PAGE1考點(diǎn)15英語作文中詞匯的升級課前熱身練（2023春·上?！?fù)旦附中校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelow.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，學(xué)校學(xué)生會近日打算策劃一次促進(jìn)學(xué)生心理健康的活動，并向全校同學(xué)征集活動方案。請向?qū)W生會投稿，給出你的活動創(chuàng)意和如此設(shè)計(jì)的原因。注意：作文中不得出現(xiàn)你本人的姓名、班級及學(xué)校等真實(shí)信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamgladtohearthattheStudentUnionisplanninganactivitytopromotestudents’mentalhealthrecently.Iamwritingtomakesomesuggestionsofmyown.Wecanorganizealectureonmentalhealthcounseling.Wecaninvitementalhealtheducationexpertstogivethemelecturestohelpstudentslearntoexpressthemselvesinanappropriateway,enhancetheirsenseofgratitude,andunderstandhowtocommunicate.Ithinkthatinthisway,wewillfaceotherswithoptimism,humorandpositiveattitude,improveinterpersonalcommunicationabilityandestablishapositiveandharmonious“sunshineattitude”.Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities.Provideon-siteanswerstostudents’psychologicalproblemsandconfusionencounteredindailylifethroughface-to-faceconsultation.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.

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LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放性作文。要求考生向?qū)W生會投稿，提出你對促進(jìn)學(xué)生心理健康的活動的創(chuàng)意并介紹原因。【詳解】1.詞匯積累高興的：glad→happy建議：suggestion→advice此外：besides→what’smore有幫助的：helpful→useful2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities.拓展句：Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities,whichcanhelpstudentssolveexistingproblems.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IamgladtohearthattheStudentUnionisplanninganactivitytopromotestudents’mentalhealthrecently.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Ithinkthatinthisway,wewillfaceotherswithoptimism,humorandpositiveattitude,improveinterpersonalcommunicationabilityandestablishapositiveandharmonious“sunshineattitude”.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）核心考點(diǎn)梳理（一）使用萬能單詞萬能單詞不用并不影響句子，但用上確能給句子增添一點(diǎn)色彩。故每篇文章都可以用一兩個(gè)，可放句首或be動詞、助動詞、情態(tài)動詞之后，實(shí)義動詞之前。詞義萬能單詞例句毫無疑問undoubtedly；unquestionablyUndoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably/surely,extracurricularactivities

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原句：Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.拓展句：Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted,whichshouldarouseourattention.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）【高分句型2】What’smore,weshouldattachimportancetoourvisualhealthandcontrolthetimespentonelectronicdevices.（運(yùn)用了“spentonelectronicdevices”過去分詞作后置定語，修飾名詞“thetime”）2．你校在學(xué)生中開展調(diào)查，想了解學(xué)生對藝術(shù)鑒賞ArtAppreciation這門課程是否感興趣。請寫一篇短文，給你校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．描述圖表(chart);2．試分析產(chǎn)生該結(jié)果的原因;3．你的看法。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。AsurveyonArtAppreciation___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:AsurveyonArtAppreciationAccordingtothechart,moststudentsareveryinterestedinArtAppreciationandthepercentageis67.24percentofthestudentsfairlylikeit,whileonly9percentdislikeit.Thereareavarietyofreasonsfortheresult.Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinteresting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.What’smore,studentsarenowencouragedtolearnit.Inmyopinion,theresultofthesurveyisagoodbeginning.Sinceartappreciationhasplayedavitalroleinourlife,theimportanceofartappreciationcanneverbeover-emphasized.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)圖表了解學(xué)生對藝術(shù)鑒賞ArtAppreciation這門課程是否感興趣，內(nèi)容包括：描述圖表、分析產(chǎn)生該結(jié)果的原因及你的看法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累各種各樣的：avarietyof→various此外：what’smore→besides結(jié)果：result→consequence重要：importance→significance2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinteresting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.拓展句：Forinstance,whathasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinterestingisthemulti-mediaapproachtoteaching,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinteresting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.（運(yùn)用了notonly…butalso…連接的并列句）【高分句型2】Sinceartappreciationhasplayedavitalroleinourlife,theimportanceofartappreciationcanneverbeover-emphasized.（運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）3．假定你是李華，學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在開展以TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPads為題的討論，你在校園展開了調(diào)查?，F(xiàn)請你給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)生對使用iPad的態(tài)度及原因;2.你的看法及建議。對使用iPad的態(tài)度原因你的看法與建議40%的人表示支持1.用iPad進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí);2.用iPad娛樂;聽音樂，放松心情?！?0%的人表示反對1.濫用iPad會影響他人;2.沉迷于iPad會影響學(xué)習(xí)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPadsItiswellknownthatthereareadvantagesanddisadvantagesofusingiPads.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPadsItiswellknownthatthereareadvantagesanddisadvantagesofusingiPads.Inarecentinvestigationofstudentsoncampus,40%ofrespondentsexpressedsupportforusingiPadsforlearningandforentertainmentpurposes,suchaslisteningtomusictorelax.Theother60%wereopposedtousingiPadsduetoconcernsaboutthenegativeimpactonothersandthepotentialforiPadstobecomeasourceofdistractionfromstudying.Despitethisdivisionofopinion,itisclearthatiPadscanbeusefultoolsforlearningandentertainment.However,itisimportanttousethemresponsiblyandnotattheexpenseofothersorone'sowneducation.Therefore,mysuggestionistoencourageabalanceintheuseofiPads,bysettingguidelinesforwhenandhowtheycanbeused.Forexample,iPads,whichcouldbeusedforalimitedamountoftimeeachdayandonlyforcertainactivitiesthatsupportlearning,suchastakingnotesoraccessingeducationalapps.Inconclusion,whilethereareadvantagesanddisadvantagestousingiPads,responsibleusecanleadtoapositiveandproductivelearningexperience.Itisuptousasindividualstomakewisechoicesandstrikeabalancebetweenusingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidingnegativeimpactsonourselvesandothers.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofUsingiPads為題給學(xué)校英文報(bào)投稿。【詳解】1.詞匯積累調(diào)查：survey→investigation影響：impact→effect盡管：Despite→Although鼓勵(lì)：encourage→inspire2.句式拓展同義句替換原句：Itisuptousasindividualstomakewisechoicesandstrikeabalancebetweenusingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidingnegativeimpactsonourselvesandothers.同義句：Asindividuals,wehavetheresponsibilitytomakesmartdecisionsandmaintainabalancebetweenutilizingtechnologyforourbenefitandavoidinganydetrimentaleffectsitmayhaveonusorothers.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Despitethisdivisionofopinion,itisclearthatiPadscanbeusefultoolsforlearningandentertainment.(運(yùn)用了Despite引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，that引導(dǎo)主語從句，it做形式主語)【高分句型2】Forexample,iPads,whichcouldbeusedforalimitedamountoftimeeachdayandonlyforcertainactivitiesthatsupportlearning,suchastakingnotesoraccessingeducationalapps.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)4．五一國際勞動節(jié)快要到了，為了增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的勞動意識和培養(yǎng)他們的實(shí)踐技能，你校將開設(shè)勞動課，并對學(xué)生喜歡的勞動課內(nèi)容及原因進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表，請你以“LaborCoursesinOurSchool”為題用英語寫一篇短文，給你校的英語報(bào)投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.描述圖中信息；2.介紹學(xué)生選擇的原因。寫作要求：1.不要逐條翻譯；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)100左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文：LaborCoursesinOurSchoolMayDayiscoming.Aimingtostrengthenstudents’awarenessoflaboranddeveloptheirpracticalskills,ourschoolwilloffervariouslaborcourses.Accordingtothesurveythatourschoolmade,differentpeoplehavedifferentchoicesabouttheirfavoritelaborcourses.Asthechartshows,50%studentslikeplantingmost,becauseitoffersthemopportunitiestoendurehardshipsandgetclosetonature.Besides,theplantingprocesscanbringthemasenseofsatisfactionandachievement.35%studentslikecleaningmost,becausetheythinktheycanhelptheirparentsdosomehouseworkbycleaning.5%studentschoosecooking,whichtheythinkisagoodwaytorelax.Somestudentshaveotherchoicesandtheirownreasons.Inaword,allthecoursescanarousestudents’interestinlabor,andmakethemwell-roundedstudents.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)圖表信息，以“LaborCoursesinOurSchool”為題寫一篇短文給英語報(bào)投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累到來：come→drawnear忍受：endure→bear/stand此外：besides→inaddition總之：inaword→inshort全面發(fā)展的：well-rounded→well-developed2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Aimingtostrengthenstudents’awarenessoflaboranddeveloptheirpracticalskills,ourschoolwilloffervariouslaborcourses.拓展句：Ourschoolwilloffervariouslaborcoursessothatstudents’awarenessoflaborwillbestrengthenedandtheirpracticalskillswillbedeveloped.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】35%studentslikecleaningmost,becausetheythinktheycanhelptheirparentsdosomehouseworkbycleaning.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句和省略that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)【高分句型2】5%studentschoosecooking,whichtheythinkisagoodwaytorelax.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)5．近日，你校英語報(bào)擬介紹學(xué)生課外體育鍛煉的情況。請你結(jié)合圖表信息，以“PhysicalExerciseAfterClass”為題寫一篇英語短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.課外體育鍛煉情況描述；2.簡單評論；3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。PhysicalExerciseAfterClass_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:PhysicalExerciseAfterClassRecently,asurveyonstudents’after-classphysicalexercisehasbeenconductedamongstudentsinourschool.Theresultsareasfollows.Morethanhalfofthestudents,about65%,chooserunningastheirregularformofexercise,whileonly15%wouldplaybasketballafterclass.Meanwhile,badmintonispreferredby40%oftheparticipants,followedbybasketball,whichattracts20%ofthestudents.Asforthereasons,itislikelythatrunningrequireslessonequipmentandfield