閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Janewasstillasleep

whenthephoneranginthelivingroom.Sheopenedhersleepyeyesandlookedattheclockonthetable.Itwasalreadynineo’clock!AlthoughJanewasstillverysleepy,sheknewshehadtogetupbecausehermotherwasworkinginherofficeandshecouldn’texpectheryoungerbrotherTom,whowasalwayssleepinglikeapig,toanswerthephone.Shequicklyputonacoatandrantothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthephone,ontheotherendcamethewarmgreeting,“Goodmorning!”Itwasfromherfather,whowasasailor

andrarelycamehome.Suddenly,Jane’ssleepinessdisappeared.Borninto

anot-so-richfamily,JaneandTomfeltthestressoflife,buttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudentsandtookpartinvariousafter-schoolactivities.Theyweretheprideofthefamily.“Goodmorning,Dad.Whyare

youcalling

ussoearlyontheweekend?”Janesaid,

pretending

tobeannoyed.“TomandIhavebeenverynicerecently.”“Mydear,todayisyourmother’sbirthday,andIhaveorderedacakeonlineanditwillbesenttoourhomelatethisafternoon.Doremembertotakethecake.

Itismysurpriseforyourmother.”Hearingherfather’swords,Janefeltalittleashamed.Howcouldsheforgethermother’sbirthday?Whileshewaschattingwithherfather,Janelookedaroundtheroomandsawalotofdirtyclothesonthesofa.Thefloorhadnotbeencleanedfordays,sincehermotherhadbeenatworkallweek.Shelookedattheclockagainandwassurethatshestillhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforhermother.“Well,Dad,nowI’mgoingtowakeTomup.WewillgiveMumasurprise,too!”Janesaidandhungupthephone.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式作答。JanehurriedtoTom’sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：簡在周六早上九點被電話鈴聲吵醒，得知是很少回家的父親來電，原來是母親生日，父親訂了蛋糕下午送達(dá)。簡發(fā)現(xiàn)家中臟亂，便打算給母親一個驚喜，隨后她叫醒湯姆并分享計劃。故事山分析：開端：簡被電話吵醒，得知母親生日及父親的安排。發(fā)展：簡叫醒湯姆并商量計劃，兩人開始行動打掃房間并準(zhǔn)備禮物。高潮：母親下班回家。結(jié)局：簡和湯姆為母親慶祝生日。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：伏筆1：簡看到客廳沙發(fā)上的臟衣服和未打掃的地板?；貞?yīng)：在續(xù)寫中簡和湯姆會認(rèn)真打掃房間，讓房間煥然一新，給母親一個整潔的環(huán)境。伏筆2：簡說要給母親一個驚喜?；貞?yīng)：他們會制作手工禮物或者準(zhǔn)備特別的晚餐等作為驚喜內(nèi)容。伏筆3：湯姆總是睡得像頭豬?；貞?yīng)：簡叫醒湯姆時可能會有些困難，但湯姆醒來后積極參與準(zhǔn)備。伏筆4：簡和湯姆是優(yōu)秀學(xué)生且參加各種課外活動?；貞?yīng)：他們可能利用在課外活動中學(xué)到的技能來準(zhǔn)備生日驚喜，比如繪畫制作賀卡或者烹飪技能準(zhǔn)備晚餐。伏筆5：父親很少回家。回應(yīng)：母親生日時父親雖未親自到場，但通過訂蛋糕和簡與湯姆的準(zhǔn)備讓母親感受到家庭的完整與溫暖。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：簡匆忙趕到湯姆房間，叫醒他并告知計劃。湯姆起初有些不情愿，但在簡的勸說下迅速起身。他們先把臟衣服清洗干凈，然后認(rèn)真打掃房間的每個角落，擦拭家具、清掃地板。接著，他們發(fā)揮創(chuàng)意，用彩紙和畫筆制作了精美的生日賀卡，還從零花錢里拿出一部分去買了母親喜歡的鮮花。簡利用在手工課上學(xué)到的技巧，編織了一個小巧的手鏈，湯姆則負(fù)責(zé)整理客廳的物品，把房間布置得溫馨而漂亮。第二段：“Happybirthday,Mum!”簡和湯姆喊道。母親走進(jìn)家門，被眼前的景象驚呆了。干凈整潔的房間，散發(fā)著芬芳的鮮花，還有孩子們親手制作的禮物。她的眼中閃爍著感動的淚花，依次擁抱了簡和湯姆，夸贊他們的懂事和貼心。隨后，一家人圍坐在餐桌旁，享用著簡單卻充滿愛的晚餐，等待著父親訂的蛋糕送達(dá)。這個生日雖然父親缺席，但簡和湯姆的努力讓母親感受到了濃濃的家庭溫暖，也讓他們更加懂得珍惜家人和家庭的幸福。情感線：

從簡最初被電話吵醒的慵懶，到得知母親生日后的些許愧疚，接著叫醒湯姆時的堅定，在準(zhǔn)備過程中充滿期待，最后母親回家時的喜悅與自豪，情感逐漸升溫，展現(xiàn)了家庭親情的溫暖與力量。故事線：周六早上簡被電話吵醒，得知母親生日。簡叫醒湯姆并分享計劃。簡和湯姆打掃房間、制作禮物、購買鮮花等準(zhǔn)備驚喜。母親下班回家。簡和湯姆為母親慶祝生日，母親感動。一家人等待蛋糕，享受家庭溫暖。主旨升華句：Familyisahavenoflove,wherealittleeffortcancreateaseaofwarmth.（家庭是愛的港灣，一點小小的努力就能創(chuàng)造出一片溫暖的海洋。）Intheembraceoffamily,everyactofloveisapricelesstreasure.（在家庭的懷抱里，每一個愛的舉動都是無價之寶。）Thebondoffamilyisstrengthenedbythesimplestactsofkindnessandthoughtfulness.（家庭的紐帶因最簡單的善意和體貼行為而更加牢固。）Abirthdayinthefamilyisnotjustacelebrationofage,butareaffirmationofloveandtogetherness.（家庭中的生日不僅僅是對年齡的慶祝，更是對愛與團(tuán)聚的再次確認(rèn)。）Truefamilyloveliesinthedetails,inthesurpriseswecreateandthememoriesweshare.（真正的家庭之愛在于細(xì)節(jié)，在于我們創(chuàng)造的驚喜和分享的回憶。）寫作示范一：JanehurriedtoTom’sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.Tomrubbedhissleepyeyesandgrumbledabit,butwhenherealizeditwasfortheirmother’sbirthday,hejumpedoutofbed.Theystartedbytidyingupthelivingroom,foldingtheclothesneatlyandvacuumingthefloor.Thentheyrummagedthroughtheirartsuppliesandmadeabeautifulcollagewithpicturesofthefamily.Tomwroteaheartfeltpoemonapieceofpaperanddecorateditwithdrawings.Janefoundsomecandlesandplacedthemaroundtheroom.Theyalsomadeasimplebutdeliciousmealwiththeingredientsinthefridge.“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor.Theirmotherwasspeechlesswithsurprise.Thesightofthecleanroom,thelovelygiftsandthewarmatmospherebroughttearstohereyes.Shehuggedherchildrentightlyandkissedthemontheirforeheads.Astheysatdowntoeat,shekeptexpressinghergratitude.Thefamilyspentabeautifuleveningtogether,filledwithloveandlaughter.Althoughtheirfatherwasaway,theloveinthefamilywaspalpable,andthisbirthdaybecameamemorableoneforallofthem.寫作示范二：JanehurriedtoTom’sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.Tomwasabitslowtowakeup,butonceheunderstood,hebecameenthusiastic.Theyfirstclearedtheclutterfromthelivingroomandscrubbedtheflooruntilitshone.Thentheyusedtheircraftskillstomakeabirthdaycrownfortheirmother.Janesewedsomebeadsontoaheadband,andTomaddedpaperflowers.Theyalsobakedsomecookies,eventhoughtheywereabitlumpy.Theyarrangedthecookiesonaplateandputitonthetablewiththehandmadecards.“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor.Theirmotherwasoverjoyed.Shewasdeeplytouchedbytheeffortsofherchildren.Theroomlookedsoinviting,andthegiftsweresofulloflove.Shesatdownandletthechildrenputthecrownonherhead.Theyallsataroundthetable,sharingthecookiesandtalkingabouttheirday.Thisbirthdaywasareminderofthepoweroffamilyloveandhow,evenintheabsenceofonemember,theotherscouldcreateabeautifulandlovingcelebration.參考范文JanehurriedtoTom’sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.

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