你的家庭成員。要求：1.60-80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校等個人信息；3.卷面整潔，書寫工整。參考要點：1.描述房間（至少三句話）；介紹全家福。DearNick,Iwanttotellyousomenews.MyparentsandIareinanewhousenow.Hereismynewstudy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Kate3．假設(shè)圖片是你家客廳（livingroom）的一角,請根據(jù)圖片和提示內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文介紹你家的客廳。提示:1.Whatisinthelivingroom?（至少三種物品）2.Wherearethey?3.Whatcolorarethey?（根據(jù)喜好自由描述）4.Whatdoyoulikedoinginthelivingroom?要求:1.短文須包含提示信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.詞數(shù)60左右,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Look!Hereisapictureofmylivingroom._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．請根據(jù)所給中文提示，以“Mybedroom”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你的臥室。內(nèi)容要點：1.房間不是很大，只有一張床，床的旁邊是書桌；2.床和書桌之間有一把扶手椅（armchair），床下有一些玩具；3.書桌上有一臺電腦和一些書，緊挨著書桌的書架，上面放滿各種不同的書；4.房間很干凈，我很愛我自己的房間。注意事項：1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)在70左右，短文的題目已給出，不計入數(shù)總詞數(shù)。Mybedroom__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unit2:鄰里互助5．請你根據(jù)下表中的提示，以“Mydreamhomeinthedreamneighbourhood”為題，談?wù)勛约豪硐肷鐓^(qū)中的夢想家園。社區(qū)情況社區(qū)很大；鄰居友善；病有人醫(yī)，壞有人修，老有人問，學(xué)有人幫……周圍環(huán)境在一座小山腳下，可以……房子概況兩層，一個花園……內(nèi)部設(shè)施有多個房間、一個大陽臺……要求：1.短文不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.語句通順，意思連貫，字跡工整；3.內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。MydreamhomeinthedreamneighbourhoodMydreamhomeisatthefootofahill.Ithastwofloors.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．請根據(jù)你校?？疶EENSMAG中LETYOURDREAMFLY欄目有關(guān)“Dreamhome,Dreamneighborhood”的英文征稿，寫一篇文章，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,AtTEENSMAGweliketoshareideasaboutanythingyouareinterestedin.Inmycolumn,LETYOURDREAMFLY,youcanletotherstudentsknowwhatyouthink.Thismonth,wewantyoutowriteaboutyourdreamhomeanddreamneighborhood:Whatisyourdreamhomelike?What’saroundyourdreamneighborhood?Dotheneighborshelpeachother?How?Whatdoyouthinkofyourdreamhomeandneighborhood?注意：1.內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Iamgladtosharemyideasaboutmydreamhomeanddreamneighborhood.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．根據(jù)下表提示，以“Mydreamcommunity”為題用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)150左右。概述社區(qū)很大，居民不多設(shè)施花園、運動場(playground)、游泳池……環(huán)境花草樹木多；空氣清新鄰居善良，友好；一些鄰居是志愿者，他們有一技之長，幫人們解決問題；幫老人購物、打掃房屋；幫孩子們學(xué)習(xí)……其他我打算為社區(qū)做點事：（1）……（2）……要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清楚，語句連貫。Mydreamcommunity________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．請根據(jù)以下提示，以“MyNeighborhood”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹你的社區(qū)情況。提示：1.不大，但非常漂亮；2.有個大型游泳池，我每周游泳兩次；abigswimmingpool

twiceaweek3.有個籃球場，經(jīng)常舉辦籃球比賽；havebasketballmatches4.有個大型購物中心，可以買到各種各樣的東西；manykindsofthings5.人們很友好，彼此相互幫助。befriendlytoeachotherMyNeighborhood__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unit3:介紹家鄉(xiāng)9．假如你是李明，來自興化（Xinghua），住在HappinessHome。向你的朋友Simon介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。興化著名的景點有：水上森林景區(qū)（AquaticForestScenicSpot），千島菜花景區(qū)（KurilCauliflowerScenicSpot）。請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇英語短文，詞數(shù)90字左右，要求：包含以下所給要點，可以適當(dāng)拓展；條理清晰，語意連貫；表述準(zhǔn)確，句式靈活，字跡工整。開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。1.Whereisyourhometown?Whatisitlike?2.Whatinterestingplacesinyourhometowndoyoulike?Whatcanpeopledothere?3.Wheredoyoulive?Howareyourneighbours?（舉1—2個例子）4.Whatdoyouwanttosaytovisitors?Hello,I’mLiMing.I’mgoingtoshowyouaroundmyhometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．根據(jù)中文提示，以“Myhometown”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的文章，介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。提示：我的家鄉(xiāng)離南京不遠(yuǎn)，坐公共汽車去南京市中心只要半小時。那里有許多建筑，也有許多綠色植物，非常美麗。那里的污染也比南京市中心少。我喜歡放學(xué)后去公園玩游戲和聊天。我們每天都有許多事情要做。雖然我的家鄉(xiāng)不大，但我非常喜歡我的家鄉(xiāng)。Myhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．以“Myhometown”為題用英語寫一篇80詞左右的文章，包含下列要點并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順。1.鎮(zhèn)江是我的家鄉(xiāng)，一個古老、美麗且現(xiàn)代化的城市。那里有著名的金山、焦山和北固山，還有購物中心、電影院等，鎮(zhèn)江也因美食而聞名。鎮(zhèn)江人勤勞、友好，鄰居之間很友好、互相幫助：2.我住在鎮(zhèn)江市中心的一所公寓里，在火車站的西面，離車站大約500米遠(yuǎn)。你很容易找到；3.我認(rèn)為……Myhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unit4:邀請信/描述路線12．假如你是李華，你的一位美國朋友Jane在中國學(xué)習(xí)中文已有兩年，為祝賀她順利通過考試，學(xué)有所成，并歡送她回國，你和同學(xué)們打算給她舉辦一場歡送會?，F(xiàn)在請你用英文給她發(fā)一封email，邀請她參加歡送會。內(nèi)容提示：1.感謝她對你們英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；2.時間：本周六晚上6點；3.活動：準(zhǔn)備了大量的食物和飲料,你們準(zhǔn)備玩一些游戲；4.地點：陽光俱樂部（theSunClub）302房間；5.路線：在她所住旅館（hotel）的門口乘坐332路公共汽車可直達(dá)。注意事項：1.須包括上述所有內(nèi)容,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使內(nèi)容連貫；2.詞數(shù)70左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：歡送會farewellparty直接地directlyDearJane,Congratulationsonyourpassingalltheexams.IamhappyyouhavemadegreatprogressinyourtwoyearsofstudyinginChina.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwishyousuccessintheyearsahead!Yours,LiHua13．假設(shè)你是LiMing，你的朋友Steve和他的家人想去漢豐湖游玩，請根據(jù)下面的提示，給Steve寫一封信，為他們指明前往的路線，并簡介游玩活動。要求：1.80—120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考要點：1.行走路線：在中心客運站下車后，沿著迎賓街走，在第三個十字路口右轉(zhuǎn)，然后沿著濱湖路直行，濱湖公園在你右手邊，濱湖公園旁邊就是漢豐湖。2.游玩活動：劃船、參觀舉子園、拍照、跳舞、散步、下棋等。3.……參考詞匯：中心客運站：CentralBusStation下車：getoff

舉子園：JuziGarden劃船：goboatingDearSteve,Howisitgoing?I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutHanfengLakeinKaizhou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing14．你的遠(yuǎn)方朋友Kathy想從北京到你所在的海濱城市玩幾天。請根據(jù)以下要點給她寫一封信，告訴她怎樣到你家等內(nèi)容。1.出火車站乘9路公交車至迎賓路社區(qū)；2.你家在社區(qū)中心，即在公交站后邊；3.你家離大海不遠(yuǎn)，可以每天步行去那兒。注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，短文開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearKathy，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Sue15．本周日是你的15歲生日，你想邀請你的同學(xué)們來參加你的生日聚會。請你寫一封80個詞左右的邀請信，信中必須說明到達(dá)你家的路線。要點如下：1.時間：本周日中午12：00開始。地點：你家。內(nèi)容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各類活動。2.路線：走出校門，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三個路口向左轉(zhuǎn)。經(jīng)過中國銀行并穿過人民路，在路的左邊有一幢高樓，你家就在504室。Dearfriends,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jim參考答案：1．例文：MyRoomHi!MynameisLiHua.Lookatthephoto.Thisismyroom.Inmyroom,thereisabed,adeskandachair.They’reallbrown.Thereisacomputeronthedesk.Ioftenplaygamesandwatchmoviesonit.What’sthatunderthedesk?It’smyfootball.Thereisaphotoofmyfamilyonthewall.Ihaveahappyfamily.Myroomisnotverybig,butitistidy.Ilikeitverymuch.【詳解】[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意圍繞“信息提示”，依據(jù)題圖介紹自己的房間。[寫作步驟]第一步，引言（介紹自己的房間）；第二步，依據(jù)題圖介紹房間的擺設(shè)；第三步，總結(jié)全文。[亮點詞匯]①playgames玩游戲②watchmovies看電影③like…verymuch非常喜歡……[高分句型]①Inmyroom,thereisabed,adeskandachair.（使用Therebe句式）②Myroomisnotverybig,butitistidy.Ilikeitverymuch.（使用并列連詞）2．例文DearNick,Iwanttotellyousomenews.MyparentsandIareinanewhousenow.Hereismynewstudy.Ontheleft,youcanseeasofa,andthereisatoydogonit.Itiswhite.Againstthewall,youcanseealargebookcasewithmanybooks.Nearthebookcaseisadesk,thereisacomputeronit.Overthedeskisaphotoofmyfamily.Therearesixpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremygrandparents,myparents,mylittlebrotherandme.IhaveabigfamilyandIloveitverymuch.Yours,Kate【詳解】[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；提示：題干要求介紹書房和全家福，考生要注意認(rèn)真觀察圖片，并運用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言描述圖片的內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹書房的布局；第二步，介紹全家福。[亮點詞匯]①ontheleft在左邊②against靠著③aphotoof一張……的照片[高分句型]Therearesixpeopleinmyfamily.（therebe句型）3．例文：Look!Hereisapictureofmylivingroom.Itisnotbigbutit’sneat.Thereisasofa,atable,achair,abookshelfandsooninit.Thereissomefruitonthetable.Therearemanybooksontheshelf.Thedogisonthesofa.It’swhite.Ilikeplayingwithitinthelivingroom.Thetableandchairsareblack.Thesofaisred.Ilikemylivingroomverymuch.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為看圖作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意將所有提示要點寫完，分別需要寫客廳里的物品、物品的顏色以及你喜歡在客廳里做的事，在寫作時注意be動詞的正確運用。[寫作步驟]第一步，文章開頭已給出，接著用幾個形容詞描述下客廳的整體情況；第二步，描述客廳里面的物品和位置、物品的顏色以及喜歡在客廳做的事；第三步，寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)對客廳的喜愛。[亮點詞匯]①neat干凈的②andsoon等等③verymuch非常④likedoingsth.喜歡做某事[高分句型]①Thereisasofa,atable,achair,abookshelfandsooninit.（Therebe句型）②Ilikeplayingwithitinthelivingroom.(likedoingsth.“喜歡做某事”)4．Onepossibleversion：MybedroomMybedroomisnotverybig.Thereisonlyonebigbed.Besidethebed,thereisadesk.Thereisanarmchairbetweenthebedandthedesk.Therearesometoysunderthebed.Thereisacomputerandsomebooksonthedesk.Thebookshelfisnexttothedesk.Itisfullofdifferentkindsofbooks.Mybedroomisveryclean.Ilovemyownbedroomverymuch.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，介紹自己的臥室的情況，包括物品的擺放情況等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，多用therebe句型，在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。5．例文MydreamhomeinthedreamneighbourhoodMydreamhomeisatthefootofahill.Ithastwofloors.Thereisabeautifulgardenwithdifferentkindsofflowers.Therearemanyroomsandabigbalconyinit.Icanlookoutatthehillandtreesonthebalcony.Mydreamhomeisinaverybigneighbourhoodandtheneighboursarekindtoeachother.Therearemanyvolunteersinmyneighbourhood.Someofthemaredoctors.Theycantakegoodcareofthesickpeople.Ifthereissomethingwrongwithourthings,theengineersherecanhelpusfixthem.Whenwehaveproblemswithourstudy,thecollegestudentswillhelpus.Theyoftenhelptheoldcleantheirhousesanddosomeshopping.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容介紹自己理想社區(qū)中的夢想家園，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹夢想家園的周圍環(huán)境和房子概況；第二步，介紹夢想家園的內(nèi)部設(shè)施；第三步，介紹夢想家園的社區(qū)情況。[亮點詞匯]①differentkindsof各種各樣的②bekindto對某人友好③takegoodcareof好好照顧[高分句型]①Mydreamhomeisinaverybigneighbourhoodandtheneighboursarekindtoeachother.(and連接的并列句)②Ifthereissomethingwrongwithourthings,theengineersherecanhelpusfixthem.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)6．例文Iamgladtosharemyideasaboutmydreamhomeanddreamneighborhood.Mydreamhomecanbesmall,butitmustletmefeelwarm.Ihopemybedroomhasabigwindowtoletinenoughsunlight.IwillkeepsomepetsandplantsthatIlikeathome.

Mydreamcommunitymustbeclean.Thereareflowersandtreesinthecommunitysothatwecanbreathethefreshair.Thereisabigenoughsquareinthecommunityforpeopletoexercise.Theneighborsoftenhelpeachother.Forexample,youngpeopleoftenhelpoldpeopletakeouttherubbish.Ithinkmydreamhomeandneighborhoodaregreat.Inotonlyliketheenvironmenthere,butalsolikethepeoplehere.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，表達(dá)自己想要分享對夢想家園和夢想社區(qū)的想法；第二步，具體闡述自己認(rèn)為的夢想家園和夢想社區(qū)；第三步，最后是敘述自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①letin允許（空氣、光線、水等）進(jìn)入②eachother互相③Forexample例如[高分句型]①IwillkeepsomepetsandplantsthatIlikeathome.

（that引導(dǎo)定語從句）②Thereareflowersandtreesinthecommunitysothatwecanbreathethefreshair.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）7．例文：MydreamcommunityMydreamcommunityisverybig,buttherearen’tmanypeoplelivingthere.Therearelotsoftreesandbeautifulflowersintheneighbourhood，sotheairthereisfresh.Wehaveabiggarden,aswimmingpoolandsomeplaygrounds.Wecanhaveagoodtimeplayingthere.Allmyneighboursareniceandhelpful.Someofthemarevolunteerswithdifferentskills.Ifwehaveanyproblems，theycanhelpus.Theyalsohelpoldpeopledosomeshoppingandcleantheirhouses.Ifchildrenhaveproblemswiththeirlessons,theywillgivethemahelpinghand.Iwilldosomethingsformyneighbourhood.Iamgoingtopickuptherubbishinthecommunitycentre.IfmyneighbourisnotgoodatEnglish，Iwillhelpher/himwithher/hisEnglishafterschool.Mycommunitywillbeagoodplacetolivein.【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。寫作時注意圍繞題目“Mydreamcommunity”展開敘述。內(nèi)容要包括要求中所給的所有要點，缺一不可。內(nèi)容要積極向上，條理要清晰。寫作指導(dǎo)：本文寫作應(yīng)該使用第一人稱。時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。根據(jù)要點提示文章可分為三部分，第一部分描寫社區(qū)的設(shè)施和環(huán)境；第二部分描寫社區(qū)的人；第三部分闡述自己想為社區(qū)出一份力。注意最后一部分應(yīng)有具體做法，因為是打算，這部分應(yīng)用一般將來時。8．Onepossibleversion:MyNeighbourhoodMyneighbourhoodisnotverybigbutbeautiful.Thereisaswimmingpool.Igoswimmingtwiceaweek.Thereisabasketballcourt.Weoftenhavebasketballmatchesthere.Thereisalsoalargeshoppingmall.Wecanbuydifferentkindsofthingsthere.Peoplehereareveryfriendly.Theyoftenhelpeachother.Welcometomyneighbourhood.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料文寫作，根據(jù)題干所給的社區(qū)情況，結(jié)合提示詞進(jìn)行描述；保證內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一和第三人稱為主；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，在寫作時可寫成一個段落，但是要分清層次；第一個層次總述社區(qū)情況；第二層次描述社區(qū)的游泳池、籃球場和購物中心；第三個層次描述社區(qū)的鄰居都很友好，歡迎大家來社區(qū)。9．Onepossibleversion:Hello,I’mLiMing.I’mgoingtoshowyouaroundmyhometown.Xinghuaismyhometown.Itisaverybeautifulcity.Theairhereisveryfresh.EveryyearlotsofplentyofvisitorscometovisitAquaticForestScenieSpotandKurilCauliflowerScenicSpot.Wecansmelltheflowersandhearthebirdssingthere.Iliveinanewneighbourhood.Theneighboursarekindandhelpful.Volunteersoftenhelppeoplewithallkindsofproblems.Theyoftenhelpchildrenwiththeirhomework.Theyhelppeoplecheckthecomputersandfixthebikes.MyfavouriteplaceisBlackTowelPark.ItisinthenorthofXinghua.Itisagoodplacetomeetfriends.Ilikemyhometownverymuch.Welcometomyhometown.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，屬于材料作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的名字和樣子，再介紹你家鄉(xiāng)里你喜歡的一兩個地方，說明在那里可以做什么，介紹你生活的小區(qū)，以及鄰居們是什么樣的人，要列舉具體的事例；第三步，說出你想對游客說的話并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①hearsbdo聽見某人做某事②allkindsof各種[高分句型]Itisagoodplacetomeetfriends.（動詞不定式作定語）10．例文MyhometownMyhometownisnotfarfromNanjing.IttakesonlyhalfanhourtogotothecitycentreofNanjingfrommyhometownbybus.Therearemanybuildingsandgreenplants.Theyarebeautiful.ThepollutionhereislessthanthatinthecentreofNanjing.AfterschoolIlikegoingtotheparktoplaygamesandchatwithmyfriends.Wehavemanythingstodoeveryday.Myhometownisnotbig,butIlikeitverymuch.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，寫作要點提示已經(jīng)給出；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)是“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本文寫作提示已經(jīng)詳細(xì)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并要注意前后連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作的介紹對象是我的家鄉(xiāng)，并介紹地理位置；第二步，具體介紹家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境以及自己喜歡做的事，注意時態(tài)的正確使用以及文章的連貫性；第三步，最后總結(jié)自己對家鄉(xiāng)的喜愛。[亮點詞匯]①farfrom遠(yuǎn)離②inthecentreof在……的中心③chatwithsb和某人聊天[高分句型]①IttakesonlyhalfanhourtogotothecitycentreofNanjingfrommyhometownbybus.（句型ittakes+時間+todosth表示“做某事花費多少時間”）②ThepollutionhereislessthanthatinthecentreofNanjing.（比較級的運用）11．例文：MyhometownMyhometownisZhenjiang.Itisanoldbeautifulcity.Itisalsomodern.Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchasJinshan,JiaoshanandBeigushan,andtheyareveryfamousinChina.Inthecentreofthecity,therearesomeshoppingmalls,cinemasandothertallbuildings.FoodinZhenjiangisverydelicious.Peoplehereareveryfriendlyandhard-working,theneighboursareverykind,andtheyoftenhelpeachother.Iliveinaflatinthecentreofthecity.Itiswestoftherailwaystation.Itisabout500metersfromthere.Youcanfinditeasily.IthinkZhenjiangisgoodplacetovisit.Ihopeyouwillvisitmyhometownsoon.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Myhometown”為題寫一篇介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的文章，根據(jù)所給提示，要求要點覆蓋全面，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充；注意寫作時要點齊全，同時也要緊扣主題。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要用第一人稱。文章開頭已給出，寫作時，注意表達(dá)觀點時的常用句式，內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。12．Onepossibleversion:DearJane,Congratulationsonyourpassingalltheexams.IamhappyyouhavemadegreatprogressinyourtwoyearsofstudyinginChina.ThanksyousomuchforyourhelpwithourEnglishduringyourstudyhere!SowewillholdafarewellpartyforyouinRoom302intheSunClubthisSaturdayevening.Couldyoucomeby6:00p.m.?We’llhaveplentyoffoodanddrinksandplaysomegames.Bytheway,youcantakeNo.332businfrontofyourhotelanditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.Iwishyousuccessintheyearsahead!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求給Jane發(fā)一封電子郵件，邀請她參加歡送會；要求包含所有內(nèi)容提示。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時