高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)歲月困境中，收獲鄰里善意之光1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文StevenGreenwasahard-workingmanwhoworkedallhislifetosupporthisfamily.Heneverfinishedcollege,sohehadtotakehardlaborjobsaroundtheneighborhood.Heworkedasabuilderandacarpenterthroughtheyears.Heoftenhelpedhisneighborswheneverhewasneeded.However,ashegrewolder,hecouldnolongerdothesejobs.Hiskneesgrewweak,andhishealthconditionmadeitdifficultforhimtodohardwork.Steven’skidsdidn’tliveinthesamestateashimandcouldonlysendhimasmallsumofmoneybecausetheyalsoledapoorlife.Unfortunately,Stevenexperiencedconstantphysicalpainafteryearsofhardwork,andheneededtotakemedicineeveryday.Themoneyofferedbyhiskidswasonlyenoughforfood,andhissavingsweresmall.Realizingthatheneededmoremoney,Stevendecidedtogetajobagain.Heeventuallyfoundajobasadoorkeeper.Atfirst,hissalarywasenoughtopayforthegroceriesandthemedicineheneeded.However,duetohisadvancedage,hestartedtoneedmoremedicine,whichcostalot.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Topaythegrowingbills,Stevenbegantotakeitemsfromhishometoasecond-handstoretogetsomemoney.Oneday,ashewascarryinganoldradiotothestore,hisneighbor,Ben,sawhim.“Mr.Green,it’ssogoodtoseeyou!Howhaveyoubeen?”Benasked.“I’mdoinggreat.I’mjustsellingsomestuffathomethatIdon’tneedanymoreforsomecash.Beingweakisterriblewhenyou’reold,sotakecareofyourselfwhenyouareyoung,alright?”hesaidalmostjokingly.Bennodded.“Thanksforthetip,Mr.Green!”hesaidbeforewavinggoodbye.Thatsameday,Stevenwascookingdinnerwhenheheardthedoorbellring.Notexpectinganyone,hewalkedcuriouslytothedoor.5段首句Paragraph1：Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms.Paragraph2：“Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,”Steventhought.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8文章講述了史蒂文?格林一生辛勤工作，因未完成大學(xué)學(xué)業(yè)，長(zhǎng)期從事體力勞動(dòng)。隨著年齡增長(zhǎng)，身體狀況惡化，無(wú)法再勝任重活。他的孩子們生活貧困，只能給予少量經(jīng)濟(jì)支持。為支付日益增長(zhǎng)的醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，史蒂文在做門(mén)衛(wèi)之余，還變賣(mài)家中物品。一天，鄰居本看到他拿著舊收音機(jī)去二手店，之后本帶著一件夾克來(lái)訪，留下了一張大額支票，幫助史蒂文緩解經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:

Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms.出乎意料的是，他看到本身穿夾克站在門(mén)口。本笑著說(shuō)：“格林先生，最近天氣轉(zhuǎn)涼了，我清理衣柜時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)這件夾克，您穿上肯定暖和。”史蒂文心里一暖，忙把本請(qǐng)進(jìn)屋。本進(jìn)屋后，隨意地打量著房間，留意到桌上擺放的各類(lèi)藥品，眼神中閃過(guò)一絲擔(dān)憂(yōu)。他詢(xún)問(wèn)史蒂文的生活近況，史蒂文雖不想讓本擔(dān)心，只是輕描淡寫(xiě)地說(shuō)還過(guò)得去。本卻察覺(jué)到史蒂文話語(yǔ)背后的艱難。臨走時(shí)，本緊緊握住史蒂文的手，真誠(chéng)地說(shuō)道：“格林先生，您要是有啥難處，可一定要跟我說(shuō)。”然后匆匆離開(kāi)。史蒂文站在門(mén)口，望著本離去的背影，心中滿(mǎn)是感動(dòng)。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：“Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,”Steventhought.“本肯定是忘了夾克口袋里的支票?！笔返傥男南?。當(dāng)他打開(kāi)支票，看到上面的金額時(shí)，整個(gè)人愣住了。那是一筆足以支付他好幾個(gè)月醫(yī)藥費(fèi)的巨款。史蒂文簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信自己的眼睛，內(nèi)心五味雜陳。他深知這筆錢(qián)對(duì)自己意味著什么，可又覺(jué)得受之有愧。第二天，史蒂文懷揣著支票來(lái)到本的家，想要把支票還回去。本堅(jiān)決不收，認(rèn)真地說(shuō)：“格林先生，這么多年來(lái)，您為大家做了太多。現(xiàn)在您有困難，我們幫您是應(yīng)該的。”史蒂文聽(tīng)后，眼眶濕潤(rùn)，最終他滿(mǎn)含感激地收下了這份沉甸甸的善意，深刻體會(huì)到善有善報(bào)的道理。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms.“Mr.Green,it'sgettingcoldthesedays.Ifoundthisjacketwhilecleaningmycloset.I'msureit'llkeepyouwarm,”Bensaidwithawarmsmile.StevenwasdeeplytouchedandinvitedBenin.Afterenteringtheroom,Bencasuallyglancedaroundandnoticedthevariousmedicinesonthetable.Hiseyesshowedahintofworry.HeaskedStevenabouthisrecentlife.AlthoughStevendidn'twanttoworryBenandjustsaidthateverythingwasokay,Bencouldsensethehardshipbehindhiswords.Beforeleaving,BenfirmlyheldSteven'shandandsaidsincerely,“Mr.Green,ifyouhaveanydifficulties,youmusttellme.”Thenheleftinahurry.Standingatthedoor,StevenwatchedBen'sdepartingfigure,filledwithgratitude.13范文呈現(xiàn)“Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,”Steventhought.Whenheunfoldedthecheckandsawtheamountonit,hewascompletelystunned.Itwasalargesumofmoneythatwasenoughtocoverhismedicalexpensesforseveralmonths.Stevencouldhardlybelievehiseyes,andhisheartwasfilledwithmixedemotions.Heknewwhatthismoneymeanttohim,buthealsofeltthathedidn'tdeserveit.Thenextday,StevenwenttoBen'shousewiththecheck,intendingtoreturnit.Benfirmlyrefusedtotakeitbackandsaidseriously,“Mr.Green,you'vedonesomuchforallofusovertheyears.Nowthatyou'reintrouble,it'sourturntohelpyou.”Withtearsinhiseyes,Stevenfinallyacceptedthisheavy-heartedkindness,deeplyrealizingthatkindnessalwayspaysoff.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms."Mr.Green,astheweatherturnschilly,Ithoughtthisjacketmightbringyousomewarmth,"Benremarked,agenuinesmilegracinghisface.TouchedbyBen'sthoughtfulness,Stevenwelcomedhiminside.Onceintheroom,Ben'seyescasuallysweptacrossthespace,quicklylandingonthearrayofmedicationsonthetable,hisexpressionbetrayingatingeofconcern.HeinquiredaboutSteven'swell-being,towhichSteven,reluctanttoburdenBen,downplayedhisstruggles.However,Bensawthroughthefacade.Ashepreparedtoleave,BengraspedSteven'shandfirmly,sayingearnestly,"Mr.Green,shouldyoueverneedanything,don'thesitatetoreachout."Withthat,hehurriedoff.Steven,standingatthethreshold,watchedBen'sretreatingform,aprofoundsenseofgratitudeswellingwithinhim.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)"Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,"Stevenmused.Whenheunfoldedthecheckandbeheldtheamount,hewasrenderedspeechless,hiseyeswideningindisbelief.Itwasasubstantialsum,morethansufficient