讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)——無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)Inanimatesubjectincontinuationwriting

人與動(dòng)物類(lèi)aboutanimals喀什市第二十八中學(xué)

王芳Learningobjectivesmastertheconcept,functionandtypesofInanimateSubjectsandusethempoperlyincontinuationwriting(語(yǔ)言能力)beawareoftheunderlyingcultualdifferenceshiddeninInanimateSubjects（文化意識(shí)）learntheskillsofobserving,analyzing,summarizingandwriting（思維品質(zhì)）getinputfromvarioussourceslikemusic,literaryworksandsoontoimproveyourwriting（學(xué)習(xí)能力）Shewashappy.普通句Shewassad.普通句Shewasscared.普通句Shewasangry.普通句(Asenseof)happinesssweptoverher高級(jí)句(Asurgeof)sadnesswashedoverher.高級(jí)句(Awaveof)scarecaughtme.高級(jí)句（Afloodof）angercaughtme.高級(jí)句無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)(InanimateSubject)有靈動(dòng)詞(animateverb)＋Sentencepattern﹦Definition：無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句=無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)+有靈動(dòng)詞“無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)”簡(jiǎn)單理解就是“沒(méi)有生命力”的東西做主語(yǔ)。比如時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，自然現(xiàn)象等。“有靈動(dòng)詞”簡(jiǎn)單理解就是把沒(méi)有生命力的東西賦予有生命力的動(dòng)作。無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)的概念Brainstorm---Howmanyemotionsdoyouknow?sadhappyangrypuzzlednervoussurprizsedAsense/wave/flood/surgeof情感類(lèi)名詞：開(kāi)心快樂(lè)興奮：happiness,joy,delight,excitement焦慮：anxiety絕望：despair興趣：interest驚恐：horror,fear,panic,fright憤怒：anger,rage,fury驚奇驚訝：surprise,astonishment,shock,amazement羞恥羞愧：shame好奇：curiosity悲傷：sorrow,sadness遺憾后悔：regret,guilt,remorse失望沮：disappointment,depression困惑不解：puzzlement,confusion滿意滿足：satisfaction,contentment有靈動(dòng)詞：抓?。篶augt,哽咽：choked洗滌：washdover掃過(guò)：sweptover

②Iopenedthedoor,butthedogwastoofeartoranawayforsafety.我打開(kāi)了門(mén)，但是狗狗害怕的跑開(kāi)了。

sweptoverme.我很擔(dān)心并希望小狗能進(jìn)屋里。

WorryAnxiety

washedoverhim.他焦慮萬(wàn)分，肝腸寸斷③Thebadweatherorthewolveswouldbethedeathofsuchasmallanddefenselessdog.惡劣的天氣和狼群可能會(huì)殺死這個(gè)弱小，沒(méi)防御能力的小狗。Practice2根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示用有靈動(dòng)詞填空(答案不唯一）Istoodbythedoor,anddespair___________mywords.我站在門(mén)口，絕望得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。chokedAwaveofpanic____________him，whenthinkingofwhatthedogmet.想到小狗即將面臨的遭遇，他感到一陣驚慌。sweptover④、Finallythedogfeltcomfortableenoughtoapproachus.最后它感到足夠舒適向我們靠近。Agreatsenseofrelief

himwhenseeingthat.看到這一幕，他深感寬慰。Asurgeofjoy

me.我突然感到一陣喜悅。washedovercaught人狗和諧：作者和作者的丈夫幫助了一條流浪狗的故事（2023年三新聯(lián)盟高二期末）①I(mǎi)spottedaunknowndogthatlostitswayhome.我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一只迷路的流浪狗。Practice1

caughtthedog.小狗悲傷萬(wàn)分。

Sadness

sweptovermyhusband.我丈夫的內(nèi)心充滿困惑。PuzzlementPractice3使用無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句改寫(xiě)句子。Hopeanddelightfloodedover

uswhenwe

headedforthehouse.Excitement

sweptoveruswhenwesawthedagapprochingus.Wewereexcitedwhenwesawthedagapprochingus.Wewerehopefulanddelightedwhenweheadedforthehouse.Delightwashedoverthemandtheylivedahappylifewiththedog.Asenseofrelief

seizedhimwhenhecomeintotheirhouse.

參考范文Hewasrelievedwhenthedogcomeintotheirhouse.Theyfeltquitedelightedandtheylivedahappylifewiththedog.Usinginanimatesubjecttowritedownyourfeelingswhentheyappearedinyourmind.1.RevisetheusageofInanimateSubjectSentenc