continuationwritingLastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解讀故事readforcharacters

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Margarito,Steve,MikeLastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解讀故事readforcharacters

readforplot

readforconflict/problem

readforcharacteristics

readfortheme

LastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解讀故事readforcharacters

readforplot

readforconflict/problem

readforcharacteristics

readfortheme

LastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.

Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:

Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.

Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.EnvironmentEmotionActionweatherStep2

四句確定框架1.主題句（文章最后一句）

Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.

雨雖然很冷，但他的心里卻充滿了前所未有的溫暖。

Outsidethecar,thewindstillhowlingandtherainwhippingagainstthewindow,butthekindnessfromthestrangerswarmedupeverysoul.車外，風(fēng)還在呼嘯，雨打在窗戶上，但陌生人的好意溫暖了每個(gè)人。Step2

四句確定框架2.銜接句（第一段最后一句）

Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Hewasrescuedbythetwokindmen.Step2

四句確定框架3.情感句（確定文章走向）

Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.trappedfearhopeanticipationsafehope：Asparkofhopewaskindledinhisheart.anticipation:HisdespairfadedawayandwasreplacedbyanticipationStep2

四句確定框架4.動(dòng)作句（增加文章畫面感）

Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”遞石頭：靠近：砸窗戶：救人：handedbentdownpickedupgraspeddashedtowardsheldtheropetightlystaredatthemworriedlyapproachedwadedintomadehiswayglancedaroundleanedbackhammeredagainst

threwtherockbrokethewindowitcrackedandbrokeandbecomepieceshewasrescuedhewaspulledoutandtakentothedeliveryvehicleStep3

三回扣1.回扣原文細(xì)節(jié)（對(duì)應(yīng)原文內(nèi)容）

天氣：Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.

Suddenly,alightningshoneandthesoundoftherainbecameloud.TheheavyrainmadeStevetoodifficulttomove.

環(huán)境：Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.Stevewadedintothemuddycreek.情感：Worriedaboutherson’ssafety."Areyouhomeyet?Everything'sgood?"Hismother'sanxiousvoicecameover.Step2

四句確定框架1.主題句（文章最后一句）2.銜接句（第一段最后一句）3.情感句（確定文章走向）4.動(dòng)作句（增加文章畫面感）

trappedfearhopeanticipationsafehandedapproachedbrokethewindowhewasrescued應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架1.情感句（確定文章走向）2.動(dòng)作句（增加文章畫面感）MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架1.情感句（確定文章走向）2.動(dòng)作句（增加文章畫面感）MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.berescuedthanksrelievedregretedtearedansweredreachedouthispocketpickedupthephonehearingUponhearingcouldn'tcontrolhimselftookadeepbreathcomfort應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.heansweredthephone.應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.heansweredthephone.1.情感句（確定文章走向）berescuedthanksrelieved/nervoustearedmerrymotherconcernedworkersnervous:Withtremblinghands,concerned:Uponhearingtheconcernedvoice./Hismother'sanxiousvoicecameover.teared:hiseyeswereglisteningwithhisheld-backtearsmerry:Stevedissolvedintolaughter,hiseyesgleamedwithmerriment./

Her

eyestwinkled

withmerrimentnervous:Withtremblinghands,concerned:Uponhearingtheconcernedvoice./Hismother'sanxiousvoicecame

over.teared:hiseyeswereglisteningwithhisheld-backtearsmerry:Stevedissolvedintolaughter,hiseyesgleamedwithmerriment./

Her

eyestwinkled

withmerrimenthope：Asparkofhopewaskindledinhisheart.anticipation:Hisdespairfadedawayandwasreplacedbyanticipation環(huán)境描寫：alightningshoneandthesoundoftherainbecameloud應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.heansweredthephone.2.動(dòng)作句（增加文章畫面感）answeredreachedouthispocketpickedupthephoneheardUponhearingcouldn'tcontrolhimselftookadeepbreathcomfortreachedintodrewoutansweredexpressapproachedclutchedgazedathuggedtookoutscribbled1.bentdown彎腰2.pickedup撿起3.grasped抓住4.dashedtowards沖5.handedthestone遞石頭6.heldtheropetightly緊緊的抓住石頭7.staredatthemworriedly他擔(dān)心地盯著他們8.wadedintothewater趟進(jìn)水里9.madehiswayto前往10.glancedaround環(huán)顧四周11.leanedback向后傾斜12.hammeredagainst擊打

13.threwtherock扔石頭14.itcrackedandbrokeandbecomepieces它裂了，碎了，變成了碎片15.hewaspulledoutandtakentothedeliveryvehicle他被拉了出來(lái)，帶到送貨車上16.reachedintohispocket,drewoutthephoneandansweredthecall把手