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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onmyfirstsummervacationasajuniorhighschoolstudent,Iclimbedmyfirstmountain—afairlygentle3,900-footpeaknearwhereIliveinSurrey,BritishColumbia.IwasoverweightatthetimeandoutofbreathwhenIreachedthesummit.ButIlovedthechallengeofconqueringsomethingbiggerthanmyself.SoonIclimbednearly100peaks.MyparentswerehappyI’dfinallyfoundahobby.IoftenwentclimbingwithmyfriendMelOlsen,whomI’dmetinaFacebookgroup.LastDecember,I,togetherwithMel,cametoOregontotackle11,240-footMountHood.It’ssafertostartwinterclimbsatnightwhenthere’slessriskofthesunmeltingthesnowpack.Thatdaywestartedat3am,followingthepathsalongsidetheskiruns.Thetemperaturewasabout14°F,andweworelayerswecouldeasilyremove,knowingthesportswouldmakeuswarm.Alongtheway,wemettwootherclimbers,andthefourofuscontinuedontogether.Afteraboutfivehours,wereachedDevil’sKitchen,aplateau(高原)atabout10,000feet.Bythispoint,thewindwashowling.Myexposedskinfeltasthoughitwereburning.Theotherclimbersdecidedtoturnback,butMelandIwentahead.Wehadiceaxes,helmets,andcrampons(攀登釘鞋).Wewereinhighspiritsandpreparedfortheclimb.Thetrailwefollowedgrewnarrowerandsteeper.Ataround9am,wereachedaflightoficestep.Itwasaboutthreeorfourfeettallandslopedata75-degreeangle.Ivolunteeredtogofirst.Iplacedmyleftfootontheicestep.ConfidentIwassafe,Iputmyfullweightonit.Suddenly,Iheardacrack,andawholeslaboficebrokeoffthestep,rightundermyfoot.Inaninstant,IfellbackwardbeforeImadeanyresponse.IcouldhearMelcallingmynameinatremblingvoiceasItumbleddown,bouncingofftherockface,androllingdownthemountainasifIwereacharacterinavideogame.Irememberthinking:Thisisit.You’redone.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.__________________________________________________________AsMelmadeherwaydown,Iyelledforhelp,andotherclimberscametomyrescue.———————————————————————————文章大意:這篇文章講述了作者在初中第一個(gè)暑假時(shí)開始爬山的經(jīng)歷。起初他只是嘗試了一座3900英尺的小山,但很快他便愛上了這項(xiàng)挑戰(zhàn),并與朋友梅爾一起攀登了近100座山峰。去年12月,他們挑戰(zhàn)了11240英尺的胡德山。在攀登過程中,作者不慎滑落,但在其他登山者的幫助下被救回。這次驚險(xiǎn)的經(jīng)歷讓他深刻體會(huì)到了登山的危險(xiǎn)性和團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性。伏筆和回應(yīng):伏筆:作者在文章開頭提到自己“overweightatthetimeandoutofbreath”,這為后文他在攀登過程中體力不支和遇到危險(xiǎn)埋下了伏筆?;貞?yīng):在攀登胡德山時(shí),作者的體力問題顯現(xiàn)出來,當(dāng)他滑落時(shí),他“couldhearMelcallingmynameinatremblingvoice”,這顯示了他在攀登過程中的脆弱和對(duì)朋友依賴。伏筆:文章中提到“myparentswerehappyI’dfinallyfoundahobby”,暗示了爬山對(duì)他來說是一種新發(fā)現(xiàn)的愛好,可能缺乏經(jīng)驗(yàn)?;貞?yīng):在攀登過程中,作者的缺乏經(jīng)驗(yàn)導(dǎo)致了他的滑落,這與他剛開始爬山時(shí)的描述形成了呼應(yīng)。伏筆:作者提到“thefourofuscontinuedontogether”,暗示了團(tuán)隊(duì)的力量和團(tuán)結(jié)?;貞?yīng):在作者滑落后,是團(tuán)隊(duì)成員和其他登山者的幫助使他得以獲救,體現(xiàn)了團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):第一段:背景介紹:回憶初次爬山的經(jīng)歷,強(qiáng)調(diào)對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)的熱愛。挑戰(zhàn)升級(jí):描述與朋友梅爾一起攀登胡德山的決定,突出這次攀登的難度和危險(xiǎn)性。準(zhǔn)備過程:提及他們?yōu)榕实撬龅臏?zhǔn)備,包括裝備和策略。遭遇困境:敘述在攀登過程中遇到的極端天氣和艱難路況,為后續(xù)的意外埋下伏筆。第二段:意外發(fā)生:詳細(xì)描述作者在攀登過程中的意外滑落,突出其突然性和危險(xiǎn)性。心理活動(dòng):描寫作者在滑落過程中的心理活動(dòng),包括恐懼和無助。救援行動(dòng):敘述梅爾和其他登山者如何迅速組織救援,展示團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的力量。反思與感悟:作者對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷的反思,認(rèn)識(shí)到自己的不足和團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性,以及對(duì)未來登山活動(dòng)的重新規(guī)劃。參考范文:Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.
Iwasoverwhelmedwithfearandregret.IfonlyIhadbeenmorecareful!Iforcedmyselftocalmdown,pressingmyselfagainsttheslopetoslowdown.Fortunately,afewminuteslater,Icametoastoponashallowincline.Myclotheswereshredded,myhelmetwasbroken,andmyfacewasbloodiedfromcutsandscratches.Imadeanattempttostandupbutinvain.Unabletomoveaninchfurther,Ilayontheiceshiveringandinpain,waitingforrescue.AsMelmadeherwaydown,Iyelledforhelp,andotherclimberscametomyrescue.
Withthemrushingtowardme,Isighedwithreliefandtearsofexcitementblurredmyeyes.Theymadegreateffortstorelievemeofthesuffering.SomeofferedtosplintmylegandsomecalledPortlandMountainRescuewhileMelstayedbymyside,huggingmetightlytokeepmewarmerandlesspainful.SoexperiencedandcomfortingweretheythatIwasnolongerasfrightenedasbefore.Eventually,Iwassenttothehospital.Istayedforalongtime.However,onmyrecovery,withgreatercautionandbetterpreparationsIreturnedonthetrails.Onesliponamountaincanchangeeverythingbutneverstopsmefromdoingmyfavoritethingintheworld.
下水文1Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.Miraculously,myrighthandmanagedtolatchontoasmallrockprotrusion.Thesuddenstopsentajoltofpainthroughmybody,butIwasrelievedtobemomentarilystable.Iclungtotherock,myheartpoundinginmychest,asIlookeduptoseeMel'shorrifiedfacepeeringovertheedgeaboveme.AsMelmadeherwaydown,Iyelledforhelp,andotherclimberscametomyrescue.Theysecuredaropearoundmeandcarefullypulledmebackuptothepath.Thereliefwasimmense,buttheordealwasfarfromover.Westillhadtodescendthemountain,whichwasnowevenmoredauntinggivenmyshakenstate.MelandIexchangedglances,bothknowingthatouradventurehadtakenaturnfortheworse,butalsogratefulforthesecondchancewehadbeengiven.下水文2Istuckoutmyarmsandlegshopelessly,grabbingatanything.Foramoment,Ifelttheterrifyingsensationoffreefall,butthenmyrighthandfoundasmallcreviceintheice.Itwasatenuousgrip,butitwa
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